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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Chapter 14-

I Love it... I love it... If I had written/imagined... if this was my story this is exactly how I would have envisioned it. it is so real it is making me go bonkers...

you have poured all emotions and I am absolutely enraptured...I just dont want these updates to ever end... wondering what will happen next, can just make my heart skip a beat...

you are getting better with each update with each story of your...

👏👏👏

Chapter 15 beginning is just awesome... You are so awesome...😊

Is Rags going to tell Kalps any time soon about his revenge? I mean it is difficult for her to grasp it since she is the one who has to bear the brunt.

this has to get bit more twisted or prolonged to get back on track or it seems too soon.

what will be Rags next step... how will Kamla get hurt... coz right now I feel only for Kalps.

can Rags twist a situation in such a way that kalpi feels better but kamla gets a heart attack??

A weekend trip, some emergency, logical something which indicates something special for Kalpi but a reverse for Kamla.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 11 years ago

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Question
Chapter 14
Moments later, unable to take it anymore, tears in her eyes she whispers, "please", refusing to say anymore. Ragav looks at her, dying to be inside her, knows that she will not say anymore

what does PLEASE refers here
if she wanted that or not

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Question
Chapter 14
Moments later, unable to take it anymore, tears in her eyes she whispers, "please", refusing to say anymore. Ragav looks at her, dying to be inside her, knows that she will not say anymore

what does PLEASE refers here
if she wanted that or not

Coz she sort of rejected him and said she was not interested, he knows she is attracted him and wants him, so be used that against her and basically wanted her to voice it that she wanted him to make love to her... In the end she relented,by saying please... So basically yes she wanted him.

Hope I have answered the question

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

And. .. sweetcherry.. r u going to continue with ur SS His Slave???
I am loving that one too..!! hence just asking...

Tried PMing u same.. but lol.. it seems that u have exceeded maximum PMs u can recieve.. 😕😕😕 hence asking u here.. :)

I m going to continue it nd I hv emptied my inbox 😆

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lovely

@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95
Insensitive raghav ...I was expecting such kind of coldness from kalpi
Rest I will comment later muah

Hi, please update your FF ' the slave'. I really like it. I hope you will not stop it like other writers.

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

I m going to continue it nd I hv emptied my inbox 😆

Thanks... that gives me sort of assurance.. am not going to lose RagNa yet..!!! 😆

and..
Angel.. please do continue soon..!! :)

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

Pls update and does rags reveal that they are married to kalpi. I m anxious to find out when he reveals it to her.

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midhu_na

@midhu_na

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Hey angelpureness..caught up lately.
Pretty commendable work ya...I enjoyed reading all the parts :)

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Angel!! This is amazing! Damn!! So much emotions being unfold! One true the other just hate to accept it! I love your way with words! Love it! Come on, update soon!!