The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 96

Originally posted by: abxetz

Hi charu how are you dear? Update is superb. Air gisthara raghav Sammy ko clear kardethe hair ki WO kalpi se kuch chupana nahi chahtha.kalpi gussai mai raghav ko coffee dekar Kathi hai vote part bohath natural laga. And vo flash back scene jisthara rags kalpi ko dress pehnathe hair o god iam 😳 😳 . acha kiya kalpi nai sonal se jhoot nahi bola andsonal understands things immediately as a good friend. Pakhi paagal 😡 ko bath samjab bhi du to vo selfish awrath kabhi ragnas ki pyar ko nahi samjegi.ulta kalpi ko tespohchawgi 😡 .Ragna ki office romance 😳 and jealous rags is superb. And hope ki aap apni break jalthi katham karegi. And your very talented writer vo romance ho revenge ho emotions ho Sab mai chahath touch tho rahtha hai .By dear 😛 😛

Originally posted by: sugandhii

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m late😭 shall Unres pdne K baad😆

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what an update

aha m thaK gae emoticons add kr kr ke😆 bcz is double dhamaka m sab kch th...

well done charu👏👏

M speechles😛s but still I've to tell what I lyk or what not but actually I lyk everything... so let me start my comment😉

Thanks 😆

Part 23

OhK. .. so she is angry with him bcz of paakhi😲 perfect husband he is... Aww he told her everything aww gr8 oor say perfect wife she is she knowS him vry well😆😉 yes they both know each other very well. 😃

I love raghav's every dialogue which he said to sammy about kalpi starts from she is my wife my soul mate to I'll be unable to love... I was in complete Aww seen a so lovable husband Awwsh I just love this raghav😳😳 I am glad, I wanted people to love this Raghav. 😃 and to make him as close as possible to the way Raghav Singhania's character was originally in the show; and should have been shown later on also. 😳 I feel happy and relieved. 😃

n wait I forgot something pakhi's newspaper Adventure😆🤣

Brilliant👏

LOL, glad you loved that line. 😆😃

Now coming to caring kalpi her silent anger to d girl for serving coffee to her husband on time n she takes d charge in her own hand😉 Yes, loving wife which she is. 😃

n then Dhan te Nan her angry eyes made raghav gulps😆😆 lovely... m loving sammy to d way he ask y bhabhi angry with me.. hehe partner in crime😆 Awesome.. I just d way kalpi serve coffee to rammy Amazing👏 Raghav Singhania torture😕 n yes d way she was reminding her husband about d dinner aauch she's a pperfect match😆 Thanks for loving this part. 😃

again I'm forgetting something sammy or uski tanhayee😭

But not to worry someone is on her way for him too... u know what I mean if not them go n read d last line of part 24😉 Maya Maya MaMaya😆 LOL, yes Maya ki Maya is on way LOL. As per everyone's choice. 😛😃

Gauri n doctor convo was nyc... it shows gauri still need tym or say she is nothe comfortable to talk with anyone.. n here she is reacting lyk she happy with m or meri tanhayee😉 But seems doctor is stubborn... gud going... yes Gauri will take time to heal but she will be okay some day completely/

Paakhi😡 but I lyk Rakhi vry mch😃 pls give some screen space to Ramu too I lyk d way he cares for paakhi😉 pls make realiz that Ramu is her true love her soulmate😃 n raghav is nothing in front of ramu😆 pls do this na.. a rrquest😉

Ramu?? 😲 LOL, nice idea. 😆 😛 But how will I do it? let me think about it.😃

N d way kalpi admiring raghav Ishh😳 feeling proud to be his wife aww.. lovely😳.. n I wasn't lost😡 hahaha perfect😆 n then his torture begins😉 Personally supervise really😳 but ouch retail chain😆...

"It is your husband Kalpi, not your boss who is stopping you" he told her in his mind, but refrained from saying out aloud.

Aww this whole scene was actually nyc I just loved it... perfect...

THANKS A LOT. 😃🤗

N about sonal n kalpi aww they r gud frnds I lyk wen sonal finally asked kalpi about her someone special.. n then D way she replied aww she understands vry nyc but again raghav 😆 n her actions were actually louder than words😉

yes finally half the secret is out! 😳

Flashback trial room romance😳😳 uu hu uu hu.. haaye his promise his eyes were closed still d proximity... it was beautiful... really nyc👏

Thanks, I was skeptical if every one would like this scene or noot, as first it clashed with show's many scenes; and second it was kind of besharam types, LOL. 😆

N then gauri n kalpi convo was nyc d way gauri asked her forgiveness n kalpi's reply shows she understands her condition n moreover she wasn't angry with gauri nyc one👏

Superb part 23 I just love it😳

Thanks again! 😊

Part 24

😆 m back 😉

ohK. .. this part was damn gud...

Awwsh... hot n all haan

ohk he is her best frnd but does he have to hug her close n top of it call her top... hmm seems someone was jealous😉

LOL, Jealous Singhania he is. 😆

n 😆saks😆

poor husband aha thoughtful husband y she never calls him rags aww he is so cute😆

n finally formal introduction kalpi's low voice to introduce her husband shows her hesitation as they've not declare their relation publicly

yes it is sad. 😭

N I lyk d whole idea of their special date😆 lovely vry nyc yyr. . Hmm soon special date will completed wen saks😆 will meet sonal😉 well I think so.. but I don't know what is in ur mind.. 😕

Kalpi n book worm😆 n he wants to change her mind

N ragahv's anger😡😡 n moreover he was feeling alone.. poor husband bit he understands both of them

Glad you liked it. 😃 Yes Saks-Sonal are already decided a pair as per readers' opinion.😛 Poor husband at his peak, bechara. But it was for good to some extent. 😃

N their dance no first wen saks asked raghav n he joks about special date😆 wonderful...

n then their dance u know I was actually scared wen pulls her close n she asked what he is doing.. but he makes her husband jealous aww u know in this entire sequence I only used a single word raghav while reading this part poor husband

n finally kalpi made him stop though she angry with her husband but she knows how much he possessive about her vry nyc...

LOL, many readers found him poor husband and I was so happy. LOL.😆 yes Kalpi loves him despite her anger, she'll not let someone else do anything to hurt her husband. 😃

N then he washed his face to hide his jealousy aww.. again poor husband... I hate seeing raghav lyk this😡

n again about outing plan with sonal she told sas first.. m angry with kalpi bht sara😡😡

LOL, Raghav also didn't told Kalpi that he went on and married Poo baby. 😆 he will value Kalpi even more now. 😃 Yes i too don't like seeing sad Raghav, but both Kalpi and Raghav are sad. 😃

Peeyushhh😡😡😡 how dare he😡 kutta kamina... I told u pehle b I didn't lyk him...

but d way kalpi scold him n Ragahv's slap.. hope from next tym he will stay away from kalpi... jerk😡😡

Peeyush's role is limited but still some is still left. 😉 if readers want I may bring him back later on as villain. But for now it is limited, guest appearance kind.

N raghav is angry gosh! !!!!! N then their confrontation Cum romance awww 😳 do I really need to say something about it well after this hawwwttt office romance m sorry I can only blush I can't able to say something about this Ahem Ahem of moment...😳

Hugs bahut saara. Thanks. 😃🤗

N Ragahv remembering his ph convo raghav n romance... well son all was ryt on her part but wen she will know about RagNa properly then she will definitely agreed that she was wrong..

n there comes maya.. offcourse she has to I voted for saya😆

Yes she has only witnessed The Raghav Singhania's passion only on a professional level. Now she will slowly-slowly get to understand his real self, on a personal level also.

Superb update charu... N pls don't take long break though I agree u will come bck with a bang but it's better if u disturb uS in between with ur updates😉 u r fab writer dear👏 n about karva chauth thing well u know better bcz I love everything that makes their relation more strong inspite of this revenge n living separate from on another...

I will try to come back soon dear. depends how fresh I feel, or if I have been able to organise and plan stories better.

Hush I think wen silent readers comes to saying something they talkS a lot shit! !! Sorry but brilliant update.👏.. better I should end my comment here only😆

Oh this was certainly not shit. In fact I just love long comments. 😃 Loved it so much. 😃🤗

Note; what an update K baad I put all d emotions but I don't know y it only shows sad one may be bcz m feeling bad for poor husband more 😆😉

Comment edited bcz of ur edited part😆 Awwsh I love givING u long comments god knows y😉

ok about d edited part

their car convo... hmm yes this was missing ragahv'S complement to kalpi😳😳 Red Rose aww... they both r complimenting ech other in their thoughts hahah lovely

Thanks, glad you loved edited part/added part. 😃

N about tum hi ho girl itna romance really😆 loved their dance n d best thing was saks icecream n he was checking out kalpi's husband😆 this was a special date 😉 so finally he saw d romantic side of singhania gr8 I hope now sonal witness their love soon or say romantic Ragahv soon😃 LOL, I love romance, though I know I am not perfect in portraying it but I love it. 😆 Ha ha...RagNa passion is too hot to handle. 😛 I will try to show romantic Raghav's side to Sonal also. Do you all really want me to show that to her? 😛😉😃

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

Charu Charu tussi chagayeho !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Truly awesome updates. Aww...how sweet of you. ❤️ Thanks so much. 😃

I like the way,when Raghav had told Sammy,that Kalpi is his life and soul,and when asks him abt anything ,which maybe a normal or sensitive subject,he will never lie her and always remain true to her.Let the real life husbands learn something from Raghav though he is a fiction one.

LOL, true. real life is so different. 😆

Secondly,I like the way Kalpi always putting her extra efforts to make Raghav realise his mistakes and showing her anger at right amount and also at the right time.

Thanks for liking it. 😳😃

So finally our jealous Raghav met Kalpi's best buddie.When Kalpi was dancing somewhat very intimate with her friend,she was not totally lost in it but could not easily sense out Raghav's uneasiness.You have written that part exceptionally well. Glad you liked it, yes Kalpi did saw Raghav frowning but maybe she couldn't measure the intensity of feelings Raghav was feeling at that moment.

Kalpi had beautifully reasoned out Raghav's problems for not disclosing their marriage.And highlighting that she will never allow anyone ,even her best friend to play with the emotions,dignity and the reputation of her husband.This shows that come what may,she will always stand like a pillar for Raghav in the outside world.

Yes, Kalpi despite her anger loves Raghav too much to let some outsider to hurt her love, her husband.

Finally our Detective Sonal had succeeded in her mission.A very big relief for her.At the same time,let her not create any problems for them or try to be over inquisitive to know their relationship at this time. No, right now Sonal will only limit herself to harmless curiousity and teasing Kalpi. She does not even have any idea about Ragna's true relation.

Wow Raghav had literally slapped the poor soul Peeyush !!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????.Before his love ka Gaddi start,it is shattered to pieces.That poor soul will never even try to come near Kalpi,then forget abt talking or hugging her.Though Raghav was wild that time,he didn't show his overpossessiveness but directly warned him to behave properly with the female employees , Yes that was one quality shown in old RS in the show which I loved. he was always in control, always knowing what and how to react, how to work things in his favour without going over the top.Glad you liked this scene. 😃

I really liked the way Raghav explaining Kalpi to keep her senses alert when dealing with true and fake persons.

And then the beautiful Ragna romance ,showing each other the care,love and the indefinite love.You are really an expert in such situations always rewinding those old office Ragna moments without fail.

Thanks for loving this scene. Tried out something like this maybe for first time, so was nervous if it came out right. Though personally I am still not satisfied.

And lastly,why did Raghav dial Maya's no???????????????????.Is she going to mesmerise Prem and not allowing him to reach India on time????????????????.

RAGHAV HAS SOME REALLY DEVILISH PLAN IN HIS MIND RIGHT NOW??????????WHAT????????PLS REVEAL SOON???????????.

Maya is quite harmless. but she is not coming for Prem. Firstly as per readers' view in the poll I had conducted she will be paired opposite Sammy. rest I will organise my tracks in this break and then I can answer you in a better way then.

IMP NOTE: YOU ARE THE QUEEN ,WHEN IT COMES TO WRITING THAT CHUPKE CHUPKE ROMANCE.HOW COME YOU CAN IMAGINE SO WELL IN THOSE SITUATIONS???,PLS DO SHARE WITH US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Awww...Thank you so-so much for this encouragement. It motivates me. I hope I am able to keep up with showing new romantic situations even when RagNa move in together.😳🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Dear Charu lines said by Raghav "She is my wife Sam, my soul-mate. She knows me too well and already had doubts about my involvement in this. She asked me about it and I could not lie to her. I can bear her anger, but not her distrust on me"."It is her right Sammy; it is her right to be angry with me, to love me, to show every colour of emotion for me. No other woman ever shall have that right. I have hurt her so much for my revenge. Her love for me is reflected even in her anger. If she asks me something, I'll not lie to her. She is my world and if my world stops trusting me I'll be unable to love". Saying so he placed a marigold flower on Bappa's feet

" how u expressed his faith towards Bappa just touched my heart I simply loved it this shows how much he respects his wife and her decision.

Thank you so much sweetheart. 😃🤗

By seeing Raghav's love our LOVE GURU started day dreaming of his DREAM GIRL😉 bechare ko kabhi toh milegi kahin toh milegi hmm Aaj nahi toh Kal tch tch tch poor guy, aww ye kya Mr. Khadoos 😡Ne dream hi thod diya very bad, felt sorry for Sammy, bechara tch tch tch.😭

Lol, Sammy ki Maya aa rahi hai us k liye. 😃 (As per reader's choice!)😃

Even though Kalpi was angry on Raghav but she care for him so she on to check with Raghav's PS-Shalini if Raghav had been served coffee by now or not. And when she found it has not done very sweetly she reminded the staff her duty and make sure it not happen indirectly Mrs.Singhania on her full form and way she showed her anger towards Raghav and Sammy while giving coffee full on attitude and anger matching to Mr.Singhania 😆.

Yes, Mrs.Singhania in full form, loving and protective wife which she is.Thanks for mentioning this scene. 😃

Raghav smiled, turning his chair towards Kalpi's cabin he said "But she cares for me. She remembered my coffee". This show their understanding .

How cute they are. My perfect couple, LOL. I don't think I can ever get over their perfection! 😃

In meeting exchange of weird thought haah they both know very well and way Raghav asked to stay back project discussion that also she understood what he want finally when both hard head argue no one wins but thank god they went to mutual agreement he agreed for her to some and she to him so sweet.

Trail room scene aww hot and romantic Raghav made her to change dress😉. 😃☺️ Yes...glad you liked it. 😳

Sonal jasoos puzzle lagbaak solve karliya👏😆 LOL, rest of that she'll not solve now. LOL.

Loved Kalpi the way she argued with her BFF for messing with her husband, true caring and loveable wife who can be angry with her husband but can't let other to do. Yes, perfect Mrs.Singhania, won't let others mess with her husband or to hurt him. 😳

Finally Mr. & Mrs.Singhania office red light on😳😲 Inka romance kabhi Bhi aur kahin Bhi chaloo ho jata hai😉

Maya coming for whom Prem, Saks,Sammy...

PP trouble alert😡.RAGNA PPP SE SAVDHAAN LOL, you had me ROFLing 🤣 Nice one. 😃👏

Waiting for next update. I'll try to come from break sooner. 😳

Originally posted by: AlexWaverly

OMG Charu do do updates 😃 LOL, yes 2-2 updates.Since I am on a break now for some days, thought to make up.

😃

OMG OMG OMG Sonal found out finally 😊 but not about the marriage part .Hmmm sahi bhi hai marriage ke bare mein pata chalega toh aur bhi bahut kuchh pata chalega.A lot many people would be privy to Raghav's secret .Toh abhi ke liye thik hai.But loved how Kalpana let her know that she had someone special in her life. 😳 .

Smart girl Sonal mauke pe maara chauka & popped in the Raghav shocker out of the blue.Poor Kalpana didn't know what to say 😕 .But Sonal got the thing.Loved it. 😃

Thanks a lot dear for loving this scene. 😃😳

That sakshya guy. 😡 He is uthaoing best friend hone ka faayda,getting too much close for comfort 🥱 😲 .Man has some nerve messing with Raghav. 😆 LOL, he doesn't know the true, old khadoos RS yet. 😛

And now about this Peeyush guy.OMG Raghav ka pada usko zor ka thappad right then & there in the office 😲 .Poor guy,fell in love with the wrong girl 😆 .LOL, right. 😆

And poor Pakhi at the nervecentre of this media fiasco ,uski izzat ki ud gayi dhajjiyan.On top of that her husband refuses to acknowledge her in the public,doesn't even talk to her,let alone love.

Bechari suffering like anything only because she fell in love with Raghav 😕 .She is paying for her parents' sins. 🤢 Bechari, I don't know what to say actually about her. I am confused, LOL. But yes paying for her parents' sin. 😳

Got to love Rammy. Raghav is blessed to have a friend like him. 😳

I just love Rammy, such a cute duo. 😃

Ragna conflicted 😔 .Kalpi torn between love & what's right.Raghav torn between love & revenge. 😭 .But they are together,that's soothing,although not living together. 😊 Yes, both are suffering right now. But still they will always be together. 😳 Thanks for liking it.

My heart goes out to Gauri. 😭 Has suffered like anything.Her scars are hard to heal.The path she has chosen might be wrong on so many levels,but feels right to ensure justice is delivered,when law,society & everyone else failed to help her. ☢️

Yes, she is not well emotionally and mentally. her wounds are still fresh. 😊

And now onto the most important part.Ragna romance 😆 😆

Kya flashback tha woh.You modified the trialroom scene & took it to a whole new level.OMG. ☺️☺️

Oh my Raghav doen't have just the looks or the personality to make Kalpana go all crazy,he also has the moves 😉😳😆 ☺️

How I loved this lone "he also has the moves" ☺️ 😆😃 Thanks dear for liking that scene, I am always nervous when i write romantic scenes as everyone have different tastes when it comes to romance.

And he did again what to her right then & there in the office ☺️☺️ .Oh how I love my Ragna.They can't get enough of each other.😳😳 LOL, they are 'everready Ragna". 😆

Loved the update Charu.Aur woh bhi do do.Muahhh 🤗 Aww..thank you so much. 😃🤗 Muah.

Loved every bit of it.Aur aapki vocabulary aur writing mashallah,👏 Oh wow...coming from you this means a lot as I know you have some very good standards! 😃😉 Thanks, I am on cloud 9 now. 😃😳 😃 🤗 ❤️

Waiting for the next one.Take your time.😎 And lots of love.❤️ Love you loads, I'll try to return from break sooner. 😳😃❤️

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Firstly Gopa dear let me tell you I was so happy at seeing your comment here. 😃🤗 You know you are special. 😃