The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 86

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome, loved it, I really hope Raghav tells Kalpi that Paakhi had spiked his with the intention of seducing him, would love to see how Kalpi reacts to it , please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Specular update loving it much but what is Kalpu upset about they had such a wonderful morning.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Eagerly waiting for next update
Hope so kalpi hear raghav Sammy conversation
and know paakhi face how she is
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Posted: 11 years ago
pakhis Ramu is back ...😃diwali gift...😛
superb update...love lovely moments of ragna...
raghav played good...pakhi is a fool...still in her own world...

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Posted: 11 years ago
So Rakhi (ramu + pakhi) yaaa. Loved d update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Pakhi aur Ramu nice jodi yar 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Simply awesome no words loved the way Raghav handled every thing cleverly, superbly Kapoor's planned back fired them, but any how they will not going sit quiet and Prem is also going to join them waiting to see how Raghav going to tackle them.
Hmm Sonal wants to know the secret between Raghav and Kalpi, but loved her honesty towards her friend and her decision hat she wait for Kalpi to tell about her secret.
Mr. and Mrs. Singhania's romance aww simply enjoyed although they are married but they have romance hiding and secretly from, Raghav never leave any chance to do romance with his wife although Kalpi had kept lot of condition but apne Mr.Singhania toh Chance pe Romance toh karlethe hain.

Few lines I would like to mention which I liked very much :-

"His blood boiled to think as to what would have happened had Pakhi been successful in her plan; what would have Kalpi thought of him; her trust and her family's trust which was now his family also would have broken forever. Even before making their relationship public God knows what all more they'd have been forced to see. "

"What's your name?" Raghav asked suddenly, unable to resist the urge to know the name of this uncanny man. He turned and said "Ramesh it is Saab" (Ramesh it is Sir), "But my friends call me Ramu" and he left after greeting Raghav once more, who was smiling at the number of unique Ramus' he seemed to have in his office, home and everywhere." 😆 Ramu Pakhi😆 really awesome pair😆

"her thoughts wandered to Raghav again "you need to answer some of my questions today Raghav".


Edited by Cinderella81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update charu..
and ramu and paakhi...waah😆😆😆
raghav is smart..like this...but when raghav and kalpi again come together??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Charu! Simply superb! You are aptly called 'the queen of romance ' . What an update! Loved it!

Raghav is so smart. How he conveniently changed glasses with Pakhi and she's so dumb and overconfident to notice it. Indeed smart move, Raghav Singhania style! Loved how you brought Ramu into picture. Ramu - Pakhi is an eternal jodi. ..lol. So Raghav already knew about the plan. Still it was nice of him to drop her at Kapoor house. Neetu thinking how to carry Pakhi 's weight had me ROFL. ... Raghav now has another reason for not publicly acknowledging his marriage with Pakhi. How he had turned the whole story around in his favour! Neetu is worried that how will she face her kitty party friends! She doesn't care about her daughter's reputation. What a mother!

Sonal had decides to snoop on Kalpi to find out her mystery man but she stopped at the right time. Loved that she turned out to be a good friend after all and decided to give time to Kalpi to confess when she's ready. Kalpi is worried after reading about Pakhi and is sure that Raghav has something to do with it. She decides to confront him.
Kamala worried for Pakhi. What else is new!

Then comes the explosive and sensuous romantic scene in the car. Oh my! The kiss, the touch, his teasing... so passionate! I literally had goosebumps while reading. I'm still blushing. ..😳 Loved how he covered her with dupatta telling he will never compromise on her modesty and dignity. Love him for this! Fab update Charu dear! ❤️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sugandhii

Res😉

will Unres tommorow pakka...🤗


M late though m d 3 one who res😭 but might be last one who comment
Ok u know I always comment from start to end but today😲

Fab update 👏 my frnds calls me Ramu ... 😆
Oh girl u truely deserve applause for dis I was reading this chappy in d morning n that too in d metro.. I really embarrassed wen people around me giving me horrible looks😕 bcz I laughing badly.. shit yaar it was embarrassing... 🤢I got down next Stn only to control my laughter..😆. but I loved it truely loved..
I enjoyed this one more than ragna romance in d car gosh this Ramu too gud for pooka... vry nyc charu... lovely...👏

Now coming to other things
In car Raghav n Ramu convo shows how much Ramu concerned about paakhi.. u after knowing his name I read it once again their convo n found Ramu truely cares for paakhi... loved it...🤣
But yes raghav's fear.. what if she was successful in her plan😡 what he will say to kalpi... n d line
Even before making their relationship public God knows what all more they'd have been forced to see. Vry well describe his feeling👏

N neetu n her pooka n raghav looks to neetu wah wah wah... gr8.. kya sahi jhooth bolta h yaar ye bnda... well planned d way he was narrating d stop about dat guy holding paakhi I was wow he is d best 👏lovely...

Paakhi n neetu convo I have one sentence 4 this jaisi krni waisi bharni. 😡😡
Kalpi n sonal.. girl u did it sonal actually think about kalpi's frnd sakshya n she was about to check her phone god... but thank god she stopped herself bcz m enjoying this detective sonal😃

I lyk d way kalpi console kamla n pakya n kalpi fight hehe lovely

N tum hi moment Aww. .😳... blush dupatta jhumka ouch Raghav my dress would have been spoiled".
Raghav: "I'll buy you a new one and...make you wear it too". Naughty speechless moment this was 😳😳😳
Vry nyc...

Sammy n raghav convo was superb n d way he's narrating everything to sammy was nyc
Flashback ohh... he proved it again he is d raghav singhania..👏

She is angry with me??? Y??? Car tk to sb kch theek challenge ra tha..

n yes once again Ramu takes d limelight for dis update😆.
Vry gud ..Lovely update👏


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