The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: Cinderella81
Wow amazing Rammylious update, loved the way Sammy handle Raghav, love to see jealous Singhania, hmm kalpi truly knows how to bring smile on her husband's face, Neetu and Pakhi cheap plan back fired😆 did Raghav smelled the conspiracy or anybody helped him, who is the saviour of Pakhi - Raghav, Sammy or Saakshya. Hmm Raghav a minimum chances then who else don't tell driver of Raghav😆 imagine media breaking news Pakhi Kapoor with Raghav Singhania' Driver found in hotel room😉😆 Can't control my 😆🤣 Waiting for ur next update.

Thanks Cindy. May I know what is your real name dear? Glad you liked this update. Maybe it is a bit different from my usual ones! You'll know whether Raghav knew beforehand or someone else helped him, or Pakhi did some mistake in next update. n LOL, you make me laugh with your imaginations.😆 Love it, carry on. 😉

Originally posted by: b.baheti
Superb update. Loved Rammy thoroughly. M sure Ragz must have got to know abt Neetu's plan and very convincingly he followed Pakhi and then it back fired on her thus making sure that coz of Pakhi's stupidity their plan didn't work. Why am i thinking that its Saakshya who saved Pakhi from falling down.

Please update soon ya its going very interesting 😊

Thanks dear for loving it.No, it is definitely not Saakshya.

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Lovely update

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: sampa79
Wow , superb update
Sammy and raghav conversation was superb
Paakhi plan backfire
update soon next part and do PM once update

Thank you for liking it and for your feedback. I'll try to update soon and PM you.😳

Originally posted by: ovee
Nice chappy. Raghav is totally jealous.pls very curious for next update

Thanks. I'll try to continue soon.

Originally posted by: niru04
Awesome update.jealousy ragav cute.loved rammy convo.pakki plan backfired.pls give d ragna in nxt part.update soon

Thanks dear. I'll try to continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: sugandhii
Res😉
Unres
firstly thank u 4 ur reply I did read ur reply but I don't know what went wrong to my like button sorry not able to lyk neither d update nor ur reply😭 but I did read it specialy ur reply Aww. .. thank u🤗

Now about d update..
Aww this one sweet simple funny somewhere horrible😡 update...

N yes complete Rammylicious update😉 love d way raghav describe his tension or say jealousy in front of sammy n sammy reaction...😆🤣

Jealous Singhania😆😉 n wen he said once she starts talking about her frnd she doesn't stop... poor husband😭 now to m waiting for d update wen raghav n her besty come face to face...

N peeyush... how dare he...😡😡 clearly said to sammy that he loved kalpana... n u never know wen she needs another support well I have gut feeling he will turn negetive😡😡

N Raghav's dialogue about kalpi's girly six sense... lovely👏👏

Aww biryani naa bhindi... n n d bestest dialogue of sammy m ur better half 4 d day... Aww how cute he is loved it😳

Offo prem kapur...😡😡

Paakhi cleaning washrooms hahaha d best part is definitely this for mee..👏
Bechari d way she assures herself that next time when she will go in some hotel she make sure to clean room n washroom 4 d sake of cleaning staff. ...😆 gud one👏

Neetu n paakhi convo was horrible😡 She stoop too low... n paakhi maha idiot... she is big bimbo...😡😡😡

paakhi start showing her true colors.. I was actually scared wen rags say m not feeling well oh god he scared me with his dialoug😲🤢 but d next thing just happened loved it wen that bimbo start feeling dizzy😆...
hahaha her plan backfired...😃
bimbo kahi n ki raghav singhania ko phasayegi...😡😡

But waiting who is luvky oops unlucky guy who hold her 😆 pls haan special request someone 4m d restaurant or cleaning staff😉

Nyc update👏

It is okay Sugandhi dear. Loved your comment a lot and glad you loved Rammylicious update.😃 The lucky guy who held Pakhi shall be revealed in next update. 😉 sorry dear for short reply, I am in a hurry. 😭

Originally posted by: sumasridhar
Cahat waiting 4 other uodt as I m curiously want to know wd whom our favrit dumlii is Plz dear I too want ragana severely

LOL, Thanks. 😆 I'll try to update soon.😳

Originally posted by: Aru18
wonderful update charu.
tit for tat in paakhi's case...to good and raghav is feel jelous by kalpi and his friend closeness...
i loved to see more jelous raghav...and waiting for prem's entry...update next part soon dear.

Thanks Aruhi. 😳 I'll try to update soon.

Originally posted by: shonali164
superb update
rags is jealous n sammy making fun of it😆 love d way sammy make rags undstand hw kalpi is better for him n there is no harm for kalpi by sakshya or by peeyush, as ragna love bonding is so strong. Later by seeing rags eating bhindi with wide smyl sammy said thanks to bhabhi is touching.
Pakhi is cleaning dirty toilet😆 Poor grl n later saying she wl nt do any dirt in any hotel its hillarious.
Neetu telling paki her bkwas plan wich is going to fail😆
rags get angry cz he doesnt get tym wid kalpi, plus pakhi's unexpected entry. Finaly he agree for dnr. Bt wats wrong wid pakhi, hs she drunk that drink wich is for rags?😲 bt big suspence who hold her frm falling?😲 its nt rags surely.
No ragna scene😭

Thanks Shonali. Loved your long comment, feel motivated.😃 Glad you liked this update, n sorry for short reply. Shall try to give Ragna scene in next one.

Originally posted by: anjyy
Awesome update...
Continue soon...

Thanks. will try to update asap.

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

rest of the replies to follow later on. Sorry. 😭

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: fairylover
Charu darling... ur admirer is back!! Sorry for not commenting on previous parts.. i read all of them on time but coz of using mobile n lack of time i was not able to comment.
Awesome update Sweety. This Raghav is super smart.. He changed the drinks.. OMG!! but how?? Well I am more than happy that her stupid plan failed.

Kalpi and her best friend... is he here just to make Raghav jealous or he has some imp part in the story as u mentioned his father as well.

Sammy n Raghav r aware of Piyush but mee too confuse like Raghav... y Kalpi is not able to sense his intentions?? We girls have this super power to understand one's gaze. N ur Piyush is too open about his feelings in the story.

Neetu plan failed but u proved that she is really crook... She is able to sense something wrong. She wants Raghav to accept Pakhi n which is correct from her POV.

Raghav will handle Prem for sure but now coz of him Prem's mausi's business will be in trouble. She has to be as she supported devil.

Charu... keep on writing baby!! m enjoying it.😊

Welcome back Vish, Missed you so much.😃 I know it is tough to comment from a mobile.

Kalpi's best friend may help Kalpi in her new dreams. Thank you so much for this super-long comment, loved it. 😃 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: shoonya9
First of all sorry for a delayed response. Yes today's was a Bromedy update (just like bromance it's bromedy ). I too thought it was Priya's shadow in today's update, but enjoyed. Poor Raghav wad behaving like a kid who has a lollypop in hand but not supposed to have it, only occasionally leaking allowed. It seemed everyone else had opportunity n time for his wife except him, Haye kaisi majboori. Ek to deficiency of vitamin Romance and increasing serum revenge level with indigestion from Pakhi and irritable bowel Of Neetu, Raghav needs high dose vaccine Kalpisin to protect himself.
Good tht Pakhis plan failed guess it must be Raghavs all time emergency saviour n better half of the day Sammy who must hv done the trick.
Loved the small small gestures of Kalpi making Bhindi for raghavs lunch n instructing Sammy for same. Actually these small concerns Only mmake rags possess her so much n makes him insecure n jealous too for anyone approaching her. Thats his way to protect her, Care for her.
it was good u made Pakhi sweat today n made her realize the other side of table/life.
Give some more Chupke Chupke RAGNA moments in next update. And yes please UPDATE celebration of Fates too.

Thanks for liking this Bromedy. As for Priya's shadow in it maybe I got inspired by her! especially since my updates have less of humour, hence that feeling.

You cracked me up with this vitamin deficiency, indigestion and all medical symptoms 😆 👏 too good. Thanks for liking the update in all and for your precious comment, that too a long one.😃

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Charu, my darling! Oh god you have really surpassed yourself with this update dear. I can see the Raghav of the story is by far the most sensible and smart one. He changed the spiked drinks ...lol. 🤣 Let Pakhi have a taste of her own medicine...uff. .. drink. I never thought Raghav would turn out to be so brilliant! I was so upset because I knew Neetu is so cunning and so her plan rarely fails. But she forgot her dumbo daughter. ..ha..ha..ha... I'm jumping out of joy thinking he is saved. I don't want Kalpi hurt at any cost.
The update was mostly about Rammy as you said. I loved their bromance. Sammy is as close to a brother Raghav can have. He understands him, takes care of him and also has the guts to tell him if he is wrong. Sammy was trying to make Raghav understand that there is no need for him to feel insecure of Kalpi 's friendship with Saakshya. But Raghav can't digest the fact that she's going on and on about him and he gifted her favourite cake even. Jealousy at its best...lol. Take that Singhania! Now you know how she feels about you and Pakhi. ...huh. .. Peeyush is something else. He wants to be there when she needs support. Ha, as if Raghav will allow him anywhere near her. I think after hearing what Sammy told about him, Raghav will put him away permanently . Would love to see Piyush 's face when he will know that Kalpi is the boss's wife.
The details about Prem is interesting. He is now rich because of his mausi but Neetu doesn't want him to spend money and want Rags to help them. How selfish! I am keen to know what tricks Raghav have up his sleeve to stop Prem from coming before the auction. Well done dear. You are simply brilliant! I can see that you are getting better and better after every update. Love you sweetheart!

OMG really?? you think so? Thank you so much. 😃 🤗 Raghav is a jealous man right now, not insecure but very jealous. 😆 Hope to end Peeyush drama soon. Thank you so much for your compliments, this comment was a special one. Love you too dearie. 😃🤗❤️

Sorry my brain is not working much right now, so unable to think of long replies! got too much to do.😭

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Comment for part 20
nice update chahat..just read it..
i love the bonding nd building up new relation between sonal and kalpi..their orange cake sharing,their talks while having the cake.,nd most importantly ..kalpi had to eat plateful of cake coz its just coz of her sonal got to taste orange cake for the first time in her life..😆 Lovely sonal..
i like sonal's way to ask kalpi about her friend who had given her that cake nd making her mind to meet kalpu's best friend..
wow ,detective sonal 😎 Is all set ready to find about kalpi nd raghav relationship..she had suspected kalpi's blush after returning back from raghav' cabin..but ignored it..nd then observing kalpi 's restlessness for her would be phone call nd that too observing from kitchen..like working in kitchen from her hand but her eyes were stuck at kalpi only in observing her for the reason of evertime glancing at her phone ..

love unwillingly nd unwanted Romance by both raghav nd kalpi ..romance☺️

raghav is in his dellima to call kalpi or not coz if.he called her he will end up asking her about that scene which he had seen in the evening of kalpi hugging to a guy unknown to him..first its peeyush nd now he has handle one more..🤣...poor raghav ...
after thinking for long he ends up to not to hurt kalpi nd even not ask her about evening incident nd decided to give her proper space to reveal it herself...coz he knows kalpi would not conceal anything from him in short he dont want to hurt kalpi in any kind or from his rubbish question..

on the other hand kalpi is becoming restless on not able to talk to her husband coz she has gone habitual of her hasband nd of his daily phone calls nd his conversation before her sleep..nd putting her ego aside finally she called him...nd here goes ragna happy conversation nd happy moment...
on raghav asking question to her she gave a truthful reply coz she did not want to lie to her husband nd could not lie to him on any condition...that is called a true nd lovable relation which is ragna sharing...

sorry for late comment
ok now let me read part 21😃

Thanks Rotu. Yes Sonal-Kalpi have come out to be good friends and Sonal wants to know Kalpi's secrets too now. 😆 too bad Detective Sonal.😛Thanks for loving Ragna scenes and finding true love in it. 😊

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
comment for part 21,
Awesome rammy update😆 chahat
wow ..raghav is lost in his thought of kalpi's talk throughout their visit from clinic to.office about saakshya..raghav was like😳 when he was lost in his thoughts that noticed by our sammy..
nd here is raghav jealousy blurted out...i love sammy's dialough "trust kalpana to make raghav do crazy things"❤️🤣 I wonder what if raghav heard him ..then sammy was like..oh god chahat what u did😆
You know what chahat what i noticed in part 20 about raghav that is "first it was peeyush nd now its one more to handle" ..was turn out to be sammy's dialough...in part 21 ..(look here..our one more thought matched ...we have same thought process)😃
i dont know why but i m feeling like this saakshya is going to come in btw ragna..coz a man can only understand another man's intentions nd pov nd gesture... man thought can be clearly understand by a man only...like here raghav suspected about kalpi's favourite cake gifted by sakshya...

Lol prem to gaya kaam se so neetu nd sahil's helping hand went to meet the accident which will be creat by raghav🤣

no talking about khi nd neetu's cheap nd rubbish so called plans🤢

poor raghav ..feeling sad for not being able to spend time with his wife whereas everyone has getting that opprtunity except him.,his own revenge plan had created this situation in which he is cluched...nd here is one more torture...that khi is now standing in front of him 🤢

lol i m very very happy 🥳..neetu nd khi plan backfired them

Thanks for loving Rammylicious update and also for pointing out that particular dialogue by Sammy.😃 No, Sakshya is a positive character right now at least. Thanks for your lovely comments on all the aspects of update. I really cherish and adore it. Thanks a lot. 😃 🤗 Love you always. ❤️

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Asyalover
haha pakhi plan back fired...haha lol thanks 4 the update

Thanks dear. Glad you enjoyed.😃

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow awesome update charu😊
its Rammylicious update😉..so sammy abb rags ka better half hai😆😆
yaar, bindhi has done its magic😉
pooki's plan was backfired😆😆😆
oh god these kapoors...
im enjoying this jealous raghav😛
plz continue soon dear..

Thank you dear Sharan. Glad you liked Rammy and bhindi.😛 Thanks for loving jealous Raghav. I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: vasishna
Heyylooo dear..
I'm sry as I couldn't reply on ur previous update..so this comment s fr both d updates..
first thing I lykd was kalpi's honesty.. as she dint lie nythng abt his best frnd and this small gesture of her's makes d diff btw her n raghav!! bt nyway i love to read jealousy raghav.. even it ll be sad fr him it ll be fun to read..
and abt sonal.. nw she s getting all d hints abt finding out kalpi's secret.. I wonder wat ll be her reactn wen she gets to know abt raghav lol.. and nw she s sooo despo dat she wants to check kalpi's phone too.. she s too damn curious abt it!!!
and abt this update.. it was superrr fun to read.. as it was more of rammy lol.. their convo was too good n funny.. as sammy was receiving all d angry glares from raghav hehehehe.. so nw a new revenge plan on prem.. dat ll be intrestng one then..
I was roflng wen I read pakhi was cleaning d washrooms n all.. good dat u made her do all those things ahahah..
and yes yes yes!!!!! I'm happy dat pakhi's plan got back fired yippeee!!! I'm sure dat raghav knows abt it before nlyyy hhehe..
I'm vryyy curious nw to know wat happens in next update..

Hello dear. it is fine and thanks for your comment. Yes, Ragna trust and honesty is their biggest strength, can't compromise on that. Glad you liked this Rammylicious update and Pakhi cleaning washrooms.😛

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
The entire chapter was Rammylicious and I love itSammy laughing at Raghav state was funny lol... And who can blame him
not everyday you see Raghav Singhania jealous and over possessive
I love the hold Kalpi has on Raghav, even though she is not present he still think about her all the time. Sammy telling Raghav he is his better half for today was hilarious
I like that Raghav is feeling Kalpi punishment 😛 he deserve it lol
Omg!this pooki has lost her mind. I must say cleaning the bathroom is a perfect job for her 😛
I love how her plan backfires lol
Charu youre amazing writer, I just love the way you carrying on the story

Thanks Natasha for loving this Rammylicious update.😃 Yes, only Kalpi can have that kind of hold on Raghav Singhania. I love it too. Yes, Raghav is at last feeling the effects of punishment. LOL. Glad you liked Pakhi's bathroom job.😛 Thank you so much dear for your compliment, it means a lot. I look forward to your comments. ❤️

Originally posted by: chikita_092
Love the Rammy interaction brought back all those wonderful EMA moments!!! 😊
Looove u lov u love u for making Paakhi get a taste of her own medicine sorry drug 😛 😆
Wonder what Neetu will say now.. Who catches her

Angie sweetheart! 🤗 Love you too Angie...LOL. 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Rubz1234
Too good Charu I just love this Raghav n sammy... Rags gettin more n more jealous...hmmm I'm lovin it...n this stupid Pakhi.. Ab aaayega Mazaa.

Hey thanks dear. 😃 Loved the comment, short and sweet, but meaningful. 😳

Originally posted by: ban18
Charu m late again 😛. Read lst 2 prts ek saath 😉 u knw with ech update i fall in love with rghv's judaai ka gam 😆. Love dis tadapta, chatpatata raghv 😳. Eager to know wat role saakshya going to play in ragna's life nd love .pkhi dug her own grave , nw make her lie in it 😆 i wish neetu had mixed poison in the drink 😆 Vry nice dear 👏
Plz read my comment on 'tribute to the writers'😊

Rishu I thought you've stopped commenting again. But you happily surprised me, not only here but in tribute to Writers thread too. Thanks a lot dear. 😃 🤗 I have replied to you there also, hope you have seen it. Glad you like this tadapta, chatpatata Raghav, LOL. 😆 Saakshya at the moment is only a support to Kalpi. Thanks a lot for your sweet comment.😃

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice update

Thanks Jiya.😊

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shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#837

It was just a small gesture for ur wonderful update. Glad tht u liked it but don't forget to give Chupke Chupke moments n will try to crack u more.

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ovee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#838

Darling chahat pls update dear.pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls

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laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#839

Charu dear pls update The Marriage Story first and then the Celebration of fates.

We are waiting in the shooting location.Nicely dressed up for our Ragna .So hurry up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????.

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rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#840

Firstly sorry dear for super late cmnnt...don't knw hw part 18 n 19 pm got del...so nw read last four parts n loved it

Part 18- lik dat raghav got a lead regarding his dad's murder case

Kalpi's dress was awesome n no need to say always love raghav's jealousy😉

Kalpi kept teej fast ...raghav reseless to knw reason of her avoiding food n den knwing d reason he himself keeping fast was lovely

Waterfall n rain romance was sizzling hoot n super awesome☺️...perfect for ur 100 page😉(Congo shongo dear for compltng 100 pgs)

Part 19- loved d way u r planning raghav's revenge plan ...raghav manipulating father daughter duo by sweet talks...now prem's entry whc will make revenge more interesting (iska 10% bhi cvs likh pate to EMA bakwaas thode time aur on air hota😆😆)

So sonal full in detective mode to find kalpi's secret...eager to knw her reaction after knowing truth

Poor peeyush trying his best to pataofy kalpi whr kalpi unaware of his feelings n raghav full in revenge mode n giving him extra wrk out of his jealousy lol

Part 20- loved d way u wrote whole telephonic convo scene of ragna

Loved ragna passionate moment in office 😳

Evil neetu planned sum thing to expose rakhi marriage

Part 21- rammy convo was funny...poor raghav can't touch, talk or see his wife n moreover he has two competitions to handle whr one is her besty lol...poor jealous Singhaniya

Pakhi cleaning washrooms lol ...perfect recruitment for dumbo...itna to kamla ne ache se sikhaya hoga na🤣

Charu u succesfully resolved d mystry of prem's sudden exit...bechara mausi ka business sambhal raha tha n rozi roti kama raha tha (jo reasons hume cvs nahi de sake wo tune diya yaar...thaankuu)😉😆

So pakhi's plan failed... curious to knw who held pakhi...sammy,ragz driver or sum hotel staff😉