The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

comment for part 21,

Awesome rammy update😆 chahat

wow ..raghav is lost in his thought of kalpi's talk throughout their visit from clinic to.office about saakshya..raghav was like😳 when he was lost in his thoughts that noticed by our sammy..

nd here is raghav jealousy blurted out...i love sammy's dialough "trust kalpana to make raghav do crazy things"❤️🤣 I wonder what if raghav heard him ..then sammy was like..oh god chahat what u did😆

You know what chahat what i noticed in part 20 about raghav that is "first it was peeyush nd now its one more to handle" ..was turn out to be sammy's dialough...in part 21 ..(look here..our one more thought matched ...we have same thought process)😃

i dont know why but i m feeling like this saakshya is going to come in btw ragna..coz a man can only understand another man's intentions nd pov nd gesture... man thought can be clearly understand by a man only...like here raghav suspected about kalpi's favourite cake gifted by sakshya...

Lol prem to gaya kaam se so neetu nd sahil's helping hand went to meet the accident which will be creat by raghav🤣

no talking about khi nd neetu's cheap nd rubbish so called plans🤢

poor raghav ..feeling sad for not being able to spend time with his wife whereas everyone has getting that opprtunity except him.,his own revenge plan had created this situation in which he is cluched...nd here is one more torture...that khi is now standing in front of him 🤢

lol i m very very happy 🥳..neetu nd khi plan backfired them

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

haha pakhi plan back fired...haha lol thanks 4 the update

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#823

wow awesome update charu😊

its Rammylicious update😉..so sammy abb rags ka better half hai😆😆

yaar, bindhi has done its magic😉

pooki's plan was backfired😆😆😆

oh god these kapoors...

im enjoying this jealous raghav😛

plz continue soon dear..

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Heyylooo dear..

I'm sry as I couldn't reply on ur previous update..so this comment s fr both d updates..

first thing I lykd was kalpi's honesty.. as she dint lie nythng abt his best frnd and this small gesture of her's makes d diff btw her n raghav!! bt nyway i love to read jealousy raghav.. even it ll be sad fr him it ll be fun to read..

and abt sonal.. nw she s getting all d hints abt finding out kalpi's secret.. I wonder wat ll be her reactn wen she gets to know abt raghav lol.. and nw she s sooo despo dat she wants to check kalpi's phone too.. she s too damn curious abt it!!!

and abt this update.. it was superrr fun to read.. as it was more of rammy lol.. their convo was too good n funny.. as sammy was receiving all d angry glares from raghav hehehehe.. so nw a new revenge plan on prem.. dat ll be intrestng one then..

I was roflng wen I read pakhi was cleaning d washrooms n all.. good dat u made her do all those things ahahah..

and yes yes yes!!!!! I'm happy dat pakhi's plan got back fired yippeee!!! I'm sure dat raghav knows abt it before nlyyy hhehe..

I'm vryyy curious nw to know wat happens in next update..

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

The entire chapter was Rammylicious and I love it Sammy laughing at Raghav state was funny lol... And who can blame him

not everyday you see Raghav Singhania jealous and over possessive

I love the hold Kalpi has on Raghav, even though she is not present he still think about her all the time. Sammy telling Raghav he is his better half for today was hilarious

I like that Raghav is feeling Kalpi punishment 😛 he deserve it lol

Omg!this pooki has lost her mind. I must say cleaning the bathroom is a perfect job for her 😛

I love how her plan backfires lol

Charu youre amazing writer, I just love the way you carrying on the story

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chikita_092

@chikita_092

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Love the Rammy interaction brought back all those wonderful EMA moments!!! 😊

Looove u lov u love u for making Paakhi get a taste of her own medicine sorry drug 😛 😆

Wonder what Neetu will say now.. Who catches her

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Rubina

@Rubz1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Too good Charu I just love this Raghav n sammy... Rags gettin more n more jealous...hmmm I'm lovin it...n this stupid Pakhi.. Ab aaayega Mazaa.

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

Charu m late again 😛. Read lst 2 prts ek saath 😉 u knw with ech update i fall in love with rghv's judaai ka gam 😆. Love dis tadapta, chatpatata raghv 😳. Eager to know wat role saakshya going to play in ragna's life nd love .pkhi dug her own grave , nw make her lie in it 😆 i wish neetu had mixed poison in the drink 😆 Vry nice dear 👏

Plz read my comment on 'tribute to the writers'😊

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

plz di...plz update...ab intezar nahi hota plz...nd uss pakhi ki bachi ko meri taraf se 4 thappar lagana i hate her kamla the damla ki chamchi 😡 di plz zaldi update kero

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: foram.
nice update...
loved rammylicious update...
and did pakhi consumed the drink which was for raghav 🤣and pls give next update full of RagNa

Thanks for liking it and for your feedback. 😃

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Awesome update as usual charu 😉 loved rags and sammys interaction! To funny, Sammy is 😉 rags feeling jealous lol he put himself in that position lol and he's so selfish when it comes to his wife 😉 he wants her all to himself!! What delimma he is in!! Lol paaki's working experience lol to funny!! Lol don't te me Paaki drank the contents from the wrong glass LOL is she going to meet the man of her dreams LOL
Amazing update charu my darling!! Loving it!!

Thanks Di, maybe it is the first time any of my updates has this much humour also. 😳 Yes, Paakhi may met the man of her dreams, LOL.😆

Originally posted by: sunyy
Lol jealous singhania 😆 and pakhis plan backfired 😆 so who grabbed pakhi and is rags going to Make it look like she had an affair so he can get rid of her? I m waiting for pakhi to turn negative fully. I am Waiting desperately for next update. Is daksh ya good or bad and in love with kalpi?

Pakhi will be grey-shaded, at least I will try it out. It is Saakshya, he is a positive character.

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Awesome update
continue soon

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: Anjinie
awesome, loved the update, especially with Sammy, I really hope Paakhi's plan backfired

Thanks dearie. Yes, Pakhi's plan has backfired.

Originally posted by: eishe10
Awesome update!! RAMMY moments were hilarious with the jealousy factor happening🤣

Thank you. means a lot. 😃

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
Oh! what a quick update.
I miss the RAGNA moments though..
But Rammy Bromance was good... at least the revenge plot is moving and that is a great thing. This update was totally about the revenge plot. and I am excited about it. I wanna know how you make the Kapoors, bite the dust.
Pakhi is just as birdbrained as she was made to be in the serial. real cool characterization, Charu.
Paakhi, drank the spiked drink. that is hilarious and someone saved her from hitting the ground. Wonder who it is.
Saakhya and Prem are the new entrants here. Waiting for more of the fun to unfold. this is getting interesting.

But plz plz, yaar... keep on giving us RagNa moments in each chapter. Our 2min RagNa time at least. 😛

Thanks Mini. I'll try my best to move revenge plot in a nice way. Glad you liked Rammy bromance. 😆 I thought everyone must be bored of only Ragna moments and no story. 😛 Thanks for liking Pakhi's character for what she has turned out to be till now. 😳 I'll try to give more Ragna moments in next updates. 😊

Originally posted by: riaka
Nice update. Jealous Raghav. love rammy's convo.Neetu aunty is very cunning but this time she is not lucky.i hope its our great Ramu kaka who held pahki😆

Thank you dear. 😃 LOL, Ramu how I love that name. Wait, maybe I'll use that name now in next update. 😛

Originally posted by: snacky
its too good as always

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
plez update soon..

want more RAGNA scenes ...tq😃

I'll try to update soon.😳 Thanks for your feedback.

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Why did I get a feeling that I wrote this update😆??
LOL very funny Charu I love Rammy moments and they are my favourites!!! But today was very nice! And Raghav needs this punishment. After all he has hurt her so much! hmmm so Was that Sammy who held Paakhi??? hmmm who else could it be?

LOL

I am so looking forward to this!! Loved this update.

Hey please update Glass wall too! I am waiting an update for that one too!

LOL, maybe just like you got inspired by my romance, I took inspiration from your superb humerous skills.😃 🤗

Thanks for liking Rammy Moments. 😃 I'll try to update soon and thanks for liking this update. 😳

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

Very very good update Charu.

Raghav And Sammy are mirror images of each other.And Sammy understands Raghav in and out and always tries to bring out the unsaid emotions from Raghav be it fun or cry or jealousy.

Neetu Kapoor is so money minded and so selfish that she doesn't even want care abt her daughter's
true happiness.And Pakhi always wants to claim Raghav and not cherish his love.She is always interested how his status ,money power will help her in all her ways.

I think that Raghav is planning out something which will make Prem Kapoor not to reach the venue on time during the auction.

And how did Raghav make out his drink is spiked???.Did he see from the intentions of Pakhi or observed something suspicious in the drink's counter???.

As Raghav was walking ahead of Pakhi,he mustn't have held by her waist????????????????????????

Yes, Rammy are more like brothers than friends. Love their bonding/

Hope I am able to show planning by Raghav properly as yes, he is planning something. Rest of the story about Raghava nd spiked drink will be revealed in next update. 😳

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