The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 82

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.jealousy ragav cute.loved rammy convo.pakki plan backfired.pls give d ragna in nxt part.update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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firstly thank u 4 ur reply I did read ur reply but I don't know what went wrong to my like button sorry not able to lyk neither d update nor ur reply😭 but I did read it specialy ur reply Aww. .. thank u🤗

Now about d update..
Aww this one sweet simple funny somewhere horrible😡 update...

N yes complete Rammylicious update😉 love d way raghav describe his tension or say jealousy in front of sammy n sammy reaction...😆🤣

Jealous Singhania😆😉 n wen he said once she starts talking about her frnd she doesn't stop... poor husband😭 now to m waiting for d update wen raghav n her besty come face to face...

N peeyush... how dare he...😡😡 clearly said to sammy that he loved kalpana... n u never know wen she needs another support well I have gut feeling he will turn negetive😡😡

N Raghav's dialogue about kalpi's girly six sense... lovely👏👏

Aww biryani naa bhindi... n n d bestest dialogue of sammy m ur better half 4 d day... Aww how cute he is loved it😳

Offo prem kapur...😡😡

Paakhi cleaning washrooms hahaha d best part is definitely this for mee..👏
Bechari d way she assures herself that next time when she will go in some hotel she make sure to clean room n washroom 4 d sake of cleaning staff. ...😆 gud one👏

Neetu n paakhi convo was horrible😡 She stoop too low... n paakhi maha idiot... she is big bimbo...😡😡😡

paakhi start showing her true colors.. I was actually scared wen rags say m not feeling well oh god he scared me with his dialoug😲🤢 but d next thing just happened loved it wen that bimbo start feeling dizzy😆...
hahaha her plan backfired...😃
bimbo kahi n ki raghav singhania ko phasayegi...😡😡

But waiting who is luvky oops unlucky guy who hold her 😆 pls haan special request someone 4m d restaurant or cleaning staff😉

Nyc update👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cahat waiting 4 other uodt as I m curiously want to know wd whom our favrit dumlii is Plz dear I too want ragana severely
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update charu.
tit for tat in paakhi's case...to good and raghav is feel jelous by kalpi and his friend closeness...
i loved to see more jelous raghav...and waiting for prem's entry...update next part soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
rags is jealous n sammy making fun of it😆 love d way sammy make rags undstand hw kalpi is better for him n there is no harm for kalpi by sakshya or by peeyush, as ragna love bonding is so strong. Later by seeing rags eating bhindi with wide smyl sammy said thanks to bhabhi is touching.
Pakhi is cleaning dirty toilet😆 Poor grl n later saying she wl nt do any dirt in any hotel its hillarious.
Neetu telling paki her bkwas plan wich is going to fail😆
rags get angry cz he doesnt get tym wid kalpi, plus pakhi's unexpected entry. Finaly he agree for dnr. Bt wats wrong wid pakhi, hs she drunk that drink wich is for rags?😲 bt big suspence who hold her frm falling?😲 its nt rags surely.
No ragna scene😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu darling... ur admirer is back!! Sorry for not commenting on previous parts.. i read all of them on time but coz of using mobile n lack of time i was not able to comment.
Awesome update Sweety. This Raghav is super smart.. He changed the drinks.. OMG!! but how?? Well I am more than happy that her stupid plan failed.

Kalpi and her best friend... is he here just to make Raghav jealous or he has some imp part in the story as u mentioned his father as well.

Sammy n Raghav r aware of Piyush but mee too confuse like Raghav... y Kalpi is not able to sense his intentions?? We girls have this super power to understand one's gaze. N ur Piyush is too open about his feelings in the story.

Neetu plan failed but u proved that she is really crook... She is able to sense something wrong. She wants Raghav to accept Pakhi n which is correct from her POV.

Raghav will handle Prem for sure but now coz of him Prem's mausi's business will be in trouble. She has to be as she supported devil.

Charu... keep on writing baby!! m enjoying it.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u


Arrey Ritu darling you hurt me with your complaint. 😭 Don't you see and feel i love you and your comments? Why would I ignore it deliberately. Anyways, this is a super-cute, super-long, super-honest & super-understanding comment.Thanks a lot for understanding the other reason of why Raghav doesn't want to reveal his and Kalpi's marriage right now. I am ready with next update, so cannot reply in detail.Sorry dear.Love you loads. 😃🤗 ❤️

Sowwiee 😭 i have no intentions to hurt u..🥺...me also got hurt by reading ur words that u got hurt..🥺
i was just teasing u...i know you would not do it knowingly...nd i also saw that u liked my comment...but then thought to been a kinda shararat with u..i mean tease u..but my bad luck..mujhe tease karna bhi nai aata...but u saw na lol 😆emotion at the.end of comment..it was showing my right intention to tease u but it seems that i did not expressed my feelings well...
again sorry sorry sorry..sorry sorry sorry.sorry sorry sorry.sorry sorry sorry..😭 Yar chahat inn forum walon ne "kaan pakad kar sorry bolne wala emotion kyu nai banaya..i wanna use that emotion..😭
but forget it...i m extremely sorry dear..kaan pakad kar sorru bol rhi hu..i will never do it again..

ypu know i did not catch up with last two updates of this ff..just coz of time ..nd 3 updates of vidya's ff ...oh god 5long updates to catchup...its gonna be very difficult for me..sorry once again..
now i m going to read last two updates of this ff then will do comment for each individually..
nd love u too chahat.❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all sorry for a delayed response. Yes today's was a Bromedy update (just like bromance it's bromedy ). I too thought it was Priya's shadow in today's update, but enjoyed. Poor Raghav wad behaving like a kid who has a lollypop in hand but not supposed to have it, only occasionally leaking allowed. It seemed everyone else had opportunity n time for his wife except him, Haye kaisi majboori. Ek to deficiency of vitamin Romance and increasing serum revenge level with indigestion from Pakhi and irritable bowel Of Neetu, Raghav needs high dose vaccine Kalpisin to protect himself.
Good tht Pakhis plan failed guess it must be Raghavs all time emergency saviour n better half of the day Sammy who must hv done the trick.
Loved the small small gestures of Kalpi making Bhindi for raghavs lunch n instructing Sammy for same. Actually these small concerns Only mmake rags possess her so much n makes him insecure n jealous too for anyone approaching her. Thats his way to protect her, Care for her.
it was good u made Pakhi sweat today n made her realize the other side of table/life.
Give some more Chupke Chupke RAGNA moments in next update. And yes please UPDATE celebration of Fates too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu, my darling! Oh god you have really surpassed yourself with this update dear. I can see the Raghav of the story is by far the most sensible and smart one. He changed the spiked drinks ...lol. 🤣 Let Pakhi have a taste of her own medicine...uff. .. drink. I never thought Raghav would turn out to be so brilliant! I was so upset because I knew Neetu is so cunning and so her plan rarely fails. But she forgot her dumbo daughter. ..ha..ha..ha... I'm jumping out of joy thinking he is saved. I don't want Kalpi hurt at any cost.
The update was mostly about Rammy as you said. I loved their bromance. Sammy is as close to a brother Raghav can have. He understands him, takes care of him and also has the guts to tell him if he is wrong. Sammy was trying to make Raghav understand that there is no need for him to feel insecure of Kalpi 's friendship with Saakshya. But Raghav can't digest the fact that she's going on and on about him and he gifted her favourite cake even. Jealousy at its best...lol. Take that Singhania! Now you know how she feels about you and Pakhi. ...huh. .. Peeyush is something else. He wants to be there when she needs support. Ha, as if Raghav will allow him anywhere near her. I think after hearing what Sammy told about him, Raghav will put him away permanently . Would love to see Piyush 's face when he will know that Kalpi is the boss's wife.
The details about Prem is interesting. He is now rich because of his mausi but Neetu doesn't want him to spend money and want Rags to help them. How selfish! I am keen to know what tricks Raghav have up his sleeve to stop Prem from coming before the auction. Well done dear. You are simply brilliant! I can see that you are getting better and better after every update. Love you sweetheart!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update chahat..just read it..
i love the bonding nd building up new relation between sonal and kalpi..their orange cake sharing,their talks while having the cake.,nd most importantly ..kalpi had to eat plateful of cake coz its just coz of her sonal got to taste orange cake for the first time in her life..😆 Lovely sonal..
i like sonal's way to ask kalpi about her friend who had given her that cake nd making her mind to meet kalpu's best friend..
wow ,detective sonal 😎 Is all set ready to find about kalpi nd raghav relationship..she had suspected kalpi's blush after returning back from raghav' cabin..but ignored it..nd then observing kalpi 's restlessness for her would be phone call nd that too observing from kitchen..like working in kitchen from her hand but her eyes were stuck at kalpi only in observing her for the reason of evertime glancing at her phone ..

love unwillingly nd unwanted Romance by both raghav nd kalpi ..romance☺️

raghav is in his dellima to call kalpi or not coz if.he called her he will end up asking her about that scene which he had seen in the evening of kalpi hugging to a guy unknown to him..first its peeyush nd now he has handle one more..🤣...poor raghav ...
after thinking for long he ends up to not to hurt kalpi nd even not ask her about evening incident nd decided to give her proper space to reveal it herself...coz he knows kalpi would not conceal anything from him in short he dont want to hurt kalpi in any kind or from his rubbish question..

on the other hand kalpi is becoming restless on not able to talk to her husband coz she has gone habitual of her hasband nd of his daily phone calls nd his conversation before her sleep..nd putting her ego aside finally she called him...nd here goes ragna happy conversation nd happy moment...
on raghav asking question to her she gave a truthful reply coz she did not want to lie to her husband nd could not lie to him on any condition...that is called a true nd lovable relation which is ragna sharing...


sorry for late comment
ok now let me read part 21😃

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