Your Love Is My Life-RagNaFF- AUTHOR'S NOTE on Page 86- 20/10/14 - Page 53

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks a lot Everyone for your valuable LIKES & COMMENTS...🤗

even after a bit disappointing last part..😒

I have taken a portion in a scene in this part from a movie because I always loved it and wanted to include it in my FF. Hope you all will like it too. So now without any delay, here is the next part..😳

Raghav: how could he touch you...Raghav caught Kalpi by her arm... and why did you get out of the cabin..??how could you be so irresponsible to go at parking alone kalpana..speak up...Kalpi was in tears..

Kalpi: Raghav you are hurting me leave me...saying that she went out of the cabin...Raghav followed her...

Raghav: Kalpana listen to me how can you go out just like that..i am not finished yet..

Raghav once again caught her hand. While everyone around started looking at them..

Kalpi: what are you doing Raghav everyone is seeing ...

Raghav: let them see i don't care...

Kalpi: leave me..let's not talk about it here...i am going home...saying that Kalpi left him there and went to hire a taxi...

Raghav: wait let's go together..

Kalpi: no..taxi..she called out and sat in the taxi and left from there while raghav banged his hand hard on the car's roof making his hand hurt due to a small but deep cut. He too left and reached his home. At the entrance he met sunaina who too reached there few minutes ago from mandir and got worried to see raghav's blooded hand.. "Raghav..Your handhow did you got hurt..It must be paining a lot..show it to me.."Sunaina asked in a completely worried tone. But raghav retorted her back "This pain is nothing in comparison to what you have given me Ms.Raichand.." saying that he left from there and headed towards the guest room...

While in the Guest Room, Kalpi was packing her bag. Raghav came there and saw that she was packing her bag. Raghav caught her hand to stop her..

Raghav: what are you doing...

Kalpi: Raghav leave me...

Raghav: ok but why are you packing your bag..??

Kalpi: beacuse i dont want to stay with you...

Raghav: look i am sorry..I didn't wanted to hurt you but that Bhatnagar how dare that B*****d touch you..

Kalpi: SORRY haan..?? how many times will you hurt me and say sorry..??

Raghav: i know the way i behaved was wrong..

Kalpi: its good that you have realized it but its too late for your realization..

Raghav: Kalpana please don't do this...

Kalpi: why..?? when you can do things like that being angry even i can do it.. for God's sake raghav..when will you understand that this anger does never good to you, me or anyone else and never will...

Raghav: okk I promise I will try to control my anger from next time onwards...

Kalpi (giving him a questioning look): you will still TRY..??

Raghav: okk I will control my anger from next time onwards..I promise..now please will you stop crying?? Because I wont be able to forgive myself if you still kept on crying because of me..

That's when Kalpi noticed that she was crying badly. Her face was wet due to the tears and as soon she noticed it, she started wiping them away...

Raghav removed his hankerchief to wipe her tears but while taking it out, with that a picture fell down from hIs pocket..the same picture he got last night from Jadav Mansion. Before raghav could have realized it, kalpi noticed it...

Kalpi: what is this raghav..?? I think some picture...

Raghav wanted to stop her but before he could, she already picked it. Kalpi saw the picture turning it to her and was again shattered seeing it. Tears were rolling down her eyes making her messed up again..

Raghav; Kalpana are you ok..??

Kalpi fell down on her knees sobbing and trying to control herself from crying again. She didn't speak anything for a while. The room was completely silent accept the voices of her sobs coming occasionally. Raghav sat down on the ground near kalpi and held her shoulders tenderly making her face him now..

Raghav : Kalpana are you ok..?? Please speak out..i just can't see you like this..please..

Kalpi: raghav please leave me alone for a while..

Raghav: are you ok..??

Kalpi: ya i am fine just leave me alone for a while...Raghav left from there as demanded by kalpi while in the room kalpi was crying a lot remembering all those moments spent with prem making her even more vulnerbale...

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It was night. Kalpi was still in the room. Raghav asked Ramu about Kalpi having her dinner after hearing no from him, he went to Kalpi's room and saw her sitting on floor taking the support of the pillar. His heart was paining too seeing kalpi in pain but he was bounded by the promise he made her and was completely helpless. he went and sat next to her...

Raghav: hmmm..so are you okay now..??

Kalpi: yeah..

Raghav: Kalpana just speak out atleast you will feel relaxed...speak out whatever is in your heart..who is he..?? please tell me about your past..maybe I can help you...Kalpi wiped her tears...

Kalpi: he is Prem, my ex-fiance..We were going to get married..The day when i met you on the beach was my wedding day..

Raghav: why was your wedding called off Kalpana..??

Tears again rolled down her eyes remembering her wedding day...but then raghav spoke something bringing her back to her senses..

Raghav: and what about this picture kalpana..?? This is of the same beach..right??

Kalpi: yes it is the same beach where we both met and where prem proposed me..this is the picture from my last birthday when prem forgot my birthday..actually just pretended to forgot...

Saying so a smile crept on kalpi's face but as soon as it came, it disappeared and tears took its place again. This did not go unnoticed by raghav and then kalpi continued telling him more about that day...


*FlashBack*

Kalpi(K) was in her room moving back and forth angrily. Vitthal(V) came to her room...

V:did Prem called you beta..??

K: no Baba..not yet..

V: he might be busy somewhere that's why he didn't even came in party..he will surely call you...

K: hmm..i know baba...

V: good night kalpi...

K: gud night baba...

Vitthal went to his room. Soon after few minutes or more, the door bell rang. Kalpi knew it was Prem. she ran down to open the door. When she opened the door, there was a big human size pink color teddy bear. Kalpi was very happy but she tried to hide her happiness and folded her hands with a fake angeron her face...

Kalpi: who's there..Do I know you?? there was no reply from other side. Kalpi once again asked..

Kalpi: anybody there..?? Kalpi was about to close the door when Prem came in front..

Prem: wait wait wait..Its me Prem..

Kalpi: what are you doing here so late in night..??

Prem: what means..?? arey its your birthday na..come on let's party..

Kalpi: oh really..?? i didn't knew about it and for your kind information my birthday is over...look what's the time...she said showing her watch to him..

Prem: so what..its still 11:58... 2 minutes are yet left birthday girl...

Kalpi: whatever Prem go away...saying so she turned away looking other side..

Prem: i wont..atleast not without wishing you kalpi...

Kalpi: okk wish and go away...

Prem: oh someone is very angry haan..??

Kalpi: very very very angry... she said making puppy face..

Prem: ok happy birthday and I am sorry.. come on now let me show you your gift...Prem caught Kalpi's hand and took her out while kalpi was still protesting...

Prem:first close ur eyes...Kalpi: ok...

Prem removed the cover from a new white coloured royal enfield bike...

Prem: open your eyes...Kalpi was hell shocked and started making weird faces...

Kalpi: wow Prem you are just unbelievable...

Prem: isn't she gorgeous..??

Kalpi: Prem its my birthday and you bought a gift for yourself again..?? This is too much now...it always happens...

Prem: comm'on Kalpi..i mean just look at her...she is beautiful...and when did I bought gifts for me??

Kalpi: you really want to know?? On my every birthday you buy a gift for yourself... first camera, then guitar, then PSP and now this Bike...

Prem: Ohh...no no no...see i take the pictures of you in the camera and on guitar i compose songs for you only na...

Kalpi: and PSP..!!! what about that...???

Prem: ok only one for me...

Kalpi: ohfo..Devaa..why this antique piece for me only?? She said in an irritated tone..

Prem: look what i have for you...saying this, he showed her a pair of helmet with their names written on it..

Prem: come on let's go on a ride...Kalpi:okay...Prem took her to the beach...

Kalpi: wow Prem this beach is so beautiful...

Prem: Kalpi...He called out her name. Kalpi turned and saw that Prem was on his knees with a ring in his hand. Kalpi was hell surprised...

Prem: I know i am mad...sometimes even silly...and sometimes very emotional...in short I am completely crazy but this crazy fellow will always keep you happy kalpi...will you marry me..??

Kalpi was unable to utter a word due to prem's sudden proposal for marriage..

Kalpi: Prem i don't know what to say...

Prem: okay then I will give you two options...Either say "You will always be mine always" or say "You will make me your's Forever"...Kalpi gave him a surprised look "PREM..." after which he just could not stop laughing and said "Okay then just say yes or no..."

Kalpi: you already know my answer prem..YES...

Prem made her wear the ring..they both hugged after which prem held her by waist and started twirling her around..

*Flashback ends*

Raghav: what happened then?? When you both were so happy why did your marriage broke??

Kalpi: i dont know the reason...Hearing this, raghav gave her a surprised look while Kalpi continued...it was the day of our wedding. The day we both waited for from so long. The wedding was to take place at my home. My home was decorated beautifully with white orchids and red roses..white orchids being my favorite and red roses being prem's favorite..we already had functions for all other wedding rituals in past two days and they went completely well. We both were very happy, infact, everyone was happy. Everything seemed to be just perfect..But..

Raghav: But what??

Kalpi: but I guess prem's trust on me was not enough or maybe I should say my Bad Luck played its part again...She said with a sad helpless smile..

*Flashback begins*

Their wedding ceremony started. They both were sitting in mandap. Everyone around was happy seeing these two lovers finally becoming the golden ring in a chain whose beginning is a glance but ending is Eternity- MARRIAGE..

To Be Continued...I didn't wanted it to end here this way but since it became so long I had no option left than to continue it in the next part...😭


But yes here ends the part-15. Now Don't forget to hit LIKE and leave your COMMENTS/ SUGGESTIONS. Criticisms too are always welcomed..😳

Edited by RockstarNeha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😉
Unres...
me 1st😲
awwwsm updt👏👏👏
b8 dis is nt fair...kaha rok diya😡😡

plz updt soon
Edited by wildcatluvragna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res..
unRes..

firstly, awesome part neha..luvd it 👏👏
Luvd the way u potrayed premna luv story..
but this crazy fellow 😡 broke my kalpi's heart 🥺
very eager to know further story now..plz update asap..
Edited by loveShreya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh kya baat hui yaha kyun rok diya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok so dat brthday scene frm d movie anjana anjani is ur fav. 😉 Good jb dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update..
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful update
I like when Raghav asked Kalpi what she doing in his room and she replied playing cricket lol
That was a hilarious conversation
Aww Kalpi hurt Raghav feelings saying marrying him is next to impossible
Raghav beating that man was awesome. He deserve every bit of it

that scene was my fav. too while writting...glad u liked it too nats..😳
Thanks for appreciating and liking..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres soon buddy..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm neha
today i dnt hv more wrds cz i feel so much pain for kalpi.
Bt atleast she share her past finaly
plz plz update sn

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