Your Love Is My Life-RagNaFF- AUTHOR'S NOTE on Page 86- 20/10/14

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Hello Everyone...I m Neha😊...new at Forum, Joined few days back but remained inactive bcoz of the irritating way show is moving

but seeing the love of members of this forum for ff thought of posting the ragna version of my Rishbala ff which I stoped in mid due to my Jee-Exams but continuing here . I already have 22 parts of this ff wid me but my posting it here depends on the response I get.


Character Sketch & Intro Part- Page 1(Below- Must Read)

Part1 - Page 5

Part2 - Page 8

Part3 - Page 11

Part4 - Page 15

Part5 - Page 20

Part6 - Page 24

Part7 - Page 28

Part8 - Page 33

Part9 - Page 37

Part10 - Page 42

Part11 - Page 49

Part12 - Page 56

Part13 - Page 62

Part14 - Page 69

Part15 - Page 75

Part16 - Page 80

Character Sketch:

Raghav Singhania- 28 yrs old(since I don't want his age to be 32 like the show so made changes😛) Dashing, Smart & Successful Business Tycoon. Became Shrewd due to experiences he faced in lyf after his parent's death.

Kalpana(Kalpi) Jadav- daughter of Vitthal Jadav, leading producer of film industry & Kamla Jadav(Vitthal's Wife). Kalpi is smart beautiful and gorgeous. Although having all luxuries, likes to live life like a normal girl.

Prem- Handsome, Charming and most importantly the person Kalpi loves a lot.

Prakash(Pakiya)- Kalpana's elder brother. dashing, smart & ambitious. A sucessful model (I Know its hard to imagine him like dis bcoz of his character shown in show but yes in my ff he is a model 😆)

Vitthal Jadav- leading producer of film industry & father of kalpi & pakiya

Kamla- Vitthal's wife, kalpi & pakiya's mother

Pakhi- Kalpi's childhood friend, very close to her, cute, beautiful but a bit dumb & irritating.

There are some other characters too which will be introduced when there part comes in ff.

Introduction Part-

It was 1:00am at beach. The darkness of Night successfully engulfing the pain he always hid from the world in his eyes. It was his parent's death anniversary when he was roaming all alone on the beach trying to remember the buoyant memories he had with his parents & trying to figure out the reason he didn't died being in the same car along with his parents.

There on a distance away from him, was another person,a beautiful girl in Bridal Dress trying to figure out the same thing, the reason why she is still alive when her life,her love, her Prem was not with her. The only words echoing in her ears "You are characterless Kalpana...I hate you..i just regret loving a girl like you..go away..i just don't want to see your face"

Amidst the memories of his parents, roaming purposelessly on beach, his eyes reached out to the girl in bridal dress. He went near her only to find her covering her face and badly crying & sobbing all alone

Raghav_ ummm...hey..u..(he stopped seeing no response from kalpi) "Excuse me are u alright..."

Kalpi still didnt respond..Raghav was hell angry as no one had ever ignored him specially when he was trying to help her & make her feel better..

Raghav: if u r not intrested in responding & want to continue crying then hang a note in your neck stating "DO NOT DISTURB"...but kalpi didn't responded again and that's when raghav started getting irritated & thought of leaving...

When Raghav was about to leave she spoke..

Kalpi: you dont know how will a girl feel when her would be husband leaves her in the mandap without getting married..

Raghav who is always rude with everyone felt a bit bad for her...kalpi was still facing Raghav..

Raghav:Look whatever happens as said is good for you..& i dont know what happend in ur past but you should move on in life...

Kalpi: Its very easy for you to say this bcoz you may have never lost your loved ones. But life becomes really difficult without the person you love bcoz the gap created by devoid of their love can never be fulfilled(little did she knew raghav was the one who lost his loved ones years back & was all alone in life)

Before Raghav could have replied, Saying this Kalpi ran fast...n Raghav also ran behind her bcoz he felt she might hurt herself..

while running Kalpi's payal fell on ground ..Kalpi dissappeared..Raghav returnd back n saw the payal and picked it and kept it in his pocket..

So, This was just the teaser. If you want me to continue it then plz do hit like & comment bcoz dats how I m going to know your response...Thank you for reading & apologies if anyone of you think it was not worth reading..!!😊😊

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incredible96 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is extremely interesting and amzing!! please update part onw soon!!!
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first welcome to the forummm...
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n its very nice intro plz continue soon 😳
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Sound Interesting please do continue and welcome to the forum
Edited by Shivanie05 - 11 years ago
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Hi... welcome to the forum🤗


loved the teaser...continue soon😳...liked the concept...
Edited by smile_san - 11 years ago
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Hi Neha.. Welcome to the forum 🤗. I loved it ..Please continue soon..
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This story is amazing so far. Do continue.
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interesting start..please continue soon..👍🏼
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Originally posted by: incredible96

this is extremely interesting and amzing!! please update part onw soon!!!

thanks dear...i will do it tomorrow😊
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Originally posted by: loveragna

plz contiinue its amazing

thankyou...i will 😊

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