FF: Life - A Story of Love (Chapter 39 Pg 115) {02/10} - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Awesome update.. It was like a flowing water and suddenly a thud.. MU at the end.. I hope it doesn't gets dragged... Just loved it.. The way she convinced him to leave the revenge game... Wonderful..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update ... hope so Mr. confused confesses asap...continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
I'm enjoying RagNa closeness
Raghav is one confused soul but when comes to his Kalpi I think that's the only thing he is not confused about lol
I like how he goes to Kalpi for advice, their bonding and tuning is amazing
Aww Kalpi help Raghav to choose love over revenge but in the end she misunderstood his feelings
Beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Kalpi thinking Raghav is loving Pakhi!!!😲
Interesting...continue soon

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wow beautiful update... loved it..
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Read last 2 parts both r amazing
Loved raghav n kalpi's growing frndship
Enjoyed prem n suman's fight
Eager to read whr kalpi's mu leads dem both
Hope raghav confess soon n we get sum ragna romance😉
Cont soon... if poss can u pm m dear😊
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amazing update please update soon
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#68
this ff reminded me of those beautiful scenes of RagNa...
but CVS never showed rags realisation stage of his feelings for kalpi...
which u did nicely..
suman is one comic character, I liked her...
waiting for next update 😭
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wow amazing update...
plz continue soon...
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Here goes Chapter 9... It's not about RagNa that much, abt new couple (Pakya-Sumi). Hope u all like it...

Chapter 9:The First Sight of Love

"Kalpi beta where are you lost?" Kamla asked, breaking Kalpi's trance.

"N-no, nothing aai..." She said quietly and walked on mumbling something about freshening up. Kamla looked on, worried.

"Why am I feeling so unhappy?" Kalpi said to herself as tears rolled down her cheeks, "I should be happy for them, they are the two close friends I have here. If they fall in love with each other why should it upset me?"

Her heart was aching whenever she thought of Raghav and Pakhi, she couldn't understand why she was feeling that way... a voice in her mind softly answered her question, Because you're in love...'

"No... I can't..."

But you have... you are already in love with Raghav...'

"No it can't be... how can I be in love with him? He's just my employer... and a friend... and... and..."

And slowly you have fallen for him...'

Kalpi remained quiet... she could now see the truth in those words... yes, she was hopelessly in love with the man who loved her best friend... She slowly smiled, not a true smile, but a smile mocking her luck...

"So what? He loves Pakhi... This is my luck, that everyone I love will be Pakhi's... First aai, now Raghav... and this time, I don't even have any right to assert on Raghav..." She said sadly, "He and Pakhi belong together... Who am I to come in between?"

She wiped her tears and came out. Kamla tried to ask her, but she walked out without even noticing her. Pakya had just come home and saw his sister go out with a dejected look on her face. He questioningly turned to his aai. She shook her head to indicate that she doesn't know. Pakya nodded and said, "I'll cheer her up..."

He followed his sister and started trying to cheer her up - cracking jokes, teasing her - but she paid no attention.

"Kalpu, what is wrong with you? What happened, tell me na..." Pakya asked her.

"No dada, nothing... just... my mood is off..."

"Okay...I have an idea to brighten your mood... Actually I and some of my friends were going to a concert... why don't you come along?"

Though Kalpi protested initially, in the end she had to agree.

...

Kalpi and Pakya made their way through the crowd as the concert was about to begin. Everyone was cheering for the singer, RockstarSumi.

Sumi started singing from the background...

Main ruthiyayaarmanawangi
Har chilmanphoonkjalawangi
JadpattharRanjhapighlega
Tad main Kamlikehlawangi
Tad main Kamlikehlawangi

She now came on the stage. The moment he looked at her, Pakya was just entranced.

Mere maahiyasanamjaanam
Ki main kariyanamidanam
Shabguzrite jag soya
Ni main jagiyanamidanam

Mere maahiyasanamjaanam
Ki main kariyanamidanam
Shabguzrite jag soya
Ni main jagiyanamidanam

Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli mere yaar di

Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli mere yaar di

Jheeldil ko kargayatu
Dariyadariya mere yaara
Akhiyan de mohalle mein harshaamteraaalam
Shabguzrite jag soya
Ni main jagiyanamidanam

Mere mahiyasanamjaanam
Ki main kariyanamidanam
Shabguzrite jag soya
Ni main jagiyanamidanam

Main tohpehankesaafakesariya
Jugnijogan ban jaaun
Surme de kale jadu se keh de to jog bhulaun
Ni main kamlikamli
Ni main kamlikamli..

Main tan seher di thandishabnam ha
Gulshankaitarchuraaun
Rukhbadluntohsailaabhu main
Parbat bhi cheer dikhaaun

Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli mere yaar di

Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamlimereyaar di

Bekhudi me tu khudi ka zariyazariyamereyara
Jhaalar main sitaro ka, chand warga tu yaaram
Shabguzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiyanamidanam

Meremaahiyasanamjaanam
Ki main kariyanamidanam
Shabguzri te jag soya
Ni main jagiyanamidanam

Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamlimereyaar di

Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamli
Ni main KamliKamlimereyaar di

Ni main KamliKamli...

Pakya was so lost in her that he hadn't noticed that Kalpi was trying to say something to him.

"Dada!" Kalpi called.

"Haan..." Pakya now turned.

"Dada I'm going home..."

"But... the concert has just started..."

"I have some work... I'll come some other time..."

"Okay let's go..." Pakya said with a tinge of disappointment. Maybe Kalpi noticed it, so she said, "No Dada, you stay here and enjoy with your friends..."

"But how will you go home all alone?"

"Dada, I'm not a kid... I'll manage..."

"But - "

"No ifs and buts, I said I'll manage, so I'll manage..." she said stubbornly.

"Okay... but call me when you reach home..."

"Okay..."

Saying so, Kalpi left. The concert went on, and Pakya enjoyed a lot with his friends.

The concert ended quite late, it was almost 10:30 in the night. Pakya wanted to see her for a last time before leaving, so stayed back after his friends left.

Sumi had come out, and was talking to her chauffeur on the phone.

"What? The car has broken down! Now what... okay, no problem, I'll manage..." She disconnected.

"Now how do I find a taxi here..." looking at the deserted road. She started walking, but didn't realise that someone was following her. She walked on, but then saw some goon-type people in front of her. She got scared and turned around, but was shocked to find that there were goons behind her as well. She almost panicked and tried to run away, but they surrounded her. She shouted for help, but one of them covered her her mouth.

Pakya was looking for her, but not finding her. Disappointed, he turned to leave. He heard someone scream... shocked, he recognised the voice and ran towards her.

He saw her surrounded by the goons and shouted at them. They all started fighting Pakya.

After sometime, Pakya was surrounded by the goons and couldn't understand what to do. He was ready to fight, when suddenly Sumi hit one of the goons on the head and he fell down unconscious. Pakya stared at her, astounded, while a goon was going to hit him from behind. Sumi saw this and threw the rock in her hand towards him. Pakya was scared and almost screamed thinking it would hit him, but then saw that it hit the goon behind him on the eye and he was howling in pain. Pakya looked at Sumi, impressed, and she shouted in rage, "Don't stare at me, you moron, look at the goons!" And soon both were busy fighting the goons. In the end, all the goons were either unconscious, or not in a good enough state to get up. Pakya had got some wounds, but Sumi had escaped without a scratch.

"Show me..." Sumi said, signalling him to show his wounded hand. Pakya did so. She tied her handkerchief on his wound, while he kept admiring her.

"Okay... um... let's-let's go now..." She said, breaking Pakya's admiration session.

"Yeah... come I'll drop you..." He said.

"No, thanks, I'll manage..." Sumi said, but Pakya cut in between.

"We both just saw how well that turned out... I don't know about you, but I wouldn't want to encounter some more goons in the same night..."

Sumi nodded, "Okay... but how will we go... you have a car..."

Pakya laughed, "Yeah, right, car... you all grand people can always think of such grand things only..."

"Ha ha ha, oh very funny... now how would I know whether or not you have a car without asking the same?" Sumi asked.

"Um... that's upto you to understand... why would I help?"

"Say it straight, you don't know..." Sumi said smugly.

"Yeah, whatever..." Pakya said, and they both laughed.

They started walking, looking for an auto.

"I'm hungry" Sumi said, her stomach grumbling.

"Me too... let's find somewhere to eat... but..."

"But what?"

"I don't know if there is any good place in the locality..."

"Oh come on..." Sumi said exasperatedly, "I'm not some VVIP that you'll have to take me to the best place... I don't any problem with a roadside stall either..."

"Hmm..."

Luckily, they found a small caf which was about to close. They had dinner there, paid and left. They took an auto, and dropped Sumi home first. Before he could leave, she stopped him.

"Um... thanks for everything... you saved my life..."

"Nope... you did it yourself, you knocked those goons unconscious..."

"But had you not come, I could not have got the time to think that much, and nor could I have got the courage to put it into action... That's why, accept my thanks and say you're welcome'"

"Okay, I accept your thanks... but I won't say you're welcome... I don't want you to get into such trouble again..." He said in a concerned voice. They shared an eye lock.

"Um... by the way, I'm Sumita, Sumita Ahuja... and as you know, my nickname is Sumi..."

"I'm Pakya." He replied.

"Bye Pakya... I hope we meet again soon..."

"Bye Sumi..." he replied, and regretfully they turned away from each other to go to their respective homes.

Edited by _TheBlackRose_ - 10 years ago

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