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Sorry again for missing another ff of yours. You must be thinking what a jerk I'm. But I'm really sorry. I promise to comment from now on. When I read the first few chapters I thought you're just writing what happened in ema. Same story. Even though i relived the good old days it was a little repetitive. But the way you progressed the story is really co mmendable. How Raghav and Kalpi slowly gained each other's trust and how they shared their problems is amazing. He decided to ask her what to choose- revenge or love. She gave her views honestly. She comes to know Pakhi is in love with him. Misunderstanding him that he loves Pakhi. Her realisation that she loves him.Awesome! What a way to twist the story and turn it around for better.
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
