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FALAK_SKY

@FALAK_SKY

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1061

Plzz update soon...ema is end it's d only way we can connect wd ragna..plzz update soon

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1062

Priti, WELCOME BACK! I was not aware that you were back with your updates. Well , you went with a BANG! [Stinging slap to Rags] and came back ,with a superb update. Thanks. Prem seems too weak a character for Kalpi .

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#1063

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Ritu, she's Priti.

THANKS kiara

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#1064

Read the last few chapters in one go.

Waise I know about kiss and tell. but yeh Kiss and Slap funda kya hai!!

Is this a new romantic stunt... seems interesting..Hotness possibilities are there😉

chapter 17

wow!! you almost wrote a whole chapter dedicated to the KISS! that is pretty hot. Rags and Kalpi spent all their time reeling in the aftermath of that momentous KISS.

I am sure, it would have been quite a KISS, if it were real.

Chapter 18.

this was a very emotionally charged update. loved it. especially, Rags daydreaming and then Kalpi's aloofness.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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FALAK_SKY

@FALAK_SKY

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1065

Plzz update soon last was superbbb..but plzz atleast u not make any third wheel between them..i want only raghna..

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1066

Last time i was 1st & this time im last 😭😭😭

Priti ... I take my words back ... the ones i had said in the second comment the last time. This 1 was way awesome than what my definition of 'better' defines. So now ur truly back in tune (no part deleted this time)

U have that superb style of writing wherein u explain even the minutest of details thus making it easier for the readers to visualise 😃😃 I cud imagine that "I knew it" of Raghav's very easily.

But alas it was his hallucination/dream

This 1 was the best hallucination Raghav has ever had ... unlike the show ,purely disgusting. But urs was like wow !!😳😳

U managed to fool me ... I was actually thinking that Raghav was doing it in real. Though at the back of my mind i always knew that a headstrong personality like kalpi wud never forgive him so easily.

Raghav held on, afraid to let go of her and scared to let the moment slip by.

While witnessing Kalpi going far from him and moreover towards another man, his heart and mind knew what he really wanted.

I am in looovvveee with these lines. Especially in the second 1 the"moreover to another man" enhanced the impact of the statement.

He wants KAlpi to be with him always & rule over him ... ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Kalpana was a perfect character like always...😃😃

As Ragna fans the Suhana incident was nice .. but from her perspective ... I felt bad for the character Suhana.

Thus making me feel that Raghav doesnt deserve Kalpi ... she's way good for him. The jealousy factor was f9 ... but somewhere i didnt like Raghav's ideology ---- He can be with numerous girls like Suhana even when he couldnt get Kalpi out of his system (as he claimed ) & Kalpana doesnt have the right to be with just 1 guy & think of a settled life ?😕😕😕 (Now thats a different part that she likes him as well) On seeing her wid prem he gets POV's like " U cant leave me like this ! Its not over yet " etc... where were these Pov's of his since so many years then?? How come he acknowledges those feelings so abruptly saying that he wants her to rule over his heart , soul & body ? Doesnt it seem that he wants her just coz she doesnt run behind him like the other girls... Wud loved my questions to be answered & be proved wrong by ur future updates. These are the Q's which wud easily arise in anybody's mind...

Besides I wud like to see a Raghav who tries to make himself worthy of Kalpana with her not forgiving him easily !! 😃😃

& rest toh u know only what ur little devil likes 😉

Update soon

MARUSHKAA

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idonkno

@idonkno

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1067

Originally posted by: eishe10
Very nice update!!!

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Rupalpanchotiya
Plzz update soon...ema is end it's d only way we can connect wd ragna..plzz update soon

Yes 😃 Don't worry!!

Originally posted by: premap
Priti, WELCOME BACK! I was not aware that you were back with your updates. Well , you went with a BANG! [Stinging slap to Rags] and came back ,with a superb update. Thanks. Prem seems too weak a character for Kalpi .

Hehe!! I just updated 2 small parts and I know don't prefer to read small updates instead you read them all together, so you were not at a loss here 😉 Thanks for the appreciation 😃

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
Read the last few chapters in one go.
Waise I know about kiss and tell. but yeh Kiss and Slap funda kya hai!!
Is this a new romantic stunt... seems interesting..Hotness possibilities are there😉

chapter 17
wow!! you almost wrote a whole chapter dedicated to the KISS! that is pretty hot. Rags and Kalpi spent all their time reeling in the aftermath of that momentous KISS.
I am sure, it would have been quite a KISS, if it were real.

Chapter 18.
this was a very emotionally charged update. loved it. especially, Rags daydreaming and then Kalpi's aloofness.

Thanks Mini!! I hope you are happy now 😃😃 Loved your comment 😳

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idonkno

@idonkno

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1068

Originally posted by: mariee
Last time i was 1st & this time im last 😭😭😭
Priti ... I take my words back ... the ones i had said in the second comment the last time. This 1 was way awesome than what my definition of 'better' defines. So now ur truly back in tune (no part deleted this time)

U have that superb style of writing wherein u explain even the minutest of details thus making it easier for the readers to visualise 😃😃 I cud imagine that "I knew it" of Raghav's very easily.
But alas it was his hallucination/dream
This 1 was the best hallucination Raghav has ever had ... unlike the show ,purely disgusting. But urs was like wow !!😳😳
U managed to fool me ... I was actually thinking that Raghav was doing it in real. Though at the back of my mind i always knew that a headstrong personality like kalpi wud never forgive him so easily.
Raghav held on, afraid to let go of her and scared to let the moment slip by.
&
While witnessing Kalpi going far from him and moreover towards another man, his heart and mind knew what he really wanted.
I am in looovvveee with these lines. Especially in the second 1 the"moreover to another man" enhanced the impact of the statement.
He wants KAlpi to be with him always & rule over him ... ☺️
Kalpana was a perfect character like always...😃😃
As Ragna fans the Suhana incident was nice .. but from her perspective ... I felt bad for the character Suhana.
Thus making me feel that Raghav doesnt deserve Kalpi ... she's way good for him. The jealousy factor was f9 ... but somewhere i didnt like Raghav's ideology ---- He can be with numerous girls like Suhana even when he couldnt get Kalpi out of his system (as he claimed ) & Kalpana doesnt have the right to be with just 1 guy & think of a settled life ?😕😕😕 (Now thats a different part that she likes him as well) On seeing her wid prem he gets POV's like " U cant leave me like this ! Its not over yet " etc... where were these Pov's of his since so many years then?? How come he acknowledges those feelings so abruptly saying that he wants her to rule over his heart , soul & body ? Doesnt it seem that he wants her just coz she doesnt run behind him like the other girls... Wud loved my questions to be answered & be proved wrong by ur future updates. These are the Q's which wud easily arise in anybody's mind...
Besides I wud like to see a Raghav who tries to make himself worthy of Kalpana with her not forgiving him easily !! 😃😃
& rest toh u know only what ur little devil likes 😉
Update soon

MARUSHKAA

Now to start with I have waited to reply to this comment of yours and finally I am right now!! There is so much say and forgive me if I am not able to clear all your doubts!!Believe me I am trying hard but then there are few stuff that you will learn from experience and not through what you read or hear

First of all, I would like to thank you for telling me that something was missing, I guess I had worked very hard to keep up the consistency of this part to the previous ones and I am happy to know that I have succeeded in that. Frankly speaking, now when I write this FF I am in a completely altered phase of emotions and hence you might find a major drift in these parts!! You know that I write what I feel 😆😉

I knew it!! I knew it!! Did your heart start pounding reading the dream sequence and were you like how can this happen? Why is Kalpi not doing anything? How come Raghav is saying all that? Yeh kaise and kyu ho raha hai? 😆😆😆 But, you know our inner-self and intuition never fails us and hence you were not able to digest the fact and I guess you might have laughed reading that it was a dream!! The devil's brain is always right 😆😉

Well, now coming to Suhana!! Too early to sympathize with her my lil devil!! Well, I am not sure if she will have a future role in this FF but she was just included to show a transition in Raghav once he is aware that what Kalpi means to him. Suhana was just one of his admirers who was with him cos of his money and reputation. Why feel bad for her? Did she love him? NO.. Does he deserve true love? YES..Does he deserve a second chance? Yes.. Should he try to win her love back? Yes...and for this he had to take an action --- Leaving his past behind and changing for her and that happened when he said NO to Suhana and broke all his ties with her!!

Suhana made a drama of the whole thing- Cos she felt humiliated and not because she had any emotions for him!! I am not defending Raghav here but every thing has two sides to it!! We just need to see it from his POV!! The guy ain't that bad!! He had a terrible childhood and is just not aware of what he wants on personal front!! Though professionally he is successful but on personal level he is a failure!! His heart was always with Kalpi but he could never understand that!! And today he has and he has every right to change for his true love!! Just get out of your feminism for a few seconds and think about humans in general- most of the times we are not aware of what we want from our life ( be it career, love or anything else)..we keep running towards wrong path (something we don't like or love)..though somewhere we know it is wrong but still we try to overcome these thoughts and try to make ourself understand that what we are doing is right..But, one day we all repent over some decisions that we should not have taken!!

And that you can't leave me like that came before he realised his love for her!! In the future updates you will see how he grows and matures in love!! You will see him adamant like he has always been but with a different tint of him 😉😆