When love clashes -New FF (RagNa) Part 18 Pg 142 25/9 - Page 103

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hathway

Welcome back Priti and thank you for the update which was a long awaited one.

Now the forum is in Zing!!!

I love the way you write, neat clean and crisp!! & your vocabulary, it's too good!!

Great update!!

We all love Ragna😉, but the thing is how you bring the love between them and how you make realize them they are in love. And you darling! are doing a marvelous job.

Please keep writing.


Hey (Sorry don;t know your name) 😃!! Is the forum really in a zing 😆😉? Don't worry it will always be in zing now as I am back for good 😉

Aww!! Thanks for all the appreciation!! Made my day 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

heyllooo..
after a long tym u r back with a banggg!!!..
update was superrr intrestngg one.. so d kiss strtd affecting both of them which ll be good to realise their feelings..
nw kalpi s getting to know it bt thinking its too late.. and raghav.. hope he ll get to know abt it.. and he control his feelings n strtd dancing with her.. let's see wat happens next..


Heylo my lovely girl 😃 You got what I wanted to portray and that makes me so happpyyieee!! Me doing the happy dance 😆😉 Loved your comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryagr

The update was just awesome. It was short but beautiful. Thnx 4 d update.


Thanks 😃 SHORT 😭😭?? Took me ages to write !! will try to make it longer in future 😉 and more RagNalicious 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Hi Priti! Glad to have you back buddy! Missed you and your ff like hell. You made us wait for a long time and ta. ..da. ... you gave us a romantic one. No, the slap is not romantic. But the realisation that comes afterwards. Poor Raghav, still reeling under the effect of the kiss rather than the slap. Kalpi on the other hand is trying to tell herself it didn't mean anything to her. I think she accepted Prem's invitation to convince herself that Raghav is her past and he doesn't affect her anymore. Alas, will it be that easy! Then why would she flinch when Prem come closer to her? Why is she not comfortable with the male attention in the party?

Raghav is still thinking about the kiss when he comes to the party. Jealousy and anger takes over when he sees her with Prem. He can't get it that she belongs to someone else. He is not even aware of the pain when the glass piece pierces his hand. When they look at each other it's as if time has stopped and they have eyes only for each other. Possessiveness taking over when he sees her dancing with Prem. He couldn't stop himself from asking Kalpi for a dance and they swayed in perfect synchronisation with each other. Kalpi too realises that she has not gotten over him.
What will be her reaction when she comes to know that Raghav is Prem's boss or isn't he? How will Raghav convince her of his love? Eager to read the rest. It's good to have you back!


Oh my my Kiara!! I have missed you so much!! really!! By God!! Trust me super excited to see your comment and that too a long one!!

You have made a very good point about the self-conscious Kalpi!! And I am happy that you got the hidden message from the words I had chose to put in the update!! You have an eye to catch the invisible details so perfectly 😃

Raghav is not Prem's boss!! But, they will have some sort of relation 😉😃 Story will unfold soon 😆

Before convincing her of his love, he has to accept that he is in love 😉 Wait and let the story unfold 😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Main aa gayi!!🤪 First of all, welcome back!!🤗 Back to commenting..Oowie..thappad..😔Poor Rags.😭.But this time I am on team Kalpi..What does he think of himself!! He can do anything aur Kalpu is supposed 2 accept it all meekly!! Bewakoof!!😡

Duh..Raghav..the zing affected u more!!😉..By the way, yeh zing hota kya hain?😳 Huuuiii.."licked his lips" main toh margayeee

Kalpi out of breath..Kalpi kya..main bhi out of breath yahaan..and yes yes my heart is also pounding strongly..and my body also trembling !!😳😉 Gosh, just loved how u described the kiss..and her reactions to it!!👍🏼 Ek kiss se this much hungama..Kalpi control baby control!!😆

Red and black sari?Hot!! It seems everywhere I look it is this combo..just now saw it on Qh!! Prem kya..if I was there, ek seethe bajaati!!😆 Hope Prem didn't catch her waist when he came close..only Rags allowed to do it.

Yaar, I am fed up of this black Tshirt..please no more black Tshirts for him..let this be the last.😒

Why was Rags all cheerful? Us wine glass ke jagah , how I wish I could hav been his constant companion!!😳

Rags in a love hate relationship with the wine galss? Pichle FF main bhi he broke a glass!!😆 Jab kissy dimaag main ho to, why wud he be affected by the pain? So u mean to say that no one noticed this staring game between the two of them?🤔

his arms around her waist..satyanaash!! I have kissed other girls before...yeh kab hua?😡

consuming drinks like a camel at an oasis...first time reading such a simile..imagining it..nope not happening😆

Fav song..is it Suraj hua maddham? Ehm, How did the DJ know what his fav song was?😕

Overall loved it..dil ko sukoon mila...Sorry yaar for the mad comments..couldnt control myself☺️


Oh meri Amy!!!! Amy Amy baby 😆😉 WHAT???? WHEN AND WHY DID YOU CHANGE YOUR NAME??

Hey bhaggu Amy!!! Raghav ko thoda bhi pain mein nhi dekh sakti hai na tu 😆😉

ZING ko bhi google kar le 😆😉 I was having a zinger burger when I wrote that 😆😉

OMG!! Kahin tu hi toh Kalpi ki twin toh nai 😉??? Jaldi pata kar else you will have to go through everything that Kalpi will have to 🤣

To much expectation from me !! Waist to pakadwa hi di maine!! Next time aur kuch expect karne se pehle tum soch lena 😉

You are so RO!! Raghav Obsessed 😆

Tujhe bata ke kiss karega kya 😉😃😆?? Madam, go to character sketch on page 2, you seem to be lost 😉

Arrey!! He is a party person!! DJ toh usse personaly bhi janta hoga!! Song toh chotti si cheez hai 😃😆

BTW!! This is an epic day for me!! tera comment itni jaldi on my FF and woh bhi demand kiye bina 😲

LOL!! Love you my Sugar rush queen 😛




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Posted: 10 years ago
Super duper update...awesome..update soon dear...want to read how raghav flirt wit kalpi...hahahah...ragna ragna always ragna...

Sorry dear..i dun comment much..but luv ur ff always...;)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumm

Super duper update...awesome..update soon dear...want to read how raghav flirt wit kalpi...hahahah...ragna ragna always ragna...

Sorry dear..i dun comment much..but luv ur ff always...;)


Thanks 😃!! I know that you are a regular reader of this FF !! And you don't need to leave a comment 😉..I know you don't miss any parts of this FF!! Will continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

TY 😊😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...neha

loved it

update soon


TY 😃😊 for sure 😃

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