When love clashes -New FF (RagNa) Part 18 Pg 142 25/9 - Page 102

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Posted: 11 years ago
The update was just awesome. It was short but beautiful. Thnx 4 d update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Priti! Glad to have you back buddy! Missed you and your ff like hell. You made us wait for a long time and ta. ..da. ... you gave us a romantic one. No, the slap is not romantic. But the realisation that comes afterwards. Poor Raghav, still reeling under the effect of the kiss rather than the slap. Kalpi on the other hand is trying to tell herself it didn't mean anything to her. I think she accepted Prem's invitation to convince herself that Raghav is her past and he doesn't affect her anymore. Alas, will it be that easy! Then why would she flinch when Prem come closer to her? Why is she not comfortable with the male attention in the party?
Raghav is still thinking about the kiss when he comes to the party. Jealousy and anger takes over when he sees her with Prem. He can't get it that she belongs to someone else. He is not even aware of the pain when the glass piece pierces his hand. When they look at each other it's as if time has stopped and they have eyes only for each other. Possessiveness taking over when he sees her dancing with Prem. He couldn't stop himself from asking Kalpi for a dance and they swayed in perfect synchronisation with each other. Kalpi too realises that she has not gotten over him.
What will be her reaction when she comes to know that Raghav is Prem's boss or isn't he? How will Raghav convince her of his love? Eager to read the rest. It's good to have you back!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Main aa gayi!!🤪 First of all, welcome back!!🤗 Back to commenting..Oowie..thappad..😔Poor Rags.😭.But this time I am on team Kalpi..What does he think of himself!! He can do anything aur Kalpu is supposed 2 accept it all meekly!! Bewakoof!!😡

Duh..Raghav..the zing affected u more!!😉..By the way, yeh zing hota kya hain?😳 Huuuiii.."licked his lips" main toh margayeee

Kalpi out of breath..Kalpi kya..main bhi out of breath yahaan..and yes yes my heart is also pounding strongly..and my body also trembling !!😳😉 Gosh, just loved how u described the kiss..and her reactions to it!!👍🏼 Ek kiss se this much hungama..Kalpi control baby control!!😆

Red and black sari?Hot!! It seems everywhere I look it is this combo..just now saw it on Qh!! Prem kya..if I was there, ek seethe bajaati!!😆 Hope Prem didn't catch her waist when he came close..only Rags allowed to do it.

Yaar, I am fed up of this black Tshirt..please no more black Tshirts for him..let this be the last.😒

Why was Rags all cheerful? Us wine glass ke jagah , how I wish I could hav been his constant companion!!😳

Rags in a love hate relationship with the wine galss? Pichle FF main bhi he broke a glass!!😆 Jab kissy dimaag main ho to, why wud he be affected by the pain? So u mean to say that no one noticed this staring game between the two of them?🤔

his arms around her waist..satyanaash!! I have kissed other girls before...yeh kab hua?😡

consuming drinks like a camel at an oasis...first time reading such a simile..imagining it..nope not happening😆

Fav song..is it Suraj hua maddham? Ehm, How did the DJ know what his fav song was?😕

Overall loved it..dil ko sukoon mila...Sorry yaar for the mad comments..couldnt control myself☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aru18

nice update...continue soon


Hey Thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

thanks alot darling for cming back n updating story
amazing update priti
first i thought i must be 4get dis story n last chapy bt wen i start reading latest update i remember evry update.
Superb update. Rags didnt get angry on kalpi aftr slap n he is drooling over kiss wich clearly showing he love kalpi.
Other side kalpi also effecting by rags n she just pulling herself frm his thought wich is imposble cz she love him still.
Rags geting jealous seeing kalpi in prem's arm wow dats lv. He is geting more anxious by premna dance n finaly his lmt of tolerancy over n he goes to his lady love to dance wid her n start dancing passionately wow superb.
Priti plz plz cntn dis dance in nxt update also plz.



Hey Shoo 😃 Missed you. WOW!! That sound so good to hear that you never forgot the story even though I had stopped writing 😊 You completely got the gist of what I wanted to portray

I will keep that in mind and focus on the dance in the next update 😳

Thanks Shoo 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

An excellent update.

Now how will the story proceed????????????????.Raghav is madly in love with Kalpi.I do think
that Kalpi has some feelings towards him but not able to recognise them.
Secondly,Is Prem a true choice to Kalpi or he will use her for fulfilling his ambitions????????????


Thanks 😃 Well you gotta wait to see how the story progresses!! I won't keep you all waiting for long 😆😉 Yes he loves her but does not know that what he feels is LOVE. Kalpi knows that she loves him but is now engaged to Prem and won't spare Raghav so easily for what he did in the past.

About Prem = Relax and let the story unfold. Too early to comment on this right now 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmile

Welcome back Priti. Glad that you are continuing this FF. And amazing update. Amazing was Raghav's reaction after the slap. Lol, he is not realizing that he has already fallen for her and very deeply, otherwise egoistic Singhaniya would have remembered the slap as well. It will be interesting to see what will happen next. Will Kalpi marry Prem because it seems she is not comfortable with him. Will Raghav try to come in between them unconsciously or consciously, as he is burning in jealously. And it is evident from his past actions he will get what he wants by hook or crook. Waiting for next update.

Thanks for the PM 😊


Hey!! So good to see you 😃 I am glad to find the same excitement in you just as the way it always used to be 😊 You completely understood what I wanted to portray through this update. And, to my surprise you remember Raghav's character so perfectly!! Ehmmm!! Is that a hint for you to figure out the storyline? Yes it is 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niru04

Welcome back.thanks for d lovely update.update soon


Hey thanks. Glad to know you liked the part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Give me a hug for coming back. 😃🤗 I was missing your FFs and this one so-so much. Loved the update very much. The way you portrayed Kalpi fighting with her emotions first for Raghav; and then coming to realise that she still loves him was mindblowing. When shall Rags realise that he too loves her? Loved their kiss in the start and dance in the end.😆😳 Waiting to see Prem and other's reactions. BTW, who is Prem's boss? n is Raghav the host of the party, or was it Prem? could not understand that part much. Eagerly waiting for next update. Please do update soon. 😃


Hey Charu 🤗 I know you were missing it..Did sense the disappointment when I had thought of discontinuing it.. But that was past and now I am back. Thanks for relating to this part same as all the others.

Raghav will realise soon!! Very very soon!! He is being so stupid, haina? AAH!! Prem and others reaction.. maybe I will have to work on this then!! Well, Prem is not the host of the party neither is Raghav!! As per Raghav's character sketch he is quiet a party person and a well known businessman and as a result so comfortable in such parties!! Prem is just representing his company in one such high profile party!! Sorry, for the confusion !! I guess I should have been a bit more clear!! Maybe I took for granted that everyone remembers the character sketches..Sowwiee 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Yay Pituuu u r backkk!!!!!!! Loved this update! wow I loved that sataack! on raghav's chheek! Gosh dont they always start fire on the dance floor wen they dance together???? wwowooowww! Glad to see u here dear! Keep updatin...

thx for the chumneshwari update.


Yesssh!!! Main aa gya 😉😆!!! Hahaha!! I know you love to see Raghav getting slaps 😆😉 RagNa ka magic hai kahin bhi aag laga sakte hai 😳

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