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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
I just read all the chapters and they all are amazing
Kamla and her never ending Pakhi chanting 🤢
Raghav taking care of his Kalpi
Kalpi lashing out on Raghav and him taking it was awesome
Finally the divorce is done yahhh ;)
Love RagNa moment that they shared
I'm surprise that Vitthal tell kamla off and support his princess
I enjoy reading all the chapters
Love them all
I can't wait to read more
And u should send this to that damn lady who call herself cvs
And show her how the current storyline should goes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

Chawl

Kamla walking to and fro inside the house...thinking about vittal's orders...she says to herself "how can i nt spk to pakhi??? He can i stop myself from meeting her??, y did vittal do like dis?? Hey dev show me some path...she prays bappa..

Neetu see kamla impatiently walking...though she wanted to question her badly...she kept quite nt breaking kamla's thoughts..

Singhania mansion

All four finishes their breakfast...raghav moves to the room while the other three sitting in the living room...he first call his mom saying..."mom..i m leaving to pune for some work...will return only after two days"...by saying so he did cut the call without waiting for his mom's reply.

Raghav returns bac to the living room...sits next to kalpi...she is feeling shy to sit nxt him so closely in front of her baba and dada...she slightly moves away tto make some space between her and raghav...but this was caught by pakhya and he loudly laughs...vittal asks him to keep quite n stood up saying "k kalpi...nw its time for us to leave...u take care of urself...we will come to meet u soon...raghav baba take care of my daughter"...kalpi still silent nt responding to watever he said..
Vittal goes near kalpi touches her forehead and says "kalpi dnt worry abt ur aai...she will slowly understand you...ill make her clear abt ur actions..be calm"..

There goes a hug with baba and dada...vittal and pakhya leave...
Raghav seeing kalpi sad...goes near her and ask her..."are u ready?" She askd "wat?"...raghav comes close to her making her feel his hot breath...and says "hmmm...do finish the undone work"...stil kalpi maintained mock question mark in her eyes...raghav abt to touch her...wen she shouts "cockroach!"..."cockroach!"...pointing towards his bac...wen he turned bac towards where her finger was pointing...she hurridely rushed towards the bedroom...looking kalpi at running with big laugh...he was satisfied...and he followed her to the room...kalpi sits on the bed catching for breath...raghav comes with the same pace and sits next to kalpi..
After few seconds of taking deep breath...kalpi hugs him from side..and lay her head on hus chest...raghav hugs her bac caressing her head...gave a small peck on her forehead...raghav kept caressing her face and hair...whch made kalpi relax and she soon fell asleep..

Raghav lay her on the bed...making her comfortably sleep...moves out of the room...

Nw raghav calls sammy to come in with the workers...

After 4hrs ours of sleep...kalpi wakes up...she gets fresh in 5mins and decides come out...wen raghav enter the room closing the door behind him...he comes close to kalpi...before she could spk anythng...he tied her eyes with a cloth..
Kalpi: wats dis raghav ? Wat are you doing?? U want to play game nw??
Raghav: pressing his chin on her shoulder...kalpi sshh in a husky tone...nw u hv a surprise...
Raghav leas kalpi to the leaving room...he takes her to the middle of the room...then untie the cloth on her eyes..

Kalpi opens her eyes and gets shocked to see the decorated house...it was a traditional decoration...she moved to look around...towards her she saw mantap...looking at the mantap with pleasure and sadness both she stares bac to raghav...raghav just wants to read kalpi's eyes...but he had no expression on his face...
Kalpi(questions raghav with her eyes): wats all this...wat m seeing in front me is true??
Raghav (throught his eyes) : assures her yes...yes kalpi wat ever u are seeing is true...we are going get married today..
Before they could speak...there enters three other people wishing congradulations in same tune...they were sammy,vittal and pakhya..
Vittal handles a pack to kalpi and says "my daughter is getting married to her loved one...m very happy for her...go kalpi...get ready soon and come"...
Kalpi: baba...aai is nt there...hw cn i marry without her baba??. Hw cn i hurt her more by doing this??, hw can i??...vittal: holding her shoulders on both the side...see kalpi... u are almost got married...and evn ur aai knw this very well...and for once in ur life...think abt ur life than considering ur aai...i cant see u in pain or spoiling ur life for kamla..and u hv to do this for ur baba...if u dnt then ill tnk dat for u nly kamla is imp and nt me...
Kalpi: no baba...dnt say like this...i love u both equally...but..
Pakhya: uff kalpi...nw will u get dressed up or shud i wear ur bridal attire n get married to raghav??..
Everybody laughs..
Kalpi accepted halfheartedly but puts a condition making every1 shock..
Raghav: wat condition kalpi???
Kalpi: nt nw...ill say u after two days and every1 has to accept. .will u??
Raghav: sure...but promise me dat ull be always there for me and remain as mine..
Kalpi: promise...

Kalpi and raghav goes to room...kalpi removes the pack and sees a gorgeous bridal wear...and happy tears fill her eyes...raghav observes this and give her another pack...which had beauriful jewels matching to the bridal wear...she puts them aside ans pull raghav closer by his colar...oyi..Mr.Singhania...thank you...
Raghav was totally un aww..he did expect this from kalpi...
Before he could say anything kalpi askd him to leave the room as she should get ready...
Raghav: shall i help u kalpi?? Bcoz i dnt want u to be late for mandap...i hv no patience to waiit...
Kalpi hit him by her elbow making raghav wince in mock pain...
Kalpi: nw end ur drama...or else ill b late...n dnt blame me for dat..

Raghav disappointedly move out of the room..kalpi and raghav get ready as perfect couples..

Precap: marriage...
Wat is kalpi's condition ?

Sorry for the mistakes if any...hope ull njoy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
res
unres

this time i am the first one yippeee

awesome update dear 👏
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I just read all the chapters and they all are amazing
Kamla and her never ending Pakhi chanting 🤢
Raghav taking care of his Kalpi
Kalpi lashing out on Raghav and him taking it was awesome
Finally the divorce is done yahhh ;)
Love RagNa moment that they shared
I'm surprise that Vitthal tell kamla off and support his princess
I enjoy reading all the chapters
Love them all
I can't wait to read more
And u should send this to that damn lady who call herself cvs
And show her how the current storyline should goes



Aww...thank you sooo muc for liking it...
Yea i hv updated the nxt part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Mihika

res

unres

this time i am the first one yippeee

awesome update dear👏





😆 😆 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
tumhare pm se pehele hi padhke comment kar diya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
good update..thank you for the PM..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Mihika

tumhare pm se pehele hi padhke comment kar diya😆




Wat to do...u r deer...and my sweet dear...fast than me...hehe hehe 😛 😛 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: meena.mva




Wat to do...u r deer...and my sweet dear...fast than me...hehe hehe 😛 😛 😆

i like horses more than deers specially the black ones😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
brilliant👏👏👏
actually i want next episode ASAP😉

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