ragna ss: tere bin....nahi jeena...part 9 page 16...8/6/14 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Indu.

wowww...sweetieee u r so sweettt...thank u for such a wonderful update ya...all scenes are perfect awesome beautiful..u made my day...keep writing dear...cant wait..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

Singhania's mansion

Kalpi finishes her shower and come out with water dripping from her hair...she was wearing the saree selected by raghav and she was looking like an angel...she moves to the mirror and stand in front of it...suddenly her eyes notices her forehead...where she could still see a mall strain of sindhoor...she smiles looking at it any thinks...
Kalpi pov: our pair is made by bappa...hence he gave so many chances and had kept us attracted to each other like a magnetic field evn love magnetic strength of field...i must support raghav...i shud live my life for raghav...but with dat i will fill my aai's dream too...

Her thoughts were disturbed by the knock on d door...she knows it is none other than raghav...so she goes to the door slowly opens it and hide behind the door...raghav knocked again...but there was no response and the door was slightly opened...he enters into the room and glances at the room...he couldnt find anyone...he thinks to himself whether kalpi is taking her shower?? But its been a long time...k let me check..he move towards the washroom ..but was stopped by her touch...kalpi ran to raghav and hugged him from bac...her wet hair touching his shoulders and water dripping out it making raghav's shirt wet...
Raghav turns towards kalpi and says so Ms.kalpi...u are very naughty...each and every moment u make me fall for u again and again kalpi...wat hv u done to me?...he asks while caressing her hair...
Kalpi: to avoid his question...runs from there and starts brushing her hair...raghav see her from bac and notices that her blouse lays are untied and her bac is exposes to him making him mad...
He goes towards kalpi...holds her shoulder from the back...there they share a eyelock looking at the mirror...kalpi feels butterflies in her stomach feeling the heat increasing with cold touch of her hair on d bac...she slowly closes her eyes...
Raghav observes her reactions through mirror...he moves the little hair which were till sticking at her bac...to expose it completely...he can feel the shiver in kalpi's body and nw he can nvr stop it...he slowly takes the blouse lays to tie while caressing her soft skin...kalpi has burning sensation with his touch...once the lays tied..he gives a small peck on her nape...kalpi could no more allow him to go further...she turns towards him ang hugs tightly...raghav breaks the hug...taking her face in his hands looks at her face passionately...then he observes the sindhoor still there on her forehead...he looks at her eyes and was about to press his lips on hers...they hear a knock on main door...
Kalpi pushes him away and takes some steps bac...kalpi sweetly smiles looking down thanking the person who knocked the door...while raghav cursing him...
Raghav: ill see who it is...he leans towards her...(in a husky voice) ill come bac and finish my undid work...he winks at her before leaving the room...

At the door...raghav opens the door to be shocked at the two people who are standing there...he dont knw wat to speak...words struck at his throat...soon made courage to call them into the living room...both the persons enter the house...raghav asks them to be seated...while kalpi approaches the living room...

Every1 looks at kalpi..those two person are non other than vittal and pakhya...kalpi stops seeing the...after a few seconds she runs towards her baba..she tries to hug him...but stops as he might nt accept for watever happnd...she shook her head and keeps quite without uttering a word..
Vittal: hey..my princess...wont u give ur baba ur sweet hug??
Raghav and kalpi are shockd to hear this from vittal...they are just focusing on vittal as wat he is up to..
Vittal: haan..princess...aai said me everything that happened at the temple...i knw my daughter will never take a wrong decision that will hurt her parents and loose their self-respect...i believe in u kalpi...u r my daughter...u knw principles of life well than me...i knw there would hv been a valid reason for u take such a step...to break ur promise made to aai...i dnt knw wat made u to do so...but i trust u than me...
Kalpi: her eyes were filled with tears...for his dad understanding her so well...trusting her soo much...
Vittal looks towards raghav...raghav hides the eye contact with vittal..
Vittal: raghav baba...no...dnt hide ur eyes from me...dnt feel guilty...i hv forgiven u...
S initially i wanted to evn kill u for u ditching my daughter...but wen i understood the reason behind it,i cudnt be angry on u any more...i hv a great respect for father...on knowing that he was murdered by kapoors my blood was boiling...wen an employee hav so much affection and respect to ur father...i knw wat u might feel...i also understood how much u love my daughter...u married pakhi for ur mothers satisfaction...so ill forgive u raghav baba...but dnt hurt my daughter again...
Raghav: with tears in his eyes moves towards vittal...sorry vittal uncke and thank you for understanding my situation...ill never hurt kalpi again...ill take care of her as a flower...will never harm her nor allow others to harm her...
Now vittal,raghav and kalpi share a hug...inbetween pakhya seeing them share a hud without him..
Pakhya: wat is thos baba?? U always forget me...?? And kalpi u...u forgot ur dada for raghav? Its no fair...he said taunting her..
Vittal hits him on his shoulder and all four share a hug..

Nw all the four settle on the sofa ...raghav explains everything to vittal and pakhya...about the divorce to be a secret for an year...as gauri doesnt want raghav to give pakhi divorce...and he cant marry kalpi to give her respectful life without divorcing pakhi...and he also shows the divorce papers to vittal..
Now all the four are very happy...
Kalpi moves to the kitchen leaving the three in living room...
Raghav: who was craving for this opportunity ..nw jumps close to vittal and pakhya...informs them about the marriage tonight and he wants them to keep dat aa a secret and want to surprise kalpi..

But the trio did nt knw wat was kalpi thinking abt..

Precap: kalpi and raghav seperation...dnt worry its temproarily...

Will marriage happen or not?? Wat is kalpu's decision??


Sorry for the mistakes if any...love u all...happy dat u guys are liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
loving the fact that at least Vittu and Pakya r on her side...Nooo dont separate them even for a sec!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: amy.r

loving the fact that at least Vittu and Pakya r on her side...Nooo dont separate them even for a sec!!😊




No dear...nt seperating ragna bond...but by distance for them live the rest of the life happily...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read both the parts together lovely updates dear 👏 and sorry for being late😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update dear...thanks for pm...aur ye kya hai yaha par bhi twist..hahahahha...koi baat nahi ...itna pyar update ka baad chota sa twist chalega...waiting for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

read both the parts together lovely updates dear👏and sorry for being late😛



Its k dear...no sorry...thank you for ur comment 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Indu.

lovely update dear...thanks for pm...aur ye kya hai yaha par bhi twist..hahahahha...koi baat nahi ...itna pyar update ka baad chota sa twist chalega...waiting for next update...


Hahaha...twist is there...hope u will like ir
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Posted: 11 years ago
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meena too good dear..i havent read fully..but i will finish all parts and comment again..i cant stop commenting for this part..its awesome..u deserve hugs😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarusmiley

meena too good dear..i havent read fully..but i will finish all parts and comment again..i cant stop commenting for this part..its awesome..u deserve hugs😊😊😊



Aww...ur comments means a lot saru...i would hv been happy only by knwing that u read
..nw m on cloud9 dat u gav e me a hug...thank you so much dear...love u 😛

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