Kalpi FF...I will be back!!!!!final part with note updated - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved your writing. Very interesting story. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing FF, read all three parts together and can't wait to read further.


You write beautifully and the plot is so intriguing. Please update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4
Disha was irritated.Prem had been at it yet again.For the last few weeks,he had become increasingly annoying .He would turn up at her side at parties,meetings and flood her with meaningless compliments about her figure,her dress ,her looks and what not.These vexed her all the more.She hated men who could not look beyond the physical attributes of a woman,who looked at women as arm candies.In complete contrast was Samar Raizaada.The few times she had met h,she was impresses.Dignified,friendly ,witty and charming...she wished she could get to know him better.If only he did not work for that scumbag,Raghav Singhania.that was what she told Kalpi.Kalpi smiled...trust Disha to hang Raghav.He had hurt her so he was bad and no force in the world would make her change her opion.She was moved by her loyalty.

Kalpi noted Dishas growing interest in Sammy. She had always respected Sammy and thought him a true gentleman.Even in those crisis hours,he had been profusely apologetic to Kalpi ,saying by encouraging Raghav ,he had unwittingly hurt her. She would never forget ow he had offered her money to pay p the bond and leave the company,so that she need not torture herself.Sammy ,in her opinion was a true gentleman.If Disha liked him,why not get to know him better?So she praised sammy and told disha how helpful he had been.disha felt better now.Earlier she had thought that since sammy was raghavs friend,she would not take too kindly to her being friendly with Sammy.But now with kalpi giving her the green signal,she decided to befriend Sammy.

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Daksh Joshi laughed at his sisters update.Though he was a wee bit worried about Prem kapoor,he knew that Disha would take care of him.After all,both brother and sister were cut of the same cloth.Samar Raizaada...well ,now that seemed a bit complicated.looked like his sister evinced a wee bit more interest there.The name seemed familiar.Time for sleuthing.And of course,the other name ,Kalpana.No conversation of hers was complete without Kalpana.That girl had indeed impressed.At the start when Disha had asked him money for business,he had wondered what she hd had up her sleeve.But he always trusted her instincts and the ability to distinguish chaff from the corn,so he went with her.He was not wrong.Kalpana interested him...her initial mails had been hesitant but with each project,her confidence had increased and now,there were times,even he consulted her on many issues.But of course,all issues were strictly professional.Stray a little off the track and she would clam up.She respected him,valued his opinion ,but she also made it very clear that there were boundaries that none,except Disha could cross.He,in turn ,honoured her word.He knew that something devastating must have happened in the past for her to behave thus.Well,he would soon find out.But wait,why was he even curious? after all,she was only a business colleague..from when had he started evincing interest in their personal lives?It was because she has so many layers and you do not like to leave a story once started unfinished,said his inner voice.Or was it something more,why have so much concern for a girl you have not even seen ,yet why do you feel like you already know her?,said his heart.Oh buzz off!!!!said daksh and went to sleep

Page 3 crowd partying
Paaki was partying really hard.Ever since raghav had told her she was just his enemys daughter ,life had changed.She had initially felt sad but with time she realised that what she had felt for him was only infatuation and not love.she could not be bothered less that he did not love her.whAt had been hurt was her ego,not her heart.For that she wanted him to pay...hence the case.Moreover,now with her father ruined what could she survive on...air?It was all nice to listen to when Kamala told her ,but when it actually turned out to be true,she wondered whether she could live in squalor surrounded by love,but no designer wear.Kamalama...the lady was beginning to get on her nerves.All she could talk these days was on Paakis behaviour,stop partying,help Prem baba,save money for a rainy day...she was beginning to sound monotonous.Neetu ,herself seemed better.Though she still had not forgiven Neetu and Saail for the present mess they were in.At that moment,she saw a group gushing over someones photo...ooh he had looks that one could kill for ,a body that one would drool over for hours...Raghav seemed pale in comparison to him.Young,virile,dashing...adjectives could go on.It was when she asked who he was...the gals were like...have you lost it?do you not know daksh joshi?successful NRI businessman of the year.Paaki smelt the dollars.Vow!!!! Who so ever married him,their life would be a cakewalk,said one.Oh but he is always photographed with hot bods drooling all over him.Guess he can have his pick from the firangees.But he is still unattached,said the other,and that speaks volumes.Maybe he is waiting for one of us,giggled another empty head.
Paaki went home with thoughts of Daksh Joshi.He was now her sapna.Not for a minute did she pause to think that at one point,she had felt the same about Raghav ,a couple of years ago.
As she walked in tottering under the effect of alcohol and on a high ,thinking of Daksh,she bumped into Kamala.All her advise fell on deaf ears.Paaki just walked off without even bothering to reply.For the first time,kamala wondered whether she had erred in her decision.Of one thing she was sure Kalpi,no matter what,would never have behaved this way.Tears pooled in her eyes as she thought about them.They had moved out of the chawl.These days she had no idea even of their whereabouts.None of the three had received her calls.these days they had even changed their numbers.It was as if she had ceased to exist for them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc dear... at last kamla got real taste of pakhi...😆😆😆...
hope daksh comes bck to india soon... nd evryone gets to knw abt kalpi...😊..
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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daksh ll again fall fr kalpi...
paakhi ki tie tie phiss hogi 🤣

take tht kamla maa

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yet again Paakhi ki chop...😆
Awesome update..continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part V
Dishaaa,screamed Kalpi.What're you upto? She was wondering what had gone wrong with her friend.From last morning,she had been behaving weirdly.dragging Kalpi from the office to shops,making her tryout sarees,dresses and designer salwars...accepting some,rejecting many.Kalpi felt exhausted.All her protests fell on deaf ears.Thereafter it was the footwear shop,then the bag shop...whew.Finally done thought Kalpi.
No wait ,not quite yet,madam,said Disha.They went into a spa.Disha called the owner aside and whispered something to her.
Body massage!!!!screamed Kalpi are you mad?No way.You want me to strip and lie down while somebody does all these.What if they take my pictures through hidden cameras? What if...
Kalpiii,just chill.Do you have faith in me?she asked
More than in myself,replied Kalpi unhesitatingly,for all that you have done...
Shut up,just zip.no more of that pravachan.My ears are paining from listening to that over and over again.Ok ,so do you want to repay me? Well I too am going to collect my returns,Madam.Remember,Im into investment and never make a dead deal.So just close your eyes and shut your mouth,turn off your brains for once in alifetime and put yourself in my hands.Mark my words,you will never ever regret it.That is the magic of the great Disha...
Whatever,mumbled Kalpi
Many hours later at the Jadhav residence...
Vitthal opens the door to beaming Disha.arrey beti,what took you so long? Where is Kalpi? Why were both your phones switched off?Pakhya too questioned.
Shhh...why do all the Jadhavs talk so much,she screamed.Both of you just close your eyes and open it on the count of three

Both men stood with their mouths open.Disha laughed with happiness.Kalpi went red and bent her head.kalpu ,what has happened,screamed pakhya who recovered first,you are loking ek dhum chakaas.Vitthal came upto her and looked at her with tears in his eyes.My rajkumari is truly looking like one today.

Well gentlemen,welcome to the complete makeover of Kalpana Jadhav ,directorof JD constructions.Since I am pleased with the initial response,let me announce that the time has now arrived to showcase Kalpana ,a rare combination of beauty with brains to the outside world.Let us push her back to face the lions and let them see that she will fight back aka gladiator style.Its the final fight now...Kalpi,the final phase for which you have steeling ourself all these years.

Kalpi was apprehensive.Was she really ready? Disha sensed her insecurities.Placing a hand on her shoulder,she said,Trust me Kalpi.Go ahead.You are not alone.We are there behind you.We will be there to lift you should you fall.But im confident that this time you will run your race alone and will emerge the victor.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome.
read all parts in one go.
loved it.
really liked this kalpana.
hope u dont make kalpana go to raghav later.
plz dont do that.
i like to see kalpi-daksh in a frame.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update... makeover of Kalpi...thats Really good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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osum ,brilliant., jst luv it...

cnt wait to read more... update soon...

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