Kalpi FF...I will be back!!!!!final part with note updated - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So good can't wait till next update. This dash sounds like right person for kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all updates in one go...one of the best ff on our kalpu... nice plot and nicely written...happy to see kalpi achieving her ema... this kamla pakhi prem 😡 so disha likes Sammy..glad you didn't paired him with pakhi... and daksh is really a nice person...but need to be careful from pakhi... and what about our Raghav???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written! 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8
At Disha and Kalpis insistence,Daksh checked out of the hotel and moved in with the Jadhavs.Disha was very happy today...things were going her way.Kalpi had achieved her first success,she had been proved right in trusting Kalpi,their company was now in the top rung and its shares were soaring...most importantly Daksh had praised Sammy and said he was a great guy.She also saw how well Daksh and vitthal had bonded.Daksh ,turning up was the biggest surprise for her and also the icing on the cake.There was only one thing that troubled her.Daksh and Kalpi seemed uncomfortable in each others presence...Was it kalpis past ,but Daksh was not aware of it.She had never betrayed Kalpi's confidence.Then why were they so formal.An inner voice said,maybe that was a cloak to hide their true feelings.Yes,she was sure.She had seen them connect when they had shaken hands ...She smiled.Time for part II of her plan.
As Daksh sipped his cup of tea,his mind went back to the meeting hall.His decision to turn up today had been taken at the spur of the moment.As he had spoken to Disha and Kalpi,the previous day,he had realised the import of the meeting for the two of them.He did not know why ,but Disha had said this would mark the return of Kalpi. Return to what? and she said she had worked with Sammy...which means she was with Singhania. Why then ,when Sammy had been forthcoming in his praise,had Raghav stood apart,with that brooding look on his face? Why had Prem Kapoor been exceedingly scathing in his remarks?And that airhead who had called herself Kalpis sister had all but thrown herself at him? There was a bigger picture than what he saw.Anyway,he was glad he had decided to come...for Disha.A small voice at the back of his mind said,Disha only?Not Kalpi? He was proud
Of her today,he thought.The way she had held herself,the way she had put across her thoughts with conviction so lucidly,vow!!!!she was one heck of a girl
Kalpi looked at the waves beating at the rocks.Today was her first victory...But instead of dwelling on it ,her mind constantly went back to Daksh Joshi.When Disha had asked him why he had turned up,he had replied,"for you,my sis.I knew that this was your big day.I wanted to be there...for my family.She thought of how he had sided with her in front of the entire builders association...it was like the lion saying these two were mine,mess with them and you mess with me.There had been an instant undercurrent of respect when Daksh had praised her to one and all.Disha was true...after along time she saw a man who respected ladies and actually fought for them.in the past,she was always aware of men falling like pins at Paakis feet,except probably Raghav.But he too ultimately went behind Paaki.But Daksh did not so much even spare her a second glance.Of course,said the voice,he will be having more beautiful women in Boston.But ,remember what Disha had told .He had never had a girlfriend,he was waiting for the right person ,did you even have such guys in the world today?
To celebrate this special victory,they decided to go out for dinner.Vitthal excused himself and Pakhya was called away on duty.So it was only the three of them.As a spur of the moment decision,for disha,Kalpi asked her to invite Sammy.A silent glance of understanding passed between Daksh and Kalpi.He knew why she was doing it.This was what troubled both of them.It had hardly been few hours since they met,yet they could read the other like a book.Kalpi and Disha both took special care to get ready.Disha ...understandable,but Kalpi? She too was confused.but wait,after all she was going to be seen in Daksh s company ,so she could not look like a drab and put him to shame,she justified.Ha ha laughed her inner conscience.Something about him interests you.Be honest ,kalpi,for the first time in so many years,you have started thinking like a woman ...
Dinner was fun.the quartet was so comfortable with each other.Sammy and Daksh caught up with old times and regaled the girls with humorous tales of their football team. Daksh knew that his sis had fallen and fallen hard.He saw too that Sammy was equally interested.they just need to be left alone to take the next big step.As it was Sammy,whom he knew to be a decent guy,he had already blessed this relationship.As they stood up to leave,he told the trio,"sammy if you do not mind,would you kindly see Disha home?I have some calls from Boston coming.I would like Kalpi around for her inputs.Disha ,im sure will be bored in the process.So could you take her off our shoulders and do me a huge favour?"Sammy was only too happy to oblige and as the two walked away,two pairs of hands crossed their fingers.

" i hope you did not mind me including you in this conspiracy,Kalpi,"daksh said ,as they walked down the beach."but i felt that they really needed time together.who knows before this night is over,we might get to hear yet another snippet of good news?"
Kalpi was happy for Disha and sammy .She too wanted the same.She had meant to talk to Daksh,but even before that, he had read between the lines."she's my sis,kalpi.i love her.And when I love and care for somebody ,I will somehow know of their thoughts even before they tell it aloud" As he said that,both their eyes met.Kalpi felt he looked deep into her soul.For Daksh,it was as if he received a jolt of electricity.As the lightning flashed in the night sky brightening it,Daksh was illuminated.His mother had always told him that when he found the right girl,he would just know...how ,she couldn't tell ,but he would know.Though he had been skeptical,he had faith in his mother,so he had waited all these years,resisting the many temptations that had come his way...and today he understood what she had meant .For at that very moment,he knew...that for him ,for life, Kalpi was his girl.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Really good. Awesome. Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
How much I wanted the writers of EMA go through your story & amend their story...So well you have portrayed Kalpi & introduced new characters...one suggestion...what Raghav is going through during all this should also find place in your story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 9
Kalpi was deeply disturbed.her mind was in turmoil.she could not understand herself these days.Many many years ago ,one night she had taken a decision and she had stuck by it,no matter what and had found peace,if not happiness.but for the past week ,she had begun to question herself whether it was enough.That night ,she had decided that there was no place for love in her life ever.Raghav was and would be the only love of her life ,but for his act,even he would never be a part of her life ever.And with that she had locked her heart and shut herself to any emotions.The first time she had allowed herself to feel anything was when she met Disha...she had felt hope,then with Dishas friendship came affection and finally with her victory,happiness.But ,never love.She had never opened that part of her heart.She now realised that Disha had slowly but surely unlocked ,one by one,each and every emotion that she had locked...and her brother was threatening to unlock the most important one.Dare she do it? by doing so,will she be opening herself to pain and sorrow and defeat yet again?She knew she had to face the truth.Daksh was affecting her in a way,she had never been before.
With Raghav ,it had been the first flush of love ,she had paid the consequences.But now after so many years,she had known the bitter side of rejection...she was more mature.Daksh and Raghav were poles apart.Raghav had been mature in age but was a child mentally.Daksh ,on the other hand was closer to her age,yet he had a mental maturity that belied his age.He had met with success at a young age but yet had remained grounded.He had grown up with love and security that a strong family bond could provide,he had no emotional baggage.He believed in the sanctity of marriage and respected women.In short,he was any girls dream man.But most importantly,would he be her dream come true? She knew he liked her,but love? Did he look upon her as only his sisters friend,the lame dog they had picked up from the streets and reared or did his feelings run deeper?moreover,he was unaware of her past...what would he then think?
and Raghav ,where did he now stand with her? He had been the love of her life.agreed she had not forgiven him,but all those feelings of desire that he had aroused in her,what of them?would all those be rekindled if she was in his arms again?Was her feeling for Daksh just an infatuation that had come from denying herself all those emotions all these years?Plagued as she was by all these questions,Kalpi sorely missed a female presence in her life to whom she could unburden herself and seek solace without bias.
Fate has a funny hand in shaping things.What Kalpi was unaware of was that with time ,things would unravel itself and she would get a clear picture of her future life.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesome superb fabulous updates..👏 Really loved the way u described kalpi's dilemma..superb ff..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome ff just read all the parts in one go, but why u seperating my ragna, pls ragna in the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ongoing I m loving daksh and kalpi he is just the type if guy she needs. Can't wait for next part. Awesome.

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