THE GLASS WALL : RAGNA(Ashna) FF, Part-24, Pg 141, 14/12/15

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singhania

@singhania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

My dear Charu, too good yaar.👏 As soon as I finished reading, I couldnt help myself to say in my Mauritian Bhasha "Mari Bon" meaning more than superb. Yeah u r really one in a million, this update has got everything and it kept the reader's eyes glued to the screen.👍🏼 I coudlnt guess what would happen next coz usually the readers can imagine the following scene but with u its different and I luv it. Looking forward to your next update,please make it soon yaar & dont forget to PM me. RagNa Forever!!!❤️😉

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Wow Charu! Such an eventful update. Kalpi manhandled by Prem. Eww, I thought I'm gonna puke when Prem tried to kiss her! Thank god for the timely intervention of police that he got arrested. How dare he think he will kiss her, obsessive freak! At least Kalpi had the sense to call Chaya, smart girl! Prem wanted to kiss her in a garden just like Raghav did. Creepy... . Hope Raghav makes him rot in jail for even touching his Kalpi.

I was waiting for your comment. 😃 Even I didn't like it as I wrote it! But then Prem was always an obsessive lover, so I'd to show something to portray his obsession. Couldn't think of any other way! Sorry, if that was a bit too much to read. 😳 n please be assured I'd have never shown Prem to kiss Kalpi; something else...yes! But never a kiss! Poor Kalpi would have gone in a shock and it'd have taken a much efforts to make her normal again. Even Raghav would've had a tough time then! yes Prem wanted to kiss Kalpi as he'd seen Raghav kissing her, since that image was imprinted on his mind and he wanted to wash off that image; and build a new one of him and Kalpi there instead; and he wanted to wash off any marks of beautiful moments which Raghav may have given to Kalpi with his own. Hope that makes sense! 😆 n don't worry Raghav is hell angry on Kalpi and so he'll everything he can to make him rot in jail. 😛

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dimple

@DimpleAggarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Really,this is so scary update..Prem is mad,sadist n 🤬
Chii ...Yuckkk...He want to copy d style n place of kissing also
But Raghav did all d possible thngs he can do to keep his Kalpi safe❤️
Raghav-Pakhi mrrge is still a big mystery😕
Finally u ended d update wth police arresting prem😊 orelse i cant imagine my
condition w8ng fr nxt update,thnkng n worrying ab8 wht will hppn to kalpi😆
scary but awesome update dear😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: appyK
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One word to describe the update PERFECT... You actually wrote it brilliantly.. loved it how you gave justification to everything leaving no space for doubts for your readers like rags not using chopper and etc...
😲😲 Prem is quite scary.. poor kalpi.. thank god cops came on time..
Great update..😃

Awww...This one word made my day. 😃 Thank you so much. 🤗 Love you. 😃❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: singhania
My dear Charu, too good yaar.👏 As soon as I finished reading, I couldnt help myself to say in my Mauritian Bhasha "Mari Bon" meaning more than superb. Yeah u r really one in a million, this update has got everything and it kept the reader's eyes glued to the screen.👍🏼 I coudlnt guess what would happen next coz usually the readers can imagine the following scene but with u its different and I luv it. Looking forward to your next update,please make it soon yaar & dont forget to PM me. RagNa Forever!!!❤️😉

Oh wow. 😃 A Big Hug and Thank YOu! readers like you keep me motivated and keep me going to make better efforts. 😃 🤗 I'd say "Mari Bon" comment... I loved it 😃 and thanks I learnt a new word! 😃❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: DimpleAggarwal
Really,this is so scary update..Prem is mad,sadist n 🤬
Chii ...Yuckkk...He want to copy d style n place of kissing also
But Raghav did all d possible thngs he can do to keep his Kalpi safe❤️
Raghav-Pakhi mrrge is still a big mystery😕
Finally u ended d update wth police arresting prem😊 orelse i cant imagine my
condition w8ng fr nxt update,thnkng n worrying ab8 wht will hppn to kalpi😆
scary but awesome update dear😊

Ha ha...I know it was scary for me too as I wrote it. 😆 Sorry for scaring you all. 😳 he wanted to copy the style and place because he not only wanted to wash off Raghav & Kalpi's image of that day which was imprinted in his mind; but wanted to make a new imprint on his mind of him and Kalpi. he wanted to erase remnants of Raghav's love & memories from Kalpi's mind and body; making sure she never thinks of going back to Raghav again even if Raghav decides to give divorce to Pakhi sometime.

Raghav-Pakhi marriage questions shall surely be answered but it shall not be now. It'll take sometime, unless I can think of something better trackwise. I'll do try to reveal it sooner.

yes I ended the torture of Prem by his arrest for the same reason since I knew it'd be all scary and no ray of hope update would be a too much to bear for all. 😆😳 Thank you so much for your sweet feedback. 😊

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Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Aanchu!🤗I saw your name as the first one to comment and involuntarily a smile came on my lips; and I knew that you'll unres it soon.😆😃❤️I am happy that i can make you blush with my updates and that maybe you too love blushing with them.😃😳But this time it really was a totally different kind of update.😆So I am relieved that you loved this type too.😃

Was it really that different? 360 degree turn? Raghav scenes were less, so relieved that you could connect with him. I wanted to show his care despite the fact he is away from Kalpi physically. yes, Kalpi loves Raghav too much still and the only person she knew who'd have done anything for her and who could have saved her. She doesn't have that much faith even on her family. No, I am not ending this now or soon. There's still some time for it, and revenge part from Sahil Kapoor is pending still. A few more updates may go before I can end this.😊😃

360 change mtlb i thought u vl drag kalpi kidnapping,increase in prem obsession ...I mean all this happen of sudden dat I was shocked...nt in a story 360 change...I hope u r understanding me wht I m saying...

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

aww thank god kalpi got saved ...and prem arrested

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Superb update..charu..

when prem was going to kiss her .,i was expecting some miracle to happen...nd it happened.,

i will kill this jerk prem😡 he is such an obssessd lover ...oh god it seems a lover would mind if i join lover word with prem😆 So he is an obssessed attracted person to a girl...

in the whole update i would like to thank chaya..for her police complaint against prem..though it was kalpi's brain who acted smartly in this scary situation also..that is why she is different from others..

i just noticed prem.,😳 the name does not see perfect with this jerk...his name shall be change to hates...

Edited by zindgidilse - 11 years ago

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#520

I had my heart in my mouth while reading this chapter, just by thinking what Prem will do with Kalpi, it's good that Prem got arrested just in time, just wondering if Raghav will tell Paakhi the real reason for this marriage, lovely update

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