RagNa (AshNa) FF: You Are a Star ~COMPLETED PAGE 89~ NOTE Page 90 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Omg kamla and Kalpi grandmom are two miserable people
Poor Kalpi, I wonder how long she will put up with their nonsense
Awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5:

Paakhi went into Kalpi's cabin and shook her shoulders. "Kalpi..? Utho na." Kalpana's eyes immediately popped open. "Paakhi?" she asked, looking slightly confused. "Hum kahaan hai?" "Office mein aur kahaan?" Paakhi told her. Kalpana looked around while rubbing her eyes. "Mujhe sone do!" she said to Paakhi, immediately putting her head back on the table. All night she hadn't been able to sleep and now she couldn't stay awake. "Kalpana..yaar this is the office" Paakhi said. "Haan toh?" Kalpi asked. Paakhi let out a sigh. Kalpi was not about to listen.
If only...Idea! If she sent Kalpi's favorite actor to her, all her sleep would go away. Paakhi went into Raghav's cabin. "Sir, baat yeh hai ki Kalpana soh chuki hai" Paakhi said, hiding her smile. "Kaam chor" Raghav muttered under his breath while getting up out of his chair. "I'll go check on her" Raghav said.
He went into Kalpi's cabin and saw her fast asleep. He leaned against the door for a few moments just watching her. She was so pretty! And so nice and innocent!
Finally, getting back to his senses he went forward. He shook her shoulders to wake her up. "Get Up!" Raghav ordered. "Mmm..sone do na" Kalpi mumbled in her sleep. "This is work, not your bedroom" Raghav said firmly. "Tum apne aap ko samaj te kya ho?" Kalpi asked. Raghav smirked and said,"Mein..Raghav Singhaniya!"
What happened next, Raghav would never have believed. He did not know he had such an effect on her. Hearing his name even in her sleep, she jumped up right out of her chair. "S-sorry, Sir" Kalpana said. Raghav nodded. "It's fine." Kalpana waited for him to say something else. Finally, unable to stop himself, he said, "How would you like to have lunch with me, Kalpana?" Kalpana smiled. "Sure" she replied. "Okay" Raghav said excitedly.
Raghav and Kalpi are both sitting at a table in the canteen. Raghav watches in amusement as Kalpi pulls out a bunch of Indian Foods from her lunch box. "Nice..tumaari Ma boht acha khaana bana leti hai" Raghav said. Kalpana frowned. "Nahi...yeh khaana toh meine khud apne liye banaiya hai" she told him. "Always?" Raghav asked. She nodded. "But your mom.." "She only packs my brother and father's lunch as they are men" Kalpana responded. Raghav saw the hurt on her face as she said that. Taking a bite out of his sandwich, he asked curiously, "So what made you want to work here?" Kalpana looked away not meeting his eyes. "What?" Raghav asked. "I never wanted to work here" Kalpana finally said. Raghav looked at her in surprise. "Phir tumne ye job kyun ki?" he asked her. Kalpana got frustrated. True, he was her favorite actor and all but that doesn't mean he would ask her anything. "Excuse me" Kalpana said. Raghav watched as she walked out the door.
Kalpana is sitting on a bench outside watching a couple of kids rehearsing for their play for school. She didn't notice when Raghav came and sat down next to her. Finally, when the kids left, Raghav cleared his throat. "Quite interesting kids" he said. Kalpana nodded. He stared straight ahead for a few moments and Kalpana watched him. "Sorry" she said, finally. "Don't be" Raghav said. "If you don't want to share your story with me, it's totally understandable." Kalpana shook her head. "It's not that. It's just if I told you, you wouldn't believe me. I mean it would sound so unreal."
Kalpana sat there looking down at her hands. She was surprised when Raghav took hold of her hand. She looked up into his eyes. "I would believe you, Kalpana" he murmured. "You can tell me." "I-I-" Kalpana started. "Go on" Raghav said letting go of her hand as she stood up.
"Theek hai" Kalpana said. And then she told him. About her dream of becoming an actress. Her mom's dream for her to become a businesswoman. How bad she felt when her own family didn't treat her in a nice way. When she was finished, there were tears in her eyes. "Kalpana..." Raghav started to say. "I know you probably don't believe me" Kalpana said. "I do" Raghav said quietly. Just then Raghav's phone started ringing. One of his fans. "Later" Raghav said into the phone immediately hanging up.
When the phone rang, Kalpana came out of her sad world and realized what she had done. She had shared things with Raghav that she hadn't even shared with her best friend Paakhi. But then again Paakhi already knew those things as she had been with her since childhood. All the same, how could she have been so weak?
As Raghav hung up, he noticed Kalpi looking worried. She didn't know him too well and she had told him a lot. Understandable. She tuned around wiping her tears. "Well bye" she said. Before he could answer she ran back into the building. He clenched his fists. How could a family be so mean?
Sorry for the short update. I will try to update very soon. Please ignore my mistakes and tell me how it was.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awesome update!!!!
Kalpi spoke up in front of raghav...dats nice waitin 4 his nxt move!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Its really nice. Plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
WOW...
Its amazing...
Finally opened up to Ragav,...
Plzz cont soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
amazing update... but sad for kalpi😭...
hope rags brings happiness bck inti her lyf ... watin fr next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awww, short but sweet update. Good job Pookhs! :) At least Kalpi opened up to Raghav! Update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
lovely story n nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6:

Kalpana went back into her cabin and picked up a file. As she started writing on it, Paakhi came in. "Kya yaar, phir se kaam?" Paakhi asked, sitting across from her. Kalpana looked up at her best friend. "Paakhi, yahaan hum kaam karne hi aate hai." "I know yaar, but agar humme saara din yahi betaana hai toh kutch maze bhi kar hi lene chahiye na?" Paakhi asked. Kalpana shook her head and continued writing in her file. "Veise Paakhi.." Kalpana said. "Tumme kya kaam nahi hai ki tum humeisha mujhse baate karne aati rehti ho?" ""Voh.." Paakhi started when a message came on her phone. Sammy. "Kaam hai na, abhi aati hoon" Paakhi said eagerly jumping out of her chair and running out. Kalpana smiled and shook her head. Paakhi was so bright.
Paakhi knocked on Sammy's cabin. "Come in" he called out. She put on a smile and went in. "Sit" Sammy said, gesturing towards the chair. Paakhi nodded and sat down. "Yes?" she asked. "Did you complete that ABY file I gave you?" he asked her. "Almost finished" she replied. He nodded. "Okay, that's all I wanted to ask." Paakhi grinned. He could've just called her on the phone. "Veise.." Sammy said. "Raghav ne mujhe bataiya ki tum Hrithik Roshan ki kitni baddi fan ho." Paakhi blushed. "True" she said. "So.." Sammy said. "Kyun na hum usski film dekhne challe, iss weekend?" "That's a good idea" Paakhi said. "Maybe Kalpi and Raghav Sir should come as well" she added.
Sammy looked thoughtful. "Great idea" he said. "I'll talk to Kalpi about the plan" Paakhi said. "Alright" Sammy said.

"No" Kalpi said to Paakhi a few minutes later. "But why?" Paakhi asked her. "Ai won't agree" Kalpi said. "Especially with Aaji around, no ways." "Come on Kalpi don't be such a bore" Paakhi said. "Who says I want to be a bore?" Kalpi said. "Trust me I don't" Kalpana said. "But what can I do when my mom and Aaji don't let me do anything fun!" "You sure can" said a voice. Both the girls looked up to see who was talking. Raghav.
He came in and sat down next to Paakhi in front of Kalpi. "Sir, aap yahaan?" Kalpi asked. "Haan mein" Raghav said with a grin. "How about I ask your family about it?" Kalpana looked at Paakhi who was nodding excitingly. They would surely listen to Raghav. Kalpi shook her head. "No thank you, Sir. My family will allow me if I ask them." "But just now you said they wouldn't" Raghav said. Kalpi opened her mouth to protest when Paakhi said, "That's a great idea, Sir, why don't you come to her house today?" Kalpi shot a furious look to Paakhi who just shrugged. So that was the plan. Raghav would visit her house in the evening. All thanks to Paakhi.
After Kalpana was finished with her work, she immediately went home to ask Kamla for permission to go to the movies. So that Raghav wouldn't have to come.
Aaji had her hands on her hips. "Movies?" she asked her. "Nahi chodi, yeh kate nahi ho sakat!" "Ai, aap Aaji ko samjhaiye na" Kalpana pleaded her mother. "Kalpi..tumaari Aaji sahi toh keh rahi hai" Kamla told her. "Sun liya?" Aaji asked Kalpi. "Aaji, Paakhi ko bura lage ga" Kalpana said. "Toh?" Kamla asked. "Haan aur veise bhi" Aaji said. "Agar humme tumaare bura lagne se koi farak nahi parta toh yeh Paakhi kaun hai, huh?" "Aaji.." Kalpana said. "Aap kabhi toh kutch acha boliye." "Ab tu mujhe bolegi ki mujhe kya karna chahiye?" Aaji said. She took Kalpana's arm and dragged her off to her room. Pushing her onto her bed she locked the door and went out.
Kalpana started crying. She had only asked for their permission. It's not like she had already gone to the movies. So why were they still locking her up like she was a bride who was about to run away? Absolute nonsense.
Kalpi didn't know when she fell asleep. She woke up when she heard the doorbell ringing. She opened the window of her room which had bars on it.
Kamla got up and went to open the door. "Saab aap?" Kamla asked excitedly. She knew that Raghav was a famous actor. "Andar aiye" she told him. Raghav nodded and came in. While he sat down on the couch, Kamla asked, "Itne badde actor humaare ghar mein?"
Raghav smiled and said, "Shehd Kalpana ne aapko bataiya nahi lekeen mein usska boss hoon." "Kya?" Kamla asked, immediately standing up. "Ji" Raghav said. "Voh dikhaye nahi deh rahi?" "Voh apne kamre mein hai" Kamla said. "Mein abhi bula ke laati hoon." Raghav saw as Kamla shot Aaji a look. Aaji was to keep Raghav busy in talking so he didn't notice Kamla opening that huge lock hung up on Kalpi's door.
"Humaari Kalpi ne office mein kutch galat toh nahi kiya?" Aaji asked. "No, bilkul nahi" Raghav said, as he watched Kamla opening the lock with her key out of the corner of his eye.
When Kalpi came out along with Kamla he saw that she was looking sad. "Ji Raghav Baba bataiye" Kamla said. 'Vah' Raghav thought. 'Khud ki behti ke saath itna bura bartaav aur ek film actor ko Raghav Baba bulaa rahi hai.'
"Mein aap logo se ejaazat lene aaiya tha ki Kalpana humaare saath movie dekhne chal sakti hai?" he asked. "Na-" Aaji started, but Kamla interrupted her, "Bilkul, Raghav Baba issme kya hai?" "Okay, mein baar intezaar karunga" he said. Kamla nodded as Raghav went out. "Ja get ready!" Kamla ordered Kalpi once Raghav had gone out. "Lekeen Kamla" Aaji started. "Yeh chodi keise.." "Aapne suna nahi, Ma Ji ki voh Kalpana ka boss hai?" Kamla told her. "Agar hum na karte toh keise lagte?" Aaji nodded understandingly. "Ab go get ready!" Kamla told Kalpi.
Kalpana was in tears as she got ready. Raghav had asked once and her family had agreed. She had been pleading for an hour and they wouldn't agree. Why couldn't her family listen to her?

Raghav's Car:

"Paakhi aur Sammy hum se theater mein milege" Raghav told Kalpi. She nodded while trying to control her tears. She was still a little sad. Raghav noticed this and said, "Relax, Kalpana." "I am relaxed, sir" Kalpana said. "Right" Raghav said. "Veise.." Kalpi said. "Aap actor keise banne?" "Mein?" Raghav asked. Kalpana nodded, "Haan." "I've always been interested in becoming one" Raghav told her. "And after college I went straight to fulfill that dream." "Nice" Kalpana said with a smile. "Music?" he asked her. She nodded. They both reached for the play button when their hands bumped into each other. "Sorry" Raghav said with a smile. "It's okay" Kalpi said bringing her hand back. Raghav pressed the play button and the song 'Tum Hi Ho' came on. He looked towards Kalpi to see her reaction. She was blushing and looking down at her hands.😳
'She looks so pretty and cute. So innocent' Raghav thought to himself as he gazed at her. 'Am I falling for her?' he asked himself. He grinned. He had always thought he would fall in love with an actress but now he was falling in love with a to-be-actress. Ah..life didn't always turn out as planned, did it...?

Precap: Kamla invites Sammy, Paakhi, and Raghav in for dinner. Raghav explores Kalpi's room in interest.

I hope you all enjoyed this part. I apologize for any errors I might've made. Please do tell me how it was. I will try to update soon.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Itz awesum dear...
Just loved it... 😊
Plzz continue soon... :)

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