Pillar of Strength (Ragna) Final Chapter page 119 UPDATED 7/10/14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Author's Note: Huge round of APPLAUSE and Thanks to everyone who liked and commented on this ff! My internet is awfully slow and that is another reason why I reply to each and every WONDERFUL person who commented together.

A CUPCAKE of gratitude to samy18, Yellowdiamond, Priyarun123, cutegurl224, sasir, 007jindal, drdee142, sapnapari, leelu0001 and esha143.

Queries: It is (Ra)ghav -kalpi ff not (Ra)hul-kalpi, hope this chapter convinces you the nature of their friendship. RagNA face to face encounter is up after a couple of chapters !!!

Part 6 (Enjoy)

At Sighania Chawl,

Vitthal is out of town because of work and Pakya was working at repair store. Pakhi uses this time to show Kamla, the picture and add fuel to fire exaggerating the innocent friendship.

Kamla blinded with fury, jealously of Kalpi-so called Ma and now Rahul is ready to drill Kalpi and remind her of her roots.

Kalpi comes home while talking to Ma on the other line, which was her daily routine.

Kamla: Kalpi, what is this? This is what you so called Ma taught you? How to catch a rich guy? Pakhi told me everything and this picture. Look at Pakhi, my upbringing, where did I go wrong with you? I got you best education and this (says while crying). You were mine and Vitthal's Kalpana (our dream achiever but not like this). Pakhi beams at hearing her being praised while feeling bad for Kalpi. On the other hand, Kalpi's eyes are appalled with hurt evident in them.

Kalpi astounded and finally understanding the situation decides enough is enough while Juhi feels sad for Kamla for not understanding her own daughter. She knew the innocence of Rahul and Kalpi's friendship. Had only Kamla tried to spend time get to know the real Kalpi?

K: Bas aii! I won't hear anything against Ma. She was there when you were busy with Pakhi. You sent me away, aai. She taught me about puberty, bee and bird's talk when you weren't there but I didn't complain. Before accusing me of such crimes why didn't you ask? Yes, Rahul is a friend but that is it. He and I have a comfortable yet special relationship because I sense loneliness in him that I felt when I was alone in hostel. Aii, I'm your blood daughter and have your genes. You only taught to take care and help others, that is what I was doing. I do everything for you and yet you always doubt me. I came back for you, to study in best college to become the best memsaab for you and baba only. I love and respect you, aii; I know you sent me away for my future and I'm grateful for it but you are not responsible for making me feel grateful for having you, baba and dada in my life but my Ma is. I don't question your affection and love for Pakhi, so why are you questioning mine for my Ma?

Kamla and Pakhi feel extremely guilty and apologize profusely and promising to trust her thereafter. Juhi feels extremely proud of Kalpi for handling the situation so maturely yet respectfully.

J: I'm so proud of you, Kalpi. I love you meri bacchi. Now wipe those tears, go to bed and I will tell you a story like I used to by putting your head in my lap, oil in your hair (double ponytails) and you interrupting every minute to add your own opinions and twists.

Emotionally drained Kalpi feels relaxed hearing Ma's voice falls asleep. Next few months pass in the blur, Kalpi and Kamla got closer but not to the level a mother-daughter should, with Vitthal, Pakya, Rahul and Ma in her life she was content. Her routine was set walk in morning, renewing her oath in front of Kapoor house, dragging Rahul with ears to mandir, college, study, family and sleep. Pakhi too suddenly changed her attitude towards Kalpi. Kalpi was suspicious at first and then laughed thinking Ma will say 'Kya Kalpi, forget studies, open your detective company and call it Shaki Sherni''

Little did she know that Rahul hearing this whole fiasco threatened Pakhi to not become a huddle in Kalpi's life or else he will make sure, she is the laughing stock of college.

6 months before Kalpi's and Pakhi's college is to end, Raghav and Sammy get the opportunity to come back and settle back in Mumbai.

Sammy and Raghav last day in USA:

Sammy drinks heavily, 'Finally, Raghav mere dost, we achieved our first revenge.'' 'Dad'', raising glass to heaven, 'cheers''. Mr. Richardson is paying for his crimes and will keep paying for a very long time. Raghav, you the best not wait best sey bhi best friend, one could ask for. Thanks bro. We like Jai and Veeru from sholey, I can imagine the whole flim; Sahil and Richardson combo is Gabbar. You Jai since you are too serious and will fall for some quiet,indian types, innocent soul. Me, veeru dancing with a fashionista like basanti. Soch mere dost, our significant others are waiting in some part of Mumbai missing us.

Suddenly Sammy starts laughing loudly and Raghav raises his eyebrow while smirking.

Raghav POV: I heard people going crazy in sadness, never knew it could happen in happiness. Out loud says, what's wrong? Your brain screws fell off or wait you left each one at each of your girlfriend's home.

Sammy: No, haha, I just imagine you as my mom, dad and wife in one and it is damn disturbing but nevertheless funny. Here I will open my imagination bubble, see for yourself. Sammy tries to get up but fails and next thing Raghav hears is his snores.

R: He is never going to learn or change. Raghav shakes his head disapprovingly. He then dumbs Sammy on his bed and pays his regards to Mr. Raizada. Tomorrow is a new beginning, sunshine for me and a nightmare for you, Mr. Sahil Kapoor.

Precap: Raghav and Sammy in Mumbai!!! Revenge on full mode...Stay tuned

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
beautifully written... awsum... plz continue soon... realy lyk dat kalpi too hs a frn in rahul...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Wonderful update, so proud of Kalpi and again glad she has a good friend in Rahul.
So Raghav in Mumbai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Wow...
Just loved d way Kalpi justified herself...
Plzzz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Loved the Update!❤️👍🏼
& love the bond of Kalpi & her Ma from the starting...
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Lvd rahul n kalpi
Realy she needa frnd in her lif to supprt
Lovely update continue sooon plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Just curious
Did you guys enjoy drunk Sammy's Sholey??? I personally thought it was funny? Comment and please let me Know!!!!!


New UPDATE
Chapter 7


Sammy and Raghav in car moving towards the Raghav's flat.

S: AAAH, the smell of Mumbai, the roasted corn, the chai, the mud and girls. There is no place as home.

R (smirking): Yeah and their chappals (sandals) which are going to nest in your head soon.

S: I wonder sometimes if you my friend or enemy. Hey, why you taking the longer route? Are meeting someone...maybe a childhood friend, maybe a girl, maybe Kalp...or Pakh...

Raghav gives a deadly look to Sammy.

S: What? Just asking where we going and stop staring at my face people might question the extent of our friendship. Raghav chuckles slightly and utters 'tu bhi na Sammy? I just wanted to glance at my dad's chawl, his life's last building. Sammy nods in silence. They halt outside the chawl and Sammy admires a girl dressed in rich western outfit rushing on stairs and wonders how cute she looks running, wonder how pretty she is during daylight. Raghav glances towards moon in remembrance of his dad when he hears the sweetest laughter on the roof top. It is too dark to see her face but she looks like an angel and laughs like one too. Both guys are broken from their daze when they spot Kamla and Vitthal talking earnestly and walking toward chawl. Raghav remembers when he met Kamla for first time, how motherly she seemed, how he made Kalpi smile, suddenly remembering Neetu his demeanor changes which doesn't go unnoticed by Sammy.

S: What happened I thought Kamla bai was your savior? Why do you look repulsed after seeing her?

R: Kapoors

Sammy nods and signals to leave.

RS and Companies Constructions, Kapoor Construction and other companies are invited to attend Kalpi and Pakhi's college festival before the interview process the following day. Unknown to Kapoors is the full form of RS, so they don't feel threatened.

Rahul being college elite was responsible was festival activities along with Pakhi who according to him did nothing except barking orders which her champchis listened to. She was in charge of fashion show backstage. Rahul and Juhi Ma also became close because of Kalpi and would talk on phone every once in a while. It was due to Juhi Ma, he heard what a naturally gifted excelled dance performer Kalpi was. He tries persuading Kalpi to dance but she retaliates saying her aii won't allow and Pakhi seconding that thought that Kamla Ma would be hurt if she saw Kalpi dancing. Unfortunately, destiny had other plans and on the day of festival, the main female lead broke her leg and no replacement was there. Rahul insists Kalpi to do this since he needs good reviews on public management for his film course in Masters and reluctantly Kalpi agrees, if and only if she gets to wear a mask and her name won't be announced. Rahul is all her praises.

The Function


Spotlight hits on Kalpi for her solo performance, who is wearing a silver gown with golden mask and dances with grace that would shy short to peacock dance leaving the whole audience astounded and dumbfounded. In this crowd sat Raghav, Prem and other business man who were all drooling behind the masked fairy.

R: I have never seen such a graceful performance, such purity, such rhythm and her tiny smile.

P: God, if she dances so hot, I wonder how hot she is in real life.

Principal requested much to Prem's dismay, a US return Mr. RS to give award to the best performer. Rahul announces the name 'the dancing angel'', please claim what is deserved to be yours. Kalpi still wearing a mask accepts award from Raghav. Both feel jolts of electricity as the fingers slightly (like feathers) touch. R POV: What was the feeling? Why is she still hiding and her name wasn't announced properly either? Who is she? Raghav, Focus. Look at Sahil, his smile you need to take that away. Sammy, it is all your fault, you are rubbing on me.

K POV: It felt strange when our fingers met. Who is he? Don't look up Kalpi,you already had a glance, accept award and leave. Look at Prem, you need to teach him a lesson that money doesn't make someone God.

Kalpi utters thanks without looking up and moves away quickly without giving Raghav a second glance. (This interaction was shorter than a minute and she hasn't looked at Raghav in full light).

The function goes well with applause for Rahul and Pakhi's effort on the success. Everyone inquires about the angel they saw but Rahul was the only one knowing the true identity concealed the fact from everyone, including a persistent pesky Prem.

Rahul decides to mess with Prem and says you know the girl very well.

P: shocked really who

R: yeah, she lives very close to you.

P (impatiently) : who?

R: maybe a blood relative.

P(goes to the near dustbin and pukes his gut out) POV : this is it. Last time, I attend a masquerade especially one where my sister can be. Vomits again.

R: serves you right lol while grinning ear to ear. You don't even fathom about my Kalpi.

As badly as Raghav wanted to know the whereabouts of the girl, his building size ego along with his sole mission would not let him.

At Raghav's adobe:

Sammy: Raghav, from the time you came home, you seem restless. I thought you will be like lion studying your preys Prem and Sahil.

R: hmm. Sammy, could you go for interview tomorrow?

S: Me? (shocked) and I thought you would be a bit excited to meet your bachpan walis.(childhood friends)

R: what are you talking about?

S: The fact that you had two girls fawning over you. Kalpana and Pakhi

R: shakes his head...nothing like that. Kalpi was very innocent, stubborn and hardworking; she lives with an aim to get success. Pakhi was temperamental drama queen who always wanted things that weren't hers.

S: Sorry buddy, you on your own. I got a meeting tomorrow and you don't know the details of the project and any mistake could cause Kapoor's win. Therefore, man up and face your lovelies.

Raghav throws an agitated look at Sammy who is snickering.

Precap : Face to Face Interaction...drama...fight...ego? Stay tuned.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutegurl224

Hey

I really like your story !
I would definitely love to see some Raghav Kalpi interaction soon though :D
It's pretty awesome though.
Do update soon and if it's possible add me to the PM list coz I wouldn't want to miss an update of this one!
Thanks
Take care
Nupur



Could not PM for some reason but UPDATED CHAPTERS...Check them out and express your views!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This part was damn awesum... I just hope Ragav gets 2 know tat the girl dancing was Kalpi soon...
N abt that Sammy's Sholey part... Its was nice n funny 2... :)
plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update!!!
You updated soon...nice ...thanks for the update!

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