RagNa FS ||..They Are Destined..|| Final part updated on pg 12 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice' awesome! Plz continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..kya dream h yeh..first two parts padhke..seriously mujhe kahi se nai lag rha tha ki scary jaisa ki tune kaha..but hai kaha se..lekin fir gira precap ka BOMB..usse padhne k baad toh literally my heart stop beating for seconds n fir uske aise tezi se beat karne laga ki it will burst out of my rib cage..kya yr kyun heart attack dena chahti h..but don't mind ha..ye cv's toh already meri life time ko kam krne mein lagein h..nai yr abhi nai marna :(..abhi toh meri shadi bhi nai hui..!! so plz give ur dream a happy ending pleeej..mere chotu se heart k liye..warna wo itna dard sehen nai karna payega..u know na very delicate types..!!!!
sorry kafi emotional ho gyi thi..!!
waise nice writing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg..,.rakhi...??,!!??
Very well written..thoroughly enjoyed :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read both d chapters in 1 go n just loved it...
N rakhi... itz scary...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello buddies..i'm back wid a update ..it is kinda longish one..😛
I hope it won't be boredom..as my story is kinda long & can't complete in 3parts so here i thought to make it 5 shots 😛 😛 plz forgiv me if it bores u 😭 feel free to criticize.. 😛

part 3...



6 months Later :

At New York :
Kalpana successfully completes her 6 months internship & left her influence on each employee, on the board memembers by her talent, go getter attitude & her down to earth nature. Specially on Mr.Khanna.. Right frm dat presentation day kalpana always held a great influence in Mr.Khanna's mind & heart.
Mr.Khanna 60 years old man. He always treatrd kalpana like his daughter. He was the CEO of Mr.Khanna group of industries. He was in search of future CEO for his company & his search ended when he witnessed kalpana's intelligence. He was sure she can handle his company..she is perfect candidate for CEO but before this he wanted to test her intelligence,her leadership qualities so that why 6 months ago he offered her this job.. & in this 6 months he witnessed that no1 will be eligible for this responsiblity than kalpana 😳

After Kalpi's arrival to NY ..Raghav daily used to call her & was always worried for her.he never forgot to call her & their this session was going on frm last 5 & half months but suddenly frm past 15 days he didn't call her..no contact wid her..so kalpi tried her best to call him bt he never responded her..she also tried to call sammy but all in vain ..so she was worried that why didn't he call me frm last 15days but at the same time she thought he is very workholic so must be busy no worry i'm going to india soon then i will take his nice class 😆😆

That day was a last day of kalpi's internship 😃 she was very happy that finally she can move to india.. & can meet her Raghav.
Her thoughts were broke by one circular it was abt the Company board members meeting & in this meeting they gonna choose their new CEO & all employee,members of board must have to attend meeting..

Kalpi to hersrlf :
Chal kalpi now this is ur last ever meeting in NY. Day aftr 2marrow at this time u'll be in india. 😃
& wid this blissful thought she smiles 😃.& makes her way 2wards Conference Hall 😃
All members ,employes arrives in conference hall... Media reporters too were present there as 2day there was most imp.announcement..

Mr.Khanna arrives in C.H & then all takes their seats. Mr.Khanna does the sum discussion wid board members & finally comes forward to make a announcement.

Mr.Khanna : Ladies & Gentlemen 2day we all r gathered here to do a announcement abt new CEO of Khanna group of industries. So here i'm all ready to announce the name of that most luckiest person.. Do u all have any guesses.. & wid this kalpi thinks jo bhi hoga ya hogi bohot lucky hogi & her thoughts broke by Mr.Khanna's voice
Huuu No guesses okk guyz let me tell u all that person is none other than only " Ms. Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav "

Everyone claps for kalpana 👏👏 & congratulates her.. But kalpi was all numb..she never thought abt this..she never thought that she will be so much lucky.. She thought this must be her nightmare & to check out this she pinches herself & realises that no this no nightmare nor any illusion itz reality dat reality abt which she always dreamed..

Mr.Khanna : So Ms. Kalpana come forward & take ur charge 😃

Kalpi : Sir, i'm not right person for this responsiblity..i'm not eligible 😭 & i can't live here more..i want to go india ASAP..i can't take this responsiblity.

Mr. Khanna : Who told u that u have to live here..?? Who told u that u ain't eligible..??
Kalpana infact u r most eligible person for this responsibilty.. I recognized ur capabilities At our very first meeting but still i wanted to test ur capabilities so i offered u this job & see u done ur job perfectly & more on this u hv no need to stay here..u can do ur work frm india too..there is our another branch so no worries my young lady.. Now Smile plz 😃 & no more argues.. Take ur charge now..
Kalpi nods her head & smiles & takes the charge of CEO post.

She goes all moist & thinls finally i gained my Ek Mutthi Aasman.. Finally i became Madam & now i became perfect match for raghav.. Yess raghav i'm coming now i can't wait for 2marrow.. Right now i'm leaving for india. Ur Kalpana is coming raghav & she blushes 😳

In India :
At Singhaniya Residence :

On every new channel the flood comes only wid one news a breaking news dat " Ms.Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav is the new CEO of Khanna group of industries "
Wid this blissful news raghav gets super happy & says to sammy see sammy finally kalpana gained success.. She got her Ek Mutthi Aasman & wid a joy he hugs sammy & say i'm very happy yar..i'm on cloud nine..

Sammy : Dude control urself & first make a call to Kalpana..she must be waiting for ur wishes..do call her

Raghav : yes samny u r right.. Abhi karta hu usse call.. & wid this talk he picks up his mobile to call kapana but suddenly his hands stops frm dialing her no. & he talks to himself that stop raghav ..wht r u going to do..? R u gone mad.. Jisse tumne itni mushkil se apne se dur rakha hai usse tu aaj ek hi zatake me paas karna chahta hai..
Sammy : Wht happened raghav..?? Do call her fast ..

Raghav : No sammy i won't call her.. Wid much difficulties i distracted my self frm her & now wid one call i can't throw her life in danger..

Sammy : Tu kabtak bhagega usse door..tuze pata hai na wo parso india aa rhi hai aur aate hi sabse pehle tuzse milane aayegi..

Raghav : i know sammy & thats why i'm getting marry wid pakhi on day aftr 2marrow. Wo aayegi tab tak meri shadi pakhi se ho chuki hogi fir muze usse na koi baat aur na koi explainations deneki jarurat padegi wo samaz jayegi i betrayed her,she'll understand that i played wid her feelings..😭

Sammy : & wht abt u raghav ? Plz raghav aur ek baar sochale.. Tere iss decision se 3 zindagiya barbaad ho jayegi..tumhari,kalpana ki aur pakhi ki.

Raghav : i don't care abt my self.. I only care for kalpi..she is my life.. & i can't throw her life in danger for my own happiness..mai khudke liye Kamala maa,vitthal baba, pakkya & more over kalpana ki life khatareme nhi daal sakta. Unn logone mere bure waqt me mera saath diya,they saved me frm kapoors & they saved my mother's life.. So now it's my turn to protect them...i have to return the favours...i can't lose them..& wid this raghav leaves hall & goes to his room & shuts the door

Sammy to himself :
Whtever is happening isn't good. I can't see my frnd in this state of mind...i have to do sumthing.😕

At NY airport :
Flight take off for india 😃

In flight :
Kalpi talks to herself
Raghav 2marow i'm gonna give u a biggest surprise of ur life, 2marow u'll become mine forever wid this thought she blushes 😳

But poor Soul kalpi didn't know that wht her fate served for her.. She didn't know that she herself gonna get biggest shock of her life 😭😭

2marow night flight lands on mumbai airport.
Kalpi comes out of airport wid her luggage she takes the cab & tells driver the address of sighaniya residence & tells him to take way there..
Middle of this kalpi's phone rings ..it was pakkya she takes the call

Kalpi : Hello dada..boliye kaise call kiya..??

Pakkya : arre kalpi aaj to tu bohot jaldi uth gai..

Kalpi : arre dada actually mai new york me nhi hu..i came to mumbai ..abhi abhi flight land hui hai..

Pakkya : kya tu mumbai aa gai hai..but tune to kaha tha tu kal aayegi..😕

Kalpi : haa dada maine kaha tha but muzse rha nhi jaa rha tha aur aap sabko surprise bhi dena tha isliye..

Pakkya : ohh achha hua tu aa gai ab tu pakhi ki shadi attend kar payegi..

Kalpi : kya pakhi ki shadi..?? Kab kisse..??

Pakkya : haa kal pakhi ki shadi hai aur uski shadi apne raghav ke saath ho rhi hai..

Kalpi : kya kaha dada aapne 😲 traffic ki vajah se muze kuch sunai nhi de rha hai..abhi mai apni ek frnd ke paas ja rhi hu bohot urgunt hai..mai ghar aaye bad hum baat karenge.. Aai baba ko mat kehna ke mai aai hu yaha..itz surprise for them okk dada bye..

Pakkya : Okk kalpi bye..take care aur jaldi aaja ghar 😃
They cut the call..

Cab arrives at Singhaniya residence..

Kalpi get downs n gives money to driver & takes her luggage..
She rings a doorbell..
Sammy opens it & gets shock aftr seeing kalpi..😲

Sammy : Kalpana tum..😲 tum to kal aanewali thi naa..??

Kalpi : Haa sammy sir but i thought to give surprise to raghav.. 😳 whr is he..?

Sammy : he is in lawn..wait i will call him..

Kalpi : no sir..i will go there..thank u..
She leaves

Raghav was sitting on bench looking at Beautiful moon..
Kalpi comes there she looks at him lovingly & puts her hand on his shoulder.. Wid her electrifying touch raghav comes out of his trauma.. & looks at her he all mesmerises by her beauty.. She was looking stunning in sky blue backless salwaar kamiz wid her open hairs, 😳 he looks in her beautiful bulging eyes, he looks lovingly at her juicy,sexy rosy lips☺️..she was looking all elegant,graceful beauty he ever saw.. She was looking ethereal 😳 he lost in her beauty ☺️
But his delighful thoughts were broke by kalpi's voice...raghav aap kaha kho gaye thik to hai na aap 😕

Raghav once again looks at her wid a shock 😲😲 he thought it was his illusion but no she was present infrnt of him that too in real 😲

Raghav : Kalpana tum aur yaha 😲 kab aai..??

Kalpi : abhi abhi aai hu jab aap uss chaand ko nihar rhe the 😳

Both looks at each other wid teary eyes.. The tears were rolling frm their eyes coz of happiness.. After 6 months the were seeing each other..their seperation,distance tourted them like a hell..😭

They stands there for a while like a statue wid moist eyes.. He looks at her & opens his arm for her...the tears of happiness were rolling on her cheeks & she runs in his knight shining armours hastely 😳


" He knew her, and she knew him. He had no idea if the images he saw came from past or future, or both, but he knew her. Their souls were bound, had always been bound, and always would be. They were two with one soul between them, perfectly joined, perfectly fitted "

To be countinued...


Do share ur positive/negative views 😛 abt update

Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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when i saw ther was an update i hurriedly opened the page to knw wat happens as the precap was scary but thank god aftr reading im feelin relieved:):) loved it soni..especially the part when kalpi becomes the CEO..then raghav opening hid arms wide <3 pls update the next part soon na:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww...this is too emotional filled with subtle love, pain and few precious moments of joy❤️. Ending scene was mesmerising, pure bliss
Let me tell you before, I'd kill you...if you have any plans of giving Raghav - Pakhi marriage😡. Take this a dhamki...do update soon, here I am dying out of suspense🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kalpi did it, now she is the CEO of a company :)
Her excitement to go back to her Raghav is amazing
It's a good thing she didn't hear what Pakya was saying about Pakhi wedding
Raghav is so happy for his Kalpi
Love the way they both stared at each other just admiring each other was very romantic
Lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Im so samn happy tat kalpi reached on tym...
its awesum... plz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dat was wonderful..but mere last comment ka bhi reply kario..ok..dats on pg 6..!!.

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