RagNa FF: Mein tumhare saath hoon...last update page 56+epilogue+note - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4

It has been a week since the night kalpi had fainted into raghav's arms and everything had been back to normal. Raghav and kalpi were both in office. Kalpi sat in her seat remembering that beautiful night in which raghav took care of her as if she were a little girl. From the corner of her eyes kalpi saw paakhi entering raghav's cabin. A wave of uneasiness and tension hit over her. "Stop it!" She scolded herself "this is an office, paakhi must have a question" thought kalpi. But then kalpi grabbed a file and thought "It's a perfect excuse to go see raghav sir!"
Meanwhile inside the office...
Paakhi: "Thank you for coming and dancing at the holi party sir!"
Raghav: "About that...Paakhi I-
Paakhi: (shrieks) "I love you too sir!"
Paakhi ran up and hugged raghav just then kalpi entered raghav's office seeing paakhi hugging her sweetheart. "I never should've trusted him! He's just a player!" Thought kalpi while her eyes teared up. Raghav saw kalpi and tried to say something but kalpi ran out of the office. Raghav is now very angry and pushed paakhi of himself and said "I don't love you! I hate you! I was only using you for revenge!" Paakhi started crying and he pushed her out of the way and ran after kalpi who by this time was crying and walking on the road not aware of her surroundings...suddenly she saw a light and a voice that yelled kalpi!

TO BE CONTINUED...

This part was written by a friend of mine who is obsessed just like us! She doesn't have an account so she's helping to write parts of these. I wrote the last 3 lines. Comment and like. I will update after I get 15 likes and 5 comments at least. If I get more than that I promise the next part will be super long! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Arghhh this paakhi doesn't have mind
Poor kalpi
Ohh hope she is fine updt soon
Can't wait for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: AriyaLilyOrchid

Arghhh this paakhi doesn't have mind
Poor kalpi
Ohh hope she is fine updt soon
Can't wait for more

we can hope for the best! Will update once I get 15 likes and 5 comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
the point is that pakhi over reacts before listening to the other person.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plz do give a long update.
:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Nice update n thank ur friend for sharing her ff with us
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
ur awesome at dis dear i luv ur FF's 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
please updat soon!!! ive commented and i liked it!!! i was 12th person to like it. but now you just need 3 more likes :/...so here you goLIKE👍🏼LIKE👍🏼LIKE👍🏼AN EXTRA LIKE SO YOU UPDATE FAST👍🏼WELL DONE YOU ARE AN ABSOLUTELY AMAZING WRITTER!👏. BTW I AT FIRST THAT KALPI WAS PREGNANAT AND THATS WHY SHE FAINTED LOL😆😉RAGHAVS BACHA CALLED RAGNA LOL😆LOVE IT!!! ❤️
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
please update it!! i just cant wait for the next bit! getting very impatient here lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: FatemaMazahir17

the point is that pakhi over reacts before listening to the other person.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plz do give a long update.
:)

yes dear! She does! Will update as soon as possible! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: leelu0001


Nice update n thank ur friend for sharing her ff with us

thank u! And definitely will dear!

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