RagNa FF: Mein tumhare saath hoon...last update page 56+epilogue+note

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Hey guys so after today's episode I can't stop myself from writing this little story I will write a small paragraph, and if you guys like it click the like button and comment if you would like me to continue and if I get 10 replies and at least 5 likes I will continue in less than 12 hrs!!



After raghav and kalpi took kamla to the hospital to treat her wounds. Kalpi sat in the other room and sobbed. Raghav followed right behind her and closed the door. He sat next to her and rubbed her back. She was still crying, then she draped her arms around his neck...

This part was written by my friend, hope you all enjoyed!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesum...👏 continue soon ... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnapari

Its awesum...👏 continue soon ... :)

Thank you SOO much dear! Will definitely continue soon!
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Part 1 cont.


And then raghav picked her up and made her sit in his lap and she put her head in his chest and was still sobbing and then raghav took her hand and kissed it, kalpana stopped sobbing for a moment and got shy and hid her face in his chest he then with one hand holding her back and one on her waist, kissed down the left side of her face then with one hand he took her face out his chest she had closed her eye out of shyness. Then raghav kissed the tear stain away from kalpi's face, she opened her eyes and was looking at him with love, he then kissed her forehead, all while she was on his lap, he then looked at her and said mein tumhare saath hoon... And hugged her tight kissing the top of her forehead. They broke the hug after a long time. Kalpi then looked at him and went closer and kissed his cheek. Raghav's hand were still on her waist. They were really close and raghav leaned in and gave her a small peck on the lip, then they stared at each other with passion for a few seconds and then kalpi started leaning in and raghav reciprocated. He brushed his lips on hers before they set up for a lip lock. Raghav was lingering his fingers on her waist giving her tingles. Raghav and kalpi then lip locked for sometime knowing that no one would be there to disturb them this moment. They had literally been lip locking for more than a two minutes. And then they broke the kiss. Raghav then took one of his hands and opened the dori from her kameez on her back and then he carried her to a hospital bed in the room and made her sit and slowly took her earrings out and her necklace then laid her down slowly on the bed and took her dhuppata out and threw it on the floor and he kissed her neck then he slowly took her kameez out from one shoulder revealing her bare shoulder and kissed it and then he moved down and opened the knot in her salwaar and was about to slide it down when kalpi got up and hugged him and raghav said "I'm sorry kalpi!!! Mein...mujhe nahi patha kee ya kya ho gaya mujh ko" kalpi then took his hand and put it on her shoulder and said "you forgot the kameez! Pehle kameez phir salwaar..." Then raghav took her face and kissed her on the lips and said "good kalpi! Now allow me..." Saying that he removed her kameez and laid her down again he then kissed her stomach and then removed her salwaar. kalpi felt a little awkward laying bare naked in front of raghav but knew he would be the only one to ever see her like this... He then looked up and said"don't worry! Mein tumhare saath hoon"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh wow how romantic! Ur very good in writing. Ask me!! As much as I suck at showing my emtions i suck at writing! lol Well done!
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Originally posted by: iPerfection

Ohh wow how romantic! Ur very good in writing. Ask me!! As much as I suck at showing my emtions i suck at writing! lol Well done!

thank you! Thank you SOO much! I thought people would hate my story! But thank u so much! And no! Don't say that! I think everyone has some talent! So what if u can't write that well! I think u should give it a try!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No actually u wrote it so beautifully. I could feel only romance and passion no vulgarity at all. U shud write more I tell you! Xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: iPerfection

No actually u wrote it so beautifully. I could feel only romance and passion no vulgarity at all. U shud write more I tell you! Xx

aww!! Thank you so much! I'm thinking to write more I just don't have the courage sometimes!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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An FF on current track...so nice😛...preview is good.
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Originally posted by: esha143

An FF on current track...so nice😛...pls do continue soon...

i actually wasn't going to continue but I think I might!!!

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