RagNa FF: Mein tumhare saath hoon...last update page 56+epilogue+note - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
This was awesm update. Plz continue
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Part 15:

Kamla: kalpi. Yeh doctor kya keh rahe hai? Kya tu pregnant hai?
Kalpi: ha-haan-ha-ha-aai.
Kamala slapped kalpi very hard and kalpi fell in raghav's arm.
Still holding kalpi.
Raghav: kalpi! Are you okay?
Kalpi held her stomach in pain.
Kalpi: ji. Mein thiik hoon.
Raghav helped kalpi up off his arms.
Kalpi: aaah!
Raghav: kalpi kya hua?
Kalpi: kuch nahi sir.
Kamla grabbed kalpi from raghav's arms and dragged her to herself. Kamla was holding her by her arms.
Kamla: kalpi! Tune meri naak cut wah di! Shaadi sein pehle pregnant! Aaj sein tu mere liye mar gayi!
Kalpi: aai! Nahi! Please!
Raghav: kamla ma-
Kamla: bas! Mujhe kuch nahi sunna!
Chal vitthal!
Kalpi was crying and pleading to kamla.
Kalpi: aai! Aai please! Please mujhe math chodkar ja! Mein tere bin nahi reh sakhti!
Kamla: kya karoon gi mein tera! Tujhse kaun shaadi karega? Bol!
Raghav: mein!
Kamla's eyes widened in shock.
Kamla: lekin raghav baba, aap tho paakhi ko chathe hai!
Raghav: nahi! Na kabhi chaha tha, aur na kabhi chahun ga! Kalpi meri zindagi hai. Raghav went and hugged kalpi. Aur mein iss ke bina nahi ji saktha.
Kalpi: raghav-
Raghav: nahi kalpi. Mujhe bolne dho. Ha kamla ma. Mujhe kalpi se bohut pyar kartha hoon. Aur hamesha karoon ga.
Kamla: kalpi?
Kalpi: aai-
Kamla: tikh hai beta. Tum dono shaadi kar lo. Lekin aaj se tu mere liye mar gayi hai kalpi!
Kalpi: aai! Nahi! Please aai!
Kamla: chal vitthal!
Kamla and vitthal left leaving kalpi crying on the floor.
Raghav: kalpi. Mein-
Kalpi: bas raghav! Bas! Aap ke wajha sein meri aai ne mujhe sare naathe thod liya! Sirf aur sirf aap ek wajha sein!
Raghav: kalpi?
Kalpi: bas raghav! Bas! Mujhe akela chod dijye!
Kalpi was about to leave when raghav got a hold of kalpi's arms.
Raghav: tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho. Ab tum meri responsibility ho. Chalo!
Kalpi: aap mujhe kaha le ja rahe hai? Chodhiye mujhe!
Raghav: chup! Bilkul chup!
Raghav dragged kalpi out of the doctor's office and made her sit in the car and took her to some temple.
Raghav started dragging kalpi to the temple. Since it was night time nobody was there. Kalpi kept yelling so he stuffed a piece of cloth in kalpi's mouth and tied her hands.He started a fire and tied kalpi's dhuppata to his wrist. He dragged kalpi around the fire four times. Then it was kalpi's turn to walk in front. Kalpi wouldn't walk so raghav picked her up in his arms and walked around the fire. After the pheres, raghav took sindoor and put it in kalpi's maang. Kalpi was crying really hard. Raghav then took a mangal sutra and put it around her neck. Kalpi was still crying. Raghav untied her wrists and took the cloth out of her mouth.
Raghav: I'm sor-
Kalpi: shut up raghav! Aap ne mere saath zabardasti ki hai! Mein aap ko kabhi nahi maaf karoon gi!
Raghav went and hugged kalpi very tight. Kalpi was struggling.
Raghav: sssh kalpi! Sssh! I'm sorry.
Raghav was caressing the back of her head to calm her down.
Raghav: mein sirf tumhe apne saath rakhna chahtha hoon! Mein tumhare saath hoon.
Raghav let kalpi out of the hug.
Kalpi: mein aapko kabhi nahi maaf karoon gi!
Raghav got mad. He started dragging kalpi to the car.
Raghav and kalpi reached raghav's home. Raghav again dragged kalpi to his bedroom and threw her on the bed.
Kalpi: R-ra-raghav? Aap ye kya kar rahe hai?
Raghav: bas kalpi! Bas!
Raghav left locking his bedroom door. Kalpi sat up with her back against the headboard of raghav's bed.
Raghav drove to a mall.
Raghav to himself. Mujhe kalpi ke saath itna rough nahi behave karna chayie!
Raghav went inside a boutique. He bought kalpi many anarkali's in the colors pink, purple, blue, green, red, and gold. salwaar kameez's in the colors blue, white, pink, purple, and black. Raghav also bought some sarees for kalpi in the colors pink and gold and red. Raghav then went to a jewelry store and bought kalpi many earrings and necklaces. Raghav then spotted a set of bangles and his face lit up.
Flashback:
Kalpi was looking in a magazine.
She saw a pair of bangles and her eyes lit up.
Raghav saw that and decided he had to buy those bangles for her.
Back to the present:
Raghav saw those exact same bangles and bought them along with many others.
Raghav then entered a makeup shop and had no idea of what to buy.
Salesgirl: hello sir! May I help u?
Raghav: yes! I want some makeup for my wife. Showing kalpi's pic to the salesgirl.
Salesgirl: sure.
The salesgirl gave a bunch of makeup and a few perfumes to raghav for kalpi. Raghav picked up kalpi's favorite pizza for her dinner. Raghav drove back home with everything he had purchased for her.
Raghav went to his bedroom to see kalpi sitting on his bed reading a book that was in raghav's room. Raghav set everything down on his bed. Kalpi looked up at raghav.
Raghav: kalpi?
Kalpi had realized that she had been a little rude to raghav earlier.
Kalpi: ji?
Raghav: mein tumhare liye kuch laya hoon.
Handing her all the bags. Kalpi looked inside to see so many things that raghav brought for her and smiled. Kalpi squealed.
Kalpi: yeh sab mere liye?
Raghav: haan. Yeh sab tumhare liye.
Kalpi: mujhe yeh sab try karna hai!
Raghav: nahi! Abhi nahi! Pehle tumhe dinner karna hoga!
Kalpi: raghav!
Kalpi whined like a little girl.
Raghav: no. Chalo.
Raghav took kalpi to the dining table and both started eating.

Preview: kalpi starts coughing very hard. Tears are coming out of her eyes.
Phew! Done! How was it? Like. Leave comments! Sorry for not updating quick! Thanks for all the encouragement.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!! Love how you include name of ff in raghav lines!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
shaadi...finally...very happy to read this...n shopping woh bhi apni patni keliye...raghav singhania...cant believe it...khaas serial mein bhi aisa hotha...hai hai...

update soon...!!! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumm

shaadi...finally...very happy to read this...n shopping woh bhi apni patni keliye...raghav singhania...cant believe it...khaas serial mein bhi aisa hotha...hai hai...

update soon...!!! ;)


Yup! Finally! Definitely will!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely Amazing!!
You have written this part very well!:)
Please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Absolutely Amazing!!
You have written this part very well!:)
Please update soon!

Thx Pookhs! I will very soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update, loved raghav repeating the title of the ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kamla disowning Kalpi was very emotional
But I love how her Raghav stood by her even if she is angry at him
The force wedding was nice ;)
Aww Raghav purchasing all things that Kalpi will need is so sweet of him
He already proven himself to be the best husband
I like Kalpi excitement on seeing all the stuff he bought for her
Beautiful update
Recap is scary, hope Kalpi and their baby is alright
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 16:


Raghav: kalpi?

Kalpi had realized that she had been a little rude to raghav earlier.

Kalpi: ji?

Raghav: mein tumhare liye kuch laya hoon.

Handing her all the bags. Kalpi looked inside to see so many things that raghav brought for her and smiled. Kalpi squealed.

Kalpi: yeh sab mere liye?

Raghav: haan. Yeh sab tumhare liye.

Kalpi: mujhe yeh sab try karna hai!

Raghav: nahi! Abhi nahi! Pehle tumhe dinner karna hoga!

Kalpi: raghav!

Kalpi whined like a little girl.

Raghav: no. Chalo.

Raghav took kalpi to the dining table and both started eating.

Kalpi: eee! Mera favorite pizza!?!

Raghav: just the best for my babe!

This made kalpana blush.

Kalpi: raghav!

Said kalpi punching raghav's arm.

Kalpi took a bite of the cheese and onion pizza and suddenly starts coughing really hard, tears are flowing from her eyes.

Raghav: k-k-kalpi! Kya hua tumhe!

Kalpi keeps coughing.

Raghav: yeh loh paani piyo!

Raghav handed a glass of water to kalpi.

Kalpi couldn't calm down.

Raghav: are you allergic to something?

Kalpi: al-m-ond o-o-oil

Raghav: almond oil? But wait! There's no almond oil in this! I'll call the doctor!

Raghav turned to go get his phone when kalpi stopped him by holding his arms. Kalpi signaled towards her purse.

Raghav: you-you have medicines?

Kalpi: p-p-purse!

Raghav rushed over and took the medicines from kalpi's purse.

Raghav: kalpi! Swallow it!

Kalpi swallowed the medicine and finally relaxed.

Raghav gripping kalpi's frail arms "how can you be so careless! Agar tumhe kuch hojatha? Tho mein tho mar hi jatha!"

Kalpi winces under raghav's right hold.

Kalpi: aah!

Two tears slip from kalpi's eyes.

Raghav let's her go and hugs her tight. Kalpi sobs into raghav's chest. "Sssh! Chup ho jayo! Kuch nahi hua!" Said raghav shushing kalpi. He caresses her head.

Raghav in his mind:

How did almond oil get in the pizza.

~Pizzeria

A girl in a hat working in the pizzeria looks up and smirks.

Girl: bola tha na. Mujhse panga mat lehna!

~Singhania mansion

Raghav was still hushing kalpi. Kalpi was still sobbing. Raghav decided kalpi should get some rest, but she looked so feeble. Raghav gingerly lifted kalpi up and laid her down on his bed. Kalpi looked up. Raghav leaned down.

Kalpi: r-r-raghav?

Raghav leaned down and touched kalpi's rosy pink lips ever so lightly.

Kalpi had her eyes closed since she was expecting some more.

Raghav: goodnight baby...

Whispered raghav huskily.

Kalpi opened her eyes and was confused. She was too tired to think right now and decided to sleep.

After kalpi fell asleep raghav took the clothes he purchased her and arranged it in their closet. He then put all the jewelry away. Raghav saw kalpi. He went and sat down on the bed next to kalpi. He picked up kalpi's head and pecked on her lips many times.

"agar tum pregnant na hoti tho hum abhi suhaag raat mana rahe hote...magar abhi ke liye..." said raghav leaning down again and pecking on kalpi's lips lightly.


Preview: raghav kisses kalpi's neck,

unties the dori of her kameez and

lays her down on the bed.


Hey guys!

So I thought of why not give you guys a mini update just for fun!

Enjoy!

Specially the preview...

Edited by Ragnaislife - 11 years ago

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