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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Deepu luvd it... <3
It's really interesting...
Eagerly w8ting 2 read d nxt part...
Btw tujhe bhi abhay ka bhoot chad gaya kya... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sapnapari

Deepu luvd it... <3

It's really interesting...
Eagerly w8ting 2 read d nxt part...
Btw tujhe bhi abhay ka bhoot chad gaya kya... 😆

haha...abhay is patented friend of Kalpana now for everyone🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2-
A few years later, the castle was in ruins and no one dared to venture even near the castle.. People thought tht the castle was haunted and there was spirits roaming inside the castle.. In a village, a few kilometers away from the castle, there lived a girl name Belle. She was a very beautiful, sweet and a clever girl who loved to read, sing ad get along with her work. She harbours love in her heart and loves romance. She loved to visit the local bookstore and borrow books from there. The same way, today also she was going to visit to local library. She was loved by all people in that village. She went to the bookstore and took out a romance novel which she had read atleast a hundred times by now. The librarian asked,"My dear. You have read this book a hundred times by now." Belle replied,"I know. But I love this book.. And I wnt get bored even if I read it a thousand times.." The librarian smiled. Belle said,"Alright. Good Bye Mr. Librarian. See you later." She started reading the book and walking.
Meanwhile near an inn, a tiny man was walking here and there and putting a carpet on the road from a car.. A voice came out,"Lefou... Wht's happening there ? Is the carpet ready ?" Lefou said,"Yes Sire..". Down stepped a handsome, muscular and a strong man with a look of pure arrogance on his face. The girls over there were swooning over him as he winked at them. He walked into the pub and all the girls in the pub started swooning over him. One of the girls exclaimed,"Gaston !!!! Do come here... You can have a seat here." Gaston smiled proudly and went and sat there. After a few minutes, he heard a very sweet voice and searched for the owner of that voice. He saw Belle coming out of the baking area with a book and a basket in her hand. Gaston smiled to himself and followed her out of the pub.. As Belle was walking, Gaston came around and asked,"Hey Beeautiful.. Watcha doing here with this book ? " He snatched the book away from her. Belle grabbed the book and replied,"Am reading Gaston.. Good Bye.." Gaston went behind Belle and asked,"Belle.. Why dnt we hang out together instead of you wasting ur time like this ?"
Belle replied,"I appreciate your offer Gaston, but I am sorry. I cnt come with you. Am going on a trip to a town next to the castle this evening." Gaston asked,"Are you mad Belle ? That castle is haunted." Belle replied,"So you say." Gaston replies,"So the whole village says." Belle argued back,"The whole village says because you say." She went on her way to her small home leaving a confused Gaston behind. At her home, Belle was packing her stuff for the journey when Gaston's words came into her mind THE CASTLE IS HAUNTED.. Belle thought,"Is tht castle really haunted ?" Then after sometime, she rubbished those thoughts and thought,"No Belle.. Gaston is just making you stay back so that he may try on me.." She packed her stuff and went to get Felicia, her horse. She said,"Ok Felicia.. Its a long journey.. So Pip-Pip." She got on her horse and rode away on the journey... THE JOURNEY THAT WILL CHANGE HER LIFE FOREVER.. A JOURNEY THAT WILL TEACH HER MANY THINGS. A JOURNEY THAT LEADS TO LOVE...

2ND CHAPTER UPDATED.. THIS IS THE FIRST TIME AM UPDATING 2 CHAPTERS IN ONE GO.. FEEL PROUD OF MYSELF.,. COMMENTS AND CRITICISMS ARE ACCEPTED...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tiz iz getting even better...👏👏
its really 2 gud... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Why don't you use the characters names from EMA instead of the fairytale's characters, its easier and normal. Instead of saying, ''Belle saw the castle.'' Use, ''Kalpana saw the castle''. You introduced the characters before and since this is RP, everyone will know the characters. Its a suggestion. *shrugs*

x.X.x Ari Hiddles Uchiha x.X.x

Edit: I feel slightly bad for saying that. Like y'all don't know how hard it is to critique. I apologize if my comment has dampen your spirits. I wasn't trying to be harsh or anything. Twas just a suggestion.
Edited by Pein - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pein

Why don't you use the characters names from EMA instead of the fairytale's characters, its easier and normal. Instead of saying, ''Belle saw the castle.'' Use, ''Kalpana saw the castle''. You introduced the characters before and since this is RP, everyone will know the characters. Its a suggestion. *shrugs*

x.X.x Ari Hiddles Uchiha x.X.x

Edit: I feel slightly bad for saying that. Like y'all don't know how hard it is to critique. I apologize if my comment has dampen your spirits. I wasn't trying to be harsh or anything. Twas just a suggestion.

No no no Pein.. I aldready told suggestions and criticisms are accepted... 😊.. I wanted to giv the feel of a fairy-tale here.. Y am using the fariy tale names here, u will know tht later on... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept
And CS
Waiting to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 3-
Belle had travelled very far and she was feeling very tired.. Felicia neighed and she patted her and asked,"Feeling tired Felicia ?" The horse neighed. Belle said,"Me too.. How abt we take some rest nearby ?" The horse once again neighed and Belle chuckled,"I wish you could talk Felicia..."😆.. Belle went inside the forest which was forbidden.. There were wild trees and big rocks.. Belle thought,"No wonder people call it the FORBIDDEN FOREST." She went deep inside the forest and reached the place where the castle was situated. Belle thought,"So this is the haunted castle. My.. It sure does look scary." But then, she had no where else to go.. It was about to rain and she can neither strain herself nor Felicia.. So she said,"Alright.. Come on Felicia.. Looks like we're going to spend the night in that castle.." Felicia neighed out of fear and belle patted her,"Dnt worry Felicia.. Nothing's going to happen. We are going to be fine."
Belle and Felicia started walking towards the castle.. The gates were made of iron. They were rusty.. She went inside.. There were statues of gargoyles everywhere and Belle started to grow a little scared. But still she kept moving on. She reached the door and hesitatingly called out,"Anybody inside ?" She got no response and so she knocked the door. It was unlocked and so she went inside. Someone was watching all this.. That someone was watching her each and every move. Belle walked through the halls. She looked at the pictures hanging on the wall.. Felicia had gone to the stables and was having a wonderful sleep. Belle was still scared and was feeling very hungry. She went through each and every room to check if it was the kitchen. Atlast, she found the kitchen. She heaved a sigh of relief and found some bread and butter there. She ate it quickly and started walking around.
She started feeling sleepy and thought,"Phew. Am falling asleep. Need to find a bed to sleep or atleast a room where I could sleep.." She climbed up the stairs and found a room. She entered the room. It was very beautiful, covered with velvet colour sheets and curtains.. But she was tired to admire the beauty. Once her head hit the pillow, she fell asleep.. Someone watched all this and whispered to the other standing beside him,"Its a girl.." The person beside that someone replied,"Yes Luminiere.. Its a girl. Poor thing must be tired." Luminiere replied,"She looks very pretty.." The person beside him nodded. Luminiere exclaimed,"She looks very beautiful. maybe she is the one Mrs.Potts !! " Mrs.Potts chided him,"Stop shouting Luminiere.. You will wake the poor girl up. Let's go for now. We can welcome her later." Belle slept peacefully. The next day she woke up and rubbed her eyes. She opened her eyes and her widened at the sight she saw. A transparent body weas hovering above her looking at her. She started screaming and the transparent body was confused. It tried to go near Belle but she exclaimed,"No... Dnt come near me.. You are a ghost. This house is haunted." She screamed so loudly tht one more transparent body came and witnessed all this. It shouted,"Luminiere. Hw many times did I tell you last night as to not scare that poor thing ?" Belle stopped screaming and looked at the other body in shock.
Luminiere said,"But Mrs.Potts. You told that we could come and welcome her.." Mrs.Potts said,"Luminiere.. Have you forgotten what we are right now ?" Luminiere went quiet. Belle asked,"You are not going to hurt me ?" Mrs.Potts asked,"My dear. Why would we hurt you ?" Belle said,"You are ghosts. And ghosts hurt humans.. People in my village said so." Luminiere replied,"Sorry to disappoint you girl.. But we dnt hurt humans. We are friendly ghosts. We make friends with them." Belle asked,"How did you become ghosts ? Wht happened to you ?" Mrs.Potts and Luminiere became numb.. Luminiere opened his mouth to answer when they heard a loud roar around the castle.. Belle was too shocked and scared to open her mouth.. Mrs.Potts excalimed,"Oh no.. Luminiere... Its Adam.. He's into his temper once again." Belle asked,"If you dnt mind me asking, who is Adam ?" The roar got closer and closer and Mrs.Potts and Luminiere were scared. Luminiere asked Belle to get up and hide inside the closet. Just as she hid inside the closet, a huge figure entered the room. Belle was too shocked to say anything as she looked at the huge figure..
The huge figure put its nose into work and said,"Someone other than us is here.." Luminiere said,"No no.. Ofcourse not.. No one's here." The huge figure kept roaming around and used his nose. As it came towards the closet, he roared loudly and shook the closet. Belle screamed due to the shaking and fell from the closet. The huge figure looked at her and into her eyes... Belle looked into its eyes scared.. The beast let out another roar.. Belle who was scared out of her life, fled the place with her horse.. The beast was too fast for her.. It blocked her way and Belle pleaded,"Do let me go... I am sorry... Do let me go.." The beast said,"You have entered my castle without my permission... You have eaten my food without my permission.. You have slept in one of my rooms without my permission.. You are to stay here for teh rest of your life." Belle started to protest in her weak voice but the beast gave a loud roar which stunned Belle and she fell unconsious.. Mrs.Potts chided,"Adam.. Control urself. Look wht u've done to the poor girl." The beast's eyes softened a little at the limp body but he regained his composure after a few moments and left...

I know this chapter was horribel.. It was not upto the mark... So sorry about tht.. But I couldn't live without updating so updated it.. So sorry if its boring.. Will make sure tht next chapter is better... Comments and criticisms are appreciated.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Veeru d story ws really v awesum... it ws not at all horrible...
Jus w8ting 2 see hw adam will react next... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Wow Deepi!👏
Great idea and well written. Interesting twist to EMA characters. I love fairytale and its so different to picture our EMA characters in them!
So many chapters at one go too!
Loved it! ⭐️

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