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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Mihika

uff ur writings ...where have u got this talent from its beautiful and sammy is flying ...lolz

Ya Mihi.. Sammy is flying in tis story.. šŸ˜†.. There is a reason for tht... Luminiere was the most trusted friend of the beast in the story Beauty and the Beast, The same thing goes for Raghav and Sammy.. 😳.. Mrs.Potts was a mother figure to the beast and so is Kamla Maa.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4-
After breakfast, Belle said,"Wow Mrs.Potts.. It was a lovely breakfast.. You cook so well.." Mrs.Potts smiled and sais,"Thank You my dear.." Suddenly the door to the room opened and the beast stepped inside. Belle got frightened all of a sudden and slouched further into the pillow. Mrs.Potts and Luminiere looked at the beast. The beast said,"I need to talk to the girl alone. So the others may leave." Luminiere said,"Adam. Think once again.. I can stay if..." The beast said,"Luminiere.. I can handle myself. You can leave." Luminiere opened his mouth to talk but Mrs.Potts held his hand motioning him not to speak anything. Mrs.Potts turned to Belle with a smile on her face. Belle caught her hand in fear of being alone with the beast but Mrs.Potts smiled at her and said,"Don't worry.. He won't hurt you. If he scares you again, just tell me.. I will make Luminiere sit on him again." Hearing this, Luminiere's smile lit up with a smile. Mrs.Potts said,";Come along now Luminiere.. We have to go." Mrs.Potts and Luminiere left and Belle and the Beast were alone.
Belle clutched the pillow for support.. The beast looked very scary.. The beast let out a soft growl and Belle shuddered. The beast started,"I.. I mean.. How was the breadfast ? Good ?" Belle nodded.. The beast asked,"Did you have a good sleep ?" Belle again nodded. The beast asked,"Was the bed comfortable ?" Belle again nodded. The beast got angry that Belle wasn't speaking anything so he shouted,"Don't you have a mouth to talk ? I've been asking you questions and you just nod your head.." Belle was shocked but she found her voice and asked,"What do you expect me to do ?" The beast said,"You could atleast try to talk." Belle said,"What do you expect me to talk about ?" The ebast replied,"Anything. Its not like am going to eat you.' Belle said,"You do look like you are going to eat me." The beast roared at her and Belle put the pillow in front of her and only her eyes could be seen. The beast and her eyes met. The beast suddenly stopped roaring and looked into her eyes. His own eyes softened a little. Belle whimpered,"Don't scare me like that." The beast regained his composure and left with a huff.
Belle was nearly in tears. She had just escaped death from a beast. She was close to tears. Mrs.Potts and Luminiere were watching all this. Luminiere asked,"Shouldn't we go inside and comfort her ?" Mrs.Potts replied,"Yes Luminiere.. But I will be the one to console her." Luminiere said,"Tht's not fair. I like her too.. She is my friend too," Mrs.Potts said,"I know Luminiere. But as of now, Belle needs some love and care. And Adam needs you. You go o check on Adam. You know more abt him than he himself knows and so he needs you. Go Luminiere." Luminiere nodded and went to Adam. Mrs.Potts went beside Belle.. Belle just broke into tears. Mrs.Potts sat beside her and Belle hugged her. Mrs.Potts said,"No dear. Don't cry.. Adam deserves to have Luminiere sit on her head for what he has done." Belle sobbed,"Mrs.Potts. He scares me so much. Why did he come here ?" Mrs.Potts replied,"My guess is he must have come here to apologise to you but has lost his mind." Mrs.Potts patted Belle's head and said,"Now come on dear. Beautiful girls like you shouldn't cry. Now let's get you cleaned up." Belle said,"But Mrs.Potts.. I dnt have any clothes." Mrs.Potts said,"Oh no problem my dear. We shall find some clothes for you."
Belle was still in a sober mood and so Mrs.Potts said,"Belle. How about I show you around the castle ? I am sure you would love it." Belle looked up and smiled. So Mrs.Potts and Belle went around the castle with Mrs.Potts showing her everything. Belle looked around in awe and surprise. It was a beautiful castle only without lights. She did not notice Mrs.Potts go in another direction and went ahead into the dark. The place in which she entered was very dark and she couldn't see properly yet she made her way through the darkness. She entered a dark room. It was dirty with all the curtains torn and all the things broken. She saw tht there were many pictures on the wall but one picture grabbed her attention the most. She went closer to that painting. It was torn into half but still hanging on the wall. She joined the two halves and saw tht it was the painting of a handsome man. She kept staring at the photo but she her attention was caught by a light coming from the next room. She went to the next room and saw a pink rose inside a glass box. She smile and went to the rose. She saw that the rose had a few petals. She opened the glass box and touched the rose. There was a roar from th back and Belle put the rose back in its place.
Belle turnes back and saw the beast behind her. He was looking ferocious and Belle shuddered. The beast roared,"How dare you come here ?" Belle stammered,"I am sorry.. I.. I... I did... n..n... not k..kn..know that its forbidden." The beast inched closer towards her and Belle looked for escape. She stammered,"I am really v...v...ve...very s...s...sorry..." The beast roared,"Get out from here.." and started tearing the aldready torn curtains.. The beast was in his most ferocious mood and Belle got frightened.. She ran away from there.. The beast put the glass case on the rose. He noticed that the rose had started glowing. Meanwhile Belle went running to main door in fear. She ran out an to the stable. Luminiere watched her go out and thought,"Where is she going this late in the night ? The forest is very dangerous at night. Its full of dangerous wolves.. I need to tell Mrs.Potts and Adam about it." Belle got on Felicia and rode off into the forest to get back to the village. As she was riding through the forest, she heard growls coming from the bushes. It was freezing and she had nothing but a cloak around her dress..
Meanwhile at the castle, the beast was looking at the glowing rose with wide eyes. Luminiere came flying towards him shouting,"Adam... Adam..." The beast asked,"What is it Luminiere ?" Luminiere said,"Adam.. Its Belle.. She has run away into the forest.. Adam.. You know how the forest is at night." The beast's eyes widened at the name Belle and when he heard the whole thing, he roared and set out of the castle with Luminiere shouting TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF... Belle was on her horse when she saw a pair of eyes staring at her.. Suddenly a wolf came out of the bush and started attacking Felicia.. Felicia jumped which threw Belle to the ground and it ran away to safety, Belle was left alone to tend to herself and she started moving backwards.. The wolves neared her and Belle kept moving backwards. Suddenly there was a loud roar and the ebast leapt at one of the wolves and brought it down. A pack of wolves descended from the bushes and inched to attack Belle but the beast stood before Belle and grwoled at them. The beast took the wolves one by one and got hurt in some places. One of the wolves jumped at the beast. Belle screamed and did not notice the freeaing pond behind and fell into it with a loud scream...

ALRITE... PART 4 IS UPDATED... GREAT... WAS WATCHING FEAR FILES AND UPDATING... WAITING FOR EMA PROMO.. WANT TO WATCH RAGNA.. SO UPDATED PART 4.. NO CHAPPALS AND TOMATOES.. CRITICISMS AND COMMENTS ARE APPRECIATED.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: veeranu

Hi friends.. After watching yesterday's episode, my mind kept on thinking abt Cinderella and I started comparing it wid EMA... And friends at Twitter helped a lot.. Am here with a small FF... Its a small FF bt it may change later on according to ur comments and views... 😳.. Animal characters have been changed into humans here...šŸ˜†

CHARACTERS:
Kalpana as Cinderella / Belle
Raghav as Prince Charming / Adam
Pakhi as the step-sister Anastasia
Kamla Bai as The Fairy Godmother / Mrs. Potts
Prem as Lucifer / Gaston
Sammy as The Baker / Lumeire
Pakhya as Bruno
Neetu as Step-Mother / The evil witch who cursed Adam
Abhay as Jack (Abhay is Kalpi's best friend from school)šŸ˜‰

All right so here we are with the character sketch..,... šŸ˜‰.. First chapter will be updated in a few minutes...😳

It is a combination of two lovely fairy tales.. Beauty and the Beast and Cinderella... let's get lost in the world of romance and adventure...




omg write down story faster can't wait to read story ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
deepu ..seriously u r mad ..i mean u want sammy to sit on raghav's head .hahaha🤣 i cant control my laugh dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
It ws really damn nice... luvd reading it...
plz update d nxt chapter soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepu loved ur update and this wolf scene reminded me of abhiya scene with the wolf lol I was lost..nostalgic..love u chutki...god..seems I rem each and every abhiya scene and now ragna...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepu loved it 😳😳😳 just amazingšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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deepu luvd it ā¤ļødear u re superbbb plz updated next part waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanaa_17

Deepu loved it 😳😳😳 just amazingšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Sana u r lost with chocopie not fair at all...well u rnt reading my ss am waiting for ur big comments...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yup deepu jaan i read all parts..n i really loved it to the core šŸ‘šŸ¼
They all r amazing šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
Sum were horribke n sum were sweet noments 😳
sachhi kahu to i never peeped in fairy tale..i only familier wid cinderella story..😳
But here u created ur own fairy world wid RagNa 😳 n u drawn us here along wid u.. 😳
Njoying this different world 😳 loving it.. 😳
thank u dear šŸ¤—
Pata nhi mere jeeju ka kya haal ho rha hoga šŸ˜†

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