FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 29

Originally posted by: sampa79

Superb after long time

Thank U Sampa😊

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

You know Shana, I have been here in this forum now since ages, and I read your story, for first time in November, most of the time, when writer updates story after so long, they tend, to just lose out on link of the story, and intensity of writing Obviously appears to low and connection indeed is missing, but honestly... that Did NOT happen here, Flow was very much maintained and story was linked, plus INTENSITY of words did NOT reduce a bit, be it Kamla's ignorance, Kalpana's emotions, while she portrays herself as strong woman, or that of the slap, I could feel the story, and connect with it myself as reader.

Beautiful Update, this is exactly how should have it been in EMA, it would have done wonders!!! Do Update soon...

Thank u Sejal for commenting 😃

I still remember your complaint wala posts as why Kalpi not strong and why Raghav is so liked even though he is so Khadoos. 😆. Ah our good old days😭

RagNa is still alive in me and when i had written this FF a year earlier i wrote it with all my heart thats why its still the same. yes now i have moved on to other shows but that does not mean \i forget my old love 😳

This is Shana ka love and if i love , i don't forget , be it my FF, Friends ,Readers or Family. Yes I am like Raghav in this case 😆

Originally posted by: sugandhii

Damn...!!! How come I missed out such a great piece of work.. This story is beautiful..

Just read all 7 chappies in a go.. And seriously want more.. (I was travelling.. You give a perfect story to look forward to the fight of love vs revenge..)😛

The way you portray each n every character starts from kalpi to Ragha, kamla to pakhi.. Amazing 👏👏⭐️ and offcourse m speechless.. No words to describe the way you express everything beautiful..!!

I've always have fvrt writers, but story.. Girl you rocked it.. This one is no doubt starts to be my only fvrt one 😳 I just loved it..!!

P.S. saw the major tym lag in 1 chappy n 7th but didn't read your note about comeback n continue thingy... I actually made this one as my homepage n bookmark story, so do continue soon if you don't want me to read old updates 😆

Again loved it..!! 😛👏

Aww I am so overwhelmed by your appreciation . Thank U 😳

I am a RagNa fan like all my readers here and started writing when i felt that I want the story to go differently . I wrote with more heart then mind and I am happy u liked it 😊

I came back to write it again after one year coz of RagNa fans and my readers who loved it even though it was incomplete. So i though why not compete it for them and myself .

Originally posted by: Jaz_

You're back!! Missed this story. Was a silent reader when you started this story...just glad you decided to continue it, thanks!

Coming to the update...awesome one. Raghav wants his cake and eat it too. Thinks kalpi will understand and wait around. Don't make Kalpi weak. Time for Raghav to realize the repruccusions of his actions. If he wants revenge, that's fine. Then set Kalpi free. Can't have both. Loved the slap 😉

Thank U for commenting Jaz😊

Sure raghav will feel the repurcussions of his haste and ignorance towards relationships and people.His business PR may be good but he lacks a lot in personal PR. 😆

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

read all the 6 chapter in one go, and shana u thrilled me with ur creativity. What an amazing ff, thank u alot for continuing story again.

This is what exactly we always wish to see EMA, love, revenge, passion, jealousy, anger and most importatnly dream to fullfill.
Love each character here, and mostly kamala, u had portrayed her as she shown in serial, she though love kalpi bt her fondness towards pakhi making kalpi crave for her love,was amazing.
Raghav who was battling between love and revenge, wanted to held everything, bt situation wasnt with him. Still, an aura of being Business Tycoon and confidence he having to make thing perfect, was so amusing.
And kalpi,(m too much fond to kalpi always) just love her character, strong yet sensitive, smart yet innocent and lost still loving and caring, was so so beautiful.
Love dis ff, fabulous work dear 😳👏

Thank u Shonali

Yes I did write it coz i wanted things to be this way and i came back to continue it cozi want this fiction to have a final closure .

I am writing it for myself and my readers and wish u keep liking it 😳😊

plz update chapter 7.. waiting...

Originally posted by: rachufan

Res

Extremely sorry dear
i forgot sorry u wont believe i was reading it after reading all parts again i saw
my saw my res omg its how i explain u
once again sorry

U r magical writer sulerb jhakkas update
Kalpi totally heartbroken and her so called aai
thinking about her beti pakhi 😡
Raghav want to explain his "Plan" to kalpi
But his action already broke her heart in pieces
Omg she slap him
what will he do
how he convince her
And what will happen next
waiting for next update

Please update update update

Originally posted by: rachufan

Me too

Originally posted by: lolor

Me 3 😉

Originally posted by: riaka

Me 4😆

may i join u guys me 5