FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

awesome chappy dear.. Poor Kalpi.. Nd kamla she never thing abut Kalpi.. I hate her.. Dear waiting for nxt chappy.. Plz update soon..

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

U r back and with a big bang 😆 loved ur update rags is playing games and poor kalpi
Is getting the brunt of it. So now what will go
Down? Looking forward to next update. 😛

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

What a comeback update! Yes banging update! It's a whistle blowing update for the upcoming battle.

The shadow is most sharp, Nd most dark when the sun is at peak Nd the object is most dense ie at noon. And it merges with the object at tht time, rule of science, rule of life.

The Sun Of revenge Nd love is most powerful in Raghav in this moment with his act of announcing marriage with Pakhi, Nd the sun of disgust of BEING used by idol, consummed by IDOL is equally strong in object making her most dense, for if she had thought only with angle of their love she would hv given an ear of explanation to Raghav. But she Is naive for tht maturity. In her slap lied her possessiveNess, her claim for her love, her mentor, which Raghav the player has realized, Nd he is surely going to utilize it in his revenge game to burn Pakhi nd Kapoors.

Had Kalpi been more mature, revenge wouldn't have need possible with the intent now it will go. But unknowingly Raghav had given his reins in hand of kalpi, by saying explanation will be provided when Kalpi demands it, nd he is ready for more disgust, slaps etc. Unknowingly shadow has merged with the object. For it is only SOLE RIGHT of a WIFE to demand an explanation from a man. He HAS GIVEN THAT RIGHT to Kalpi, knowingly or unknowingly. Difficult Nd dangerous to execute revenge now without involvement of kalpi, for Kalpi might be less matured but much more sensible, will turn out to control the game of revenge. Hope Kalpi realize the right given to her by her love, her mentor.

So PAKHI will be his LAWFULLY WEDDED MISTRESS nd KALPI MINDFULLY WEDDED WIFE?

Shan u are a PERFECT player. The game indeed is getting interesting.

Edited by shoonya9 - 10 years ago

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Awesome update

Poor kalpi n kamla like irritated

Hmm prem is another hell

Rag get slap

Update soon

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Beautiful update. Update the next part soon

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gargdia

@gargdia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Shanu finaly u gave update...
What a comebck update...truly mindblowing😳

Ek mutthi aasman's main concept of raghav's revenge n kalpi's love always create intresting story n the way u turn n twist ur story is awsm...
Kamla as always igroed her OWN daugher for any1 else's daughter😡
she cnt even see the damage of that horrible news on kalpi...the nly persn who knws what happend in this moment realize colourles face of his rajkumari...
Poor girl deprivd frm mother's love lost her last hope of being loved n support of her MENTOR...
The way raghav has executed his plan i cnt expect maturity frm kalpi...y evrytm she do that?
Prem is a jerk...bt nwways suddnly y is he so much intrestd in kalpi...
Raghav is expectin so much frm kalpi...bt fr kalpi his touch n words r disgust n raghav realized it...who woman wil accpt anthr grl claiming on her love,her life,her support...kalpi's slap showd hw much she is angry..possesive...last nit was a bliss n morning blast..dark..😒
raghav is being stubborn decided nt to explain her til she herslf nt demand explainatin...it wil be interesting to see this BATTLE of love b/w 2 love striken people...😳

update nxt part soon shanu.. waiting.

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Sevenstreaks

@Sevenstreaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

I ve been waitng for d update long time..I knew someday u ll..thanks a lot for update 🤗..It was awesome asusual ⭐️..continue asap 😳

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anurose

@anurose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

thanx for updating it..it's awsm..

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Nikita

@Niki1980

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Posted: 10 years ago

#229

super update... Update the next part soon

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hathway

@hathway

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#230

Welcome back!!beautiful update.
I think this is the first FF where i have read mighty Raghav Singhaniya slapped in front of his whole staff. Loved it😉
Raghav was ready to explain, but Kalpi had overworked her brain to listen to anyone.
And i loved the most when Raghav was ready for more slaps & disgust coming from kalpi😛, since he was ready to accept with both hands whatever Kalpi would give it to him. He was mad and crazy in love with Kalpi.

Loved the update!!Thank you.

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