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Posted: 11 years ago
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Everything was normal like everyday for raghav singhaniya.Dead silence everywhere and also in his heart. He shutdown himself after that decision of her.He woke up and went for jog.
After covering some distance,suddenly his heart started to raise and was beating very fastly.at first he thought it was due to his health problem or so,but after taking an u turn to th park area ,a soothing laughter was heard by him.Unknowingly he follwed that melody, mean while he noticed that his heart started to raise again.In his words he was made alive again.
At somewhere, somepart of his mind was telling him that it was her.he started fighting with himself that whether he would go or not and finally he started
running in that direction,suddenly he felt that his breath was stopped there he saw HER,surrounded with the kids,making them laugh ,she looked like an ANGEL.
But he turned back and went away from there.After returning home,he started throwing things in anger,hearing loud noise sammy came running and seeing his friend in this much anger he also for 1 sec felt that he was seeing a different raghav.Recovered from shock,he kept his hand on his shoulder gently.
Sensing someone presence he left from there,without turning back.but sammy was confused that unable to guess the reason for his friend's anger.Later,he came to his room , kept his both hands on his head and started questioning himself " how dare she to come infront of my eyes again?"."why she came after dis damn six months?".Isn't she is the one who took that decision to go away from me after knowing my feelings for me?"why? why dammit?" he thought while making his left hand fist in anger.




This was my first os on ragna.i hope u guys like the beginning.if u want me to continue let me know.no eggs and tomatoes plzzz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb start
Raghav is so angry...
Plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes please do continue weekends are so boring os and ff like these make it bearable 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Start 👍🏼
please continue !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do continue.. I want to know wht happened inbetween these two love-birds.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb!!!
plz update soon👍🏼
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Awesome OS...! Waitin for next part...!
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nice start
plz update soon👍🏼
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nice start ...plz update faaast
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INTERESTING, LOVED IT,
LUKING FORWARD TO READ FUTURE UPDATES!!!!!

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