ragna os: tum sirf meri ho Updated

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Hey everyone!! I'm a new member to this show and forum and I've fallen in love with ragna soo much ki maine ek os likhe diya...hope u all like it... comments or criticism please!! The story will be updated shortly..I typed it all out on my phone so there may be mistakes...sorry for that.. 😛
***updated on next to posts...***
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**in this os Paakhi doesn't love Raghav she just respects and admires him and has feelings for Sammy.**

Prem kamla bai koi dhamkata hai ki woh Kalpi ki shaadi usse karwa de warna who Paakhi ko maar dalega. Kamla ko lagta hai ki woh saach mein aisa karega cuz he is really evil. so Kamla being Kamla agrees to get Kalpi married(I know that's really mean) to Prem aur woh Kalpi ke offfice jaati hai.

-in office-

Kamla: Kalpi

Kalpi: aayi tu yahan?? sab teek toh hai na? pakiya, baba sab teek hai na?

Kamla: woh teek hai...tu chal mere saath mujhe tujhese baat karni hai...

Kalpi: abhi?? abhi man kaise aa sakti hoon office chodh ke??

-kamla grabs kalpi's arm and starts dragging her.-

Kamla: maine kaha na chal...jaldi chal kalpi...bohat zarrori baat karni hai tujhse...chal

-raghav watches form his cabin while kamla takes kalpi with her.-

-at some distance from the office-

kalpi: aayi!! kya hua?? aur mujhe yahan kyun layi tu??

Kamla: tujhe mere liye kuch karna hai...karegi na??

Kalpi: haan aayi... joh bhi maine aaj tak kiya hai who tere liye hi toh hai...tere sapne ke liye...tere liye toh kuch bhi karsakti hoon...bol kya karna hai mujhe??

Kamla: tujhe prem baba se shaadi karni hai..

Kalpi: AAYI!!! yeh tu kya bol rahi hai!! main uss insaan se kaise shaadi karsakti hoon??!!

che!!

Kamla and kalpi argue for a while when kamla bursts.-

Kamla: tujhe meri kasam kalpi... tu yeh shaadi karegi!!!

Kalpi: a.. ah..aayi...k..kyun aayi?

Kamla: tujhe yeh karna hoga...mere liye..paak...mera matlab humare ghar ke liye.

-kalpi ko shak hota hai ki yeh sab paakhi ke liye horaha hai...she wipes her tears and asks kamla...-

Kalpi: teek hai aayi...mein prem se shaadi karungi lekin...lekin tujhe batana hoga ki main yeh shaadi kyun karun? kyun?

Kamla: kyunki main chaati hoon

Kapli: nahi aayi...mujhe sach cuna hai...main jaanti hoon ki yeh sach nahi hai...aur mein asli wajah bhi jaanti hoon par mujhe tere mooh se sunna hai..

Kamla: maine kaha na mere liye...mere liye kar yeh shaadi

Kalpi: aayi tujhe meri kasam!!!

Kamla: maine kaha na...

Kalpi: tujhe paakhi ki kasam...

-Kamla gets quiet.-

kalpi: kyun aayi.. bol..bol na..chup kyun hogayi?? bol na kii main yeh shaadi tere liye karun??Bol na AAYI!!!

Kamla: paakhi ke liye kar yeh shaadi tu...(cryingly) paakhi ke liye...prem baba ne kaha ki woh usse mar dalenge agar tune unse shaadi nahi ki...

Kalpi: jaanti thi... jaanti thi ki.. ki tu yeh sab kuch paakhi ke liye kar rahi hai...teek hai aayi...tere liye mein yeh bhi karungi... tu bina tension ke ghar jaa...a..aur unhe bol de ki main sh..shaadi karungi... lekin aayi...mujhe e..ek baat bata... agar mein paakhi ki kasam nahi deti... aur sirf apni kasam deti...kya tu meri jhooti kasam khaati?? saach batati kya tu mujhe??

-Kamla looks down-

Kalpi with a sad smile: koi baat nahi aayi... mujhe tera jawaab milgaya...teri chupi ne bata diya...aab aayi...jab shaadi hi karni hai prem se... toh iss naukri ki kya zaroorat hai?? jab sapna hi nahi raha toh yeh job kyun?? hai na aayi??

-kalpi numbly leaves from there.-

Kamla to herself: mujhe maaf karde kalpi... maaf karde... lekin iss waqt tujhe yeh karna hi hoga...paahki ki jaan ke liye.

-kamla leaves-

-kalpi dheere dheere office paunchti hai aur barish ki wajah se poori tarah bheeg chuki hai...she stumbles while walking but doesn't notice it...uss ke chehre pe aansoon sukh chuke hai-

-idhar raghav apne cabin mein bohat hi zyaada pareshaan aur impatient ho raha hai.

Raghav: dammit...kalpi abhi tak nahi aayi...how can she leave without permission...kamse kam kissi ko batake jaati kahan jaa rahi hai...mujhe na sahi..sammy ya paakhi ko bol-

-he sees kalpi walking in lifelessly and about to trip.-

raghav apne cabin mein chair se uth jaata hai: sambhaal ke!!

-kalpi steadies herself and snaps out of it.-

Kalpi: jab sapna hi toot gaya toh yeh job bhi karun..

-she walks to her desk and starts typing away. after a while Raghav calls Kalpi in.-

Kalpi: may I come in sir

Raghav: aaye miss. yadhav...kya main pooch sakta hoon ki aap duty time pe kahan gayi thi?

-kalpi is silent.-

rahgav: aab bolengi aap?? itna kaam chodh ke kahan chali gayi thi aap?? laparwai ki bhi haad hoti hai...aur aap bheeg kaise gayi??

kalpi: I'm sorry sir...aaj ke baad aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga...kabhi bhi nahi...

Raghav: miss Yadhav...

kalpi: ek minute sir...main abhi aayi...

-kalpi leaves and returns a minute later with a paper in her hand.-

Kalpi: yeh lijiye sir...

-hand over paper.-

Raghav: yeh kya hai?

kalpi: khud hi dekh lijiye...

-raghav reads the paper andd is shocked b/c it is her resignation letter.-

Raghav: miss yadhav...yeh aap apna...resignation letter,,, kya main jaan sakta hoon kyun?

Kalpi: aab iss job k..ki koi zaaroorat n..nahi hai sir...

raghav: aur aap ke sapne ka kya...woh sapna jpoh kamla maa ne buna tha??

Kalpi: jab bunne wale ne hi sapna tod diya toh phir main kya kar sakti hoon?

raghav: matlab??

-just then paakhi comes in excitedly.-

Paahki: kalpi!!!

-hugs her.-

Paakhi: I'm so so sooo happy...mujhe abhi prem bhao ka phone aaya!! I can't believe it... tum dono toh bade chupe rustam nikle...ladter ladte pyaar hogaya ki aab shaadi ho rahi hai!! wow!!

Raghav: miss kapoor! kya aap mujhe batayen gi ki aap kya keh rahi hain?

Paakhi: who raghav sir... prem bhai aur kalpi ki shaadi fix hogayi hai au aab kalpi meri bhaabhi banegi!! I'm soo happy!! mein abhi jaake kamla maa se baat karti hoon!!

-paakhi leaves.-

-raghav stopped listening to paakhi after he heard about prem-kalpi shaadi.

raghav self thought: shaadi!!?? prem aur kalpi ki?? yeh jaante hue bhi prem kaisa hai...kalpi ne haan kehdi??(out loud to kalpi); Kalp...mera matlab hai miss yadhav...kya yeh sach hai?? aap prem kapoor se shaadi kar rahi hai??

kalpi: h.. haan

-this is when raghav realises ki kalpi ek zinda laash jaise behave kar rahi hai and thinks ki kuch toh gadbad hai.-

Raghav: dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya!! tum jaanti hoon na ki prem kaisa hai??!! phir bhi?? haan kardi aur tumhari aayi ne bhi haan kardi??!!

Kalpi: jab aayi hi chaati hai ki main yeh shaadi karun toh main kya karsakti hoon?

-raghav is bewildered.-

raghav: what rubbish!!! who aisa kyun karengi??... yeh jaante hue ki prem tumhe...

Kalpi: torture karega?? yeh kehne wale the na??( sad smile plays on her face) paakhi ke liye...hamesha ki tarah uss ke liye...usski jaan ke liye...kushi ke liye.(tears form in her eyes)

-raghav is heartbroken seeing her tears and has an urge to wipe them off but controls himself. kalpi wipes her tears.-

Kalpi: sir, aap please mere resignation pe sign kar dijiye...mujhe darr hai ki shaadi ke baad who log mere through iss company ke secrets jaane ki koshish karenge...joh main hone nahi de sakti... aapki har nahi hone de sakti main...

-raghav is speechless-

raghav self-thought: kalpi tum kiss mitti ki banni ho? tumhari zindagi barbaad ho rahi hai aur tumhe meri haar ki chinta hai...kyun kalpi itni achi kyun ho? kyun?? aur kamla maa...unhe apni beti ki zaara si bhi parwa nahi hai... paakhi ke liye apni kalpi ka baledaan de diya yeh jaante hue ki uss ki zindagi naark se bhi batar hogi(worse than hell).

Kalpi: soch kya rahein hai sir?? sign kijiye!!!

Raghav( angrily): nahi.. na hi main iss letter pe sign karunga aur na hi maain tumhe yeh shaadi karne dunga...

Kalpi: aap sign karein ya na karein...maane ya na maane...yeh shaadi ho ke rahe gi...

-kalpi leaves and is packing her stuff-

raghav: nahi kalpi...main tumhe yeh shaadi nahi karne dunga...kabhi nahi

-raghav leaves to tell paakhi the truth. when paakhi finds out the truth..she is furious at her family and tells raghav that she won't let the wedding happen and that she'll leave her home and family.-

Edited by iluvrainaarti - 11 years ago
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-raghav goes to talk to kalpi again but sees that her desk is all empty and she isn't there...he asks the receptionist who says ki she left... raghav rushes out of the building to find her... about 15 mins later he finds her walking in the rain...he stops his car and runs to catch up with her and pulls her arm so they are face-to-face.-

Raghav: pagal ho gayi ho kya?? aise baarish mein chal rahi ho ki jaise it's a bright sunny summer day!!! bemar padh jaagi!! tumhe kuch hogaya toh??

kalpi: kuch nahi hoga mujhe...aur waise bhi kissi ko koi farak nahi parega.. aab choriye sir... mujhe ghar paunch na hai...shaadi ki taayarian karni hai, kapde lene hai, sajawat kar...

-raghav pulls her closer so that they're faces are inches apart.-

raghav: chup...bilkul chup!! tum yeh shaadi nahi kar rahi ho( in a deadly wishper)

kalpi: main yeh shaadi kar rahi hoon...aab choriye mera haath.

-kalpi struggles to free herself..but the more she tries the more raghav pulls her closer.both are fully drenched in the rain.-

raghav: tum yeh shaadi nahi karogi...main yeh hone nahi dunga...

kalpi: aap chahe kuch bhi karein lekin yeh shaadi hoke rahegi.

raghav: maine paakhi ko saab sach bata diya hai joh tumne mujhe kaha tha...aab who bhi mere saath hai..aab yeh shaadi nahi hoogi.

kalpi: aayi yeh shaadi chahti hai toh mein prem se shaadi karungi!!

raghav: nahi! nahi hogi samjhi tum!!!

kalpi: kyun sir??( pushing raghav with full force and freeing herself) jab meri khud ki aayi meri parwa nahi karti toh aap aap kyun kar rahein hai?? aap toh mujhese nafrat karte hai na!?? phir kyun??

Raghav: parwa hai!!! mujhe tumhari parwa hai!! kyunki main tumse pyaar karne laga hoon!!! I've fallen in love with you KALPI! aur main tumhe apni zindagi barbaad nahkarne dunga apni aayi ki wajah se...

kalpi(not believing raghav): jhoot..maath boliye sir...pyaar karna toh door ki baat..aap toh mujhe pasand bhi nahi kartein.. chodhiye mujhe...

-raghav pulls kalpi into a hug and hugs her with all his strength to prove his love.-

raghav(while hugging kalpi): jhoot nahi bol raha hoon...bohat pyaar karne laga hoon...itna ki jee nahi paunga tumhare bina... aur main yeh bhi jaanta hoon ki tum bhi mujhe se pyaar karti ho...warna tum mere nakhroon ke baad bhi meri itni chinta nahi karti...meri haar ki chinta nahi karti...yeh sab jaante hue main tumhe uss prem ke saath shaadi nahi karne dunga...kabhi nahi...tum sirf meri ho... sirf aur sirf meri..

-raghav hugs kalpi more tightly. after a while kalpi hugs him back and breakdown into tears.-

Raghav: jitna rona hai rolo...tuhare pas sirf yehi hi pal hai rone ke liye...iss pal ke baad main tumhe kabhi bhi rone nahi dunga..

Kalpi: itna pyaar maath kijiye sir... adaat nahi hai...

raghav: toh dal lo adaat...

Kalpi: dar lagta hai ki kahi aap bhi mujhe chor ke chale gaye toh???

Raghav: maut(death) ke baad bhi tumhe chodke nahi jaunga...

-kalpi breaks the hug and places her hand over raghav's mouth.-

Kalpi: aaj keh diya...phir kabhi maath kehna...(softly) main she nahi paungi..

-raghav removes her hand and kisses her forehead. kalpi hugs him.-

Raghav: abhi bhi tumhe uss prem se shaadi karni hai???

kalpi: nahi...lekin aayi...

Raghav: unki chinta maath karo...

-raghav's phones rings...its Sammy; after the call raghav is smilling

Raghav: congrats.(cuts call.) sammy ka phone tha...paakhi ne ghar chod diya aur sammy ke saath re rahi hai...dono ne ek dusre se apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya hai aur shaadi karna chaate hai...toh tumhari problem solved kyunki sammy paakhi ko har khatre se bacha lega... aab tumhe kamla maa bhi nahi kahengi iss shaadii ko karne ke liye...

-kalpi is too happy and out of happiness hugs raghav. Both stay like that for a while.-

Kalpi: lekin paakhi saamy sir ke saath kyun rahegi?? Woh mere saath rahegi...abhi phone karti hoon usse...

Raghav: itna kuch hone ke bad bhi tumhe paakhi ki chinta hai?? Itni selfless jaise joh sakti ho tum???

Kalpi: aayi baba ne sikhaya hai...aur waise bhi...paakhi jaisi bhi hai dil ki saaf hai...bus todhi so naadaan hai aur bohat overprotected hai...aab main phone karun??

-raghav nods and holds her hand while...kalpi phones paakhi while raghav watches and adores her every expression be it on of anger, happiness, and feels his respect and love growing for her...after the call.-

Kalpi: chalein sir?? Office??

Raghav: abhi nahi...aur yeh sir wir kehna band kardo...aab se sirf raghav kahogi tum...

Kalpi: ji sir...mera matlab hai r..rr...raghav.(smiling and blushingly)

Raghav: aye haye...meri kalpi sharmati bhi hai...mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tha...

-kalpi blushes more and slightly hits raghav on his arm...then raghav gets serious...-

Raghav: kalpi mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai...

Kalpi: kahi na si..raghav...kya kehna hai???

-raghav gets down on one knee.-

Raghav: miss kalpana yadhav...kya tum zindagi bhar ke liye meri kalpi banogi, mera haar ek nakhra, mera gussa bardasht karogi??? Is akdoo adial ko ek Acha insaan banaogi??? Kya tum mujhe se shaadi karogi???

-kalpi gets emotional.-

Kalpi(shaking her head): haan!!

-raghav removes is ring and slides it in kalpi's ring finger...its a perfect fit.-

Kalpi: lekin main aapko badlongi nahi...aap jaise ho achhe ho..

-raghav gets up and again gives her a sweet peck on her forehead-

Raghav: waise kalpi...tumhe ne abhi take woh teen shaabd nahi kahein.

-kalpi gets shy again-

Kalpi: woh sabmab baad mein...pehle office chalein(trying to avoid saying the words.)

Raghav(holding her lightly from her waist: nahi...jab take tum mujhe I love you nahi bologi...tab tak hum yahan se nahi jayenge...

Kalpi: arre... Lekin him dino poor I tarah bheeg chuke hain aur aap ko sardi lag jayegi..please chaliye na..

Raghav: bheeg me do...waise bhi aab bheeg me ka maan kar raha hai...aab toh boldo please??!!

Kalpi: teek hai...I...l...lo..love...y..you..

-she hides her face in his chest while raghav just hugs her back...kalpi ko woh ek insaan mil gaya tha joh khud se bhi zyaada usko pyaar karta hai...woh ek insaan joh har kissi ki zindagi mein hona chayie...

the end
Edited by iluvrainaarti - 11 years ago
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sooo sweeet update :)
Prem 😡
RagNa 😳
happily ever after :-):-)
loved it write more :-)
And yeah Welcome to the forum
have a great time here :-):-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdollphin

sooo sweeet update :)
Prem 😡
RagNa 😳
happily ever after :-):-)
loved it write more :-)
And yeah Welcome to the forum
have a great time here :-):-)


Thank u!! Glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was such a beautiful & sweet OS! it was truly a treat! :)
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Thank u!!
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Originally posted by: yellowpurse

that was such a beautiful & sweet OS! it was truly a treat! :)


Thank u!! glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice OS!
beautifully described dear.
i loved how Raghav confessed his feelings to Kalpi.
and Kamla is just 🤢 🤢, i think if this situation really arise in the show, she will definitely react as you described.
hats off to you sweetheart! you wrote very well. 👏 👏

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