OS...MY VALENTINE...completed + Raghav POV - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
big applause for this wonderful os👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yess yess yess yess want Raghav's pov.. This was terrific goshhh wht should i say... I mean nt getting words to describe this ... U fully made me speechless... Jus kudos u...👏 hatss of to u 👏 👏 ohh my god such a romantic V'day wowww jus superrr se bhi uparrr amazing & marvellous...sizzling,dazzling,hottt...all in one... Loved to the core ❤️
Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice


Soni I just love to read ur comments. They r a delight and so so encouraging...I just hope reading this is will make ur valentine special too...I am waiting for your comments on last chapter and hoping if you wish to share ur lovely lovely views...at least I made ragna valentine... Awesome...dunno about the show though..


This is the best gift for me...donno abt show but i truely over enjoyed this OS than the show...it was jus like i'm watching them onscreen...ur imagination power is brillient ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️
Love u loads & loafs of huggies my di jaan 🤗
& wish u very Happy V'day 😳
& also thanxx a ton for a wonderful OS🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
I read the last three chapters and they all are superb
Raghav is too much lol
Love Kalpi and Abhay bond
Jealous Raghav is too much fun
Aww I love how Kalpi let go of everything and just dance freely
When she open her eyes and saw the man she love was just magical
Omg!!! Raghav kiss her, I hope it's not a dream
I love the happy ending
Edited by Natasha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
very nice update.
Plz give raghav's pov
Edited by Wj.mad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
RAGHAV POV
Its getting very difficult to concentrate on party. Why isn't paakhi in yet? Will kalpna come? Just her name does something to me. Strange feelings she has awoken in me. I need to stay away and so does she. Omg...! Whose that who entered behind the mask...two girls both in Sarees...who r they? And who was s that girl in that peacock Saree.'
Raghav was mesmerized. He just couldn't take his eyes off her. He knew it that was Kalpana. He could find her anywhere..behind any mask...she couldn't hide from him ever. And as if seeing her was working like a tonic...all his restlessness was gone...he was stuck at her. My god...she was looking effing enchanting...she was looking like a mermaid in those dark hues...hott, sexy were very low words...she was ethereal and her hairs..wow never seen her decked up like this...just control is out of question..I can't control my legs which r pulling you towards me...but ..I need the control I can't give up...but at least I can enjoy her..see her.
' I just pulled her...she was looking me with those mysterious eyes...I loved her expressions tonight...She was stunning the most beautiful girl I have ever seen... What am I thinking? Nope don't give her hopes. U will have to hurt her or else she will see through you. Right paakhi...best shield. He could feel her hurt but had no choice..He had to do it.
But hell " what did she say...she doesn't want me to touch her, me and what that I need to take permission...how date she become so daring..she's challenging me knowing I can't resist...what does she think of herself and why does she have to look like she cares for me...I don't want anyone in my life to take care of me...I just hate her and I want her to hate me ..after today she will do... She will hate me..
My god..this paKhi..so impossible to handle her stupid talks...and now I will have to dance with her...well at least this miss. Attitude will leave , after so much insults...I can't see her crying..plz go away Kalpana..am not for you.
' whose this guy? Why is he staring her like this.? I just wish to punch him hard. What he's flirting with kalpi, how dare he and she...she's smiling. This girl has no brains leading on a stranger... Wait he knows her..they know each other..wf* if only he wasn't Maya's cousin. But why is it bothering me.
Raghav jealousy had no bounds...and seeing him holding her waist he just wanted to snap his hand out of his body...he was afraid now seeing them so happy together that if he took away his kalpi...the way he was looking g at her with I hate to say so much love and that possessiveness... It should have been me and not him...Raghav for in yes first time felt like crying and pain...then he WS lost in her dance..she was bewitching...where was this kalpi...oh god..what have I done? I have hurt her so much...I now no I love her like no other man...I am getting mad for her...oh how I hate myself
.I just can't see her with anyone else.
He saw a girl coming towards him.
G-hey dude..hi am pia, pia dobrial.
R- hi, what do want, sorry I don't no you..!
P- y do you guys have to be so pigs. If you love her...why you want her to go away and keep fuming here and make her life hell and yours also. Seriously u all r same. Wake up man..get her..before she does away never to come back or you hurt her so much that she can never stand and trust again. Tell me what is your problem... She loves you its prob and she hates you that is also a prob. God why r these made and we girls stupid to fall for these akdoos..
R- what do you think? Don't you see she's dancing with someone and she's so happy..will she now cone to me?
Pia- u guys lend ur brains somewhere. All ur confidence speaks only on tables and offices but when its time for confessions u guys r so scared.. Will she eat you away idiot...just look at her..when two people r in in love do they dance like this.. Raghav saw both of them . yes indeed they were both dancing with their eyes closed and sort of it felt in their different world's with their different partners...means they were not couple or love birds..
R-u r right. But how do u know all this. And what r you doing here? How can you be so sure
Pia- and here I tht only I am a question book. Dumbo..I am Kalpana and abhays friend. Actually he's my abhay And me his pia. He's my Mr.akdoo, my Mr.khadoos and my love...we r Abhiya...eternal Abhiya...go make your love ..go make your Ragnaa world duffer...and give me my abhay back...I need to celebrate my valentine with him...and yes...these two share a very pure relation...call them soul brother and sisters...if thats enough for you...stop goofing and smiling here...go to your love before she gives up..
Raghav went to abhay...who was now looking at him smilingly...
A- buddy if you ever ever hurt her...I will kill you ..I swear..u have hurt her a lot...and one advice...u need all the luck...since u have too now trapped by a jungles cat...believe me..we both r morons and lucky to have such beautiful women in our lives..mine is standing there as nd urs is waiting for you...but don't you ever come in between..me and my Kalpana...and yes..u r also invited to my marriage...now for you to decide as man and wife..or whatever..
R- why not we get married together...let's both of us hang together...and tell me..ur pia is too hot too ..how do you handle her..
A - yupp she's hott...and makes me boil...don't worry you will learn yourself...now go and hold her..ur Kalpana...before someone else do it...and yeah I talked pia here...after all I am incomplete without her...we r ABHIYA...GO U MAKE UR RAGNA...AND I WILL TAKE EVERY ONE WITJ ME...SO ALL HERE LERS GO TGE PARTY IS OVER...AND LET THE MUSIC PLAY ON FOR THESE TWO LOVE BIRDS...


Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Guys what an awesome epi it was...and here is Raghav POV to end this os... Hope u all like it...bye..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Wow... Awesum update Ana didi.. Loved it to the core..And u've also included one of my favourite couples AbhIya... Thanx a ton for this chapter... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Awesome Update Ana👏
Btw, Did I told how much I love this Vampire King❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Awesome Update Ana👏

Btw, Did I told how much I love this Vampire King❤️

yupp I read that year...I miss him And my abhiya like crazy...god I madly want them back...and now this ragna has started killing me..oh god...Ashish...darn it...u r making me feel like a teenager.. Uff

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