OS...MY VALENTINE...completed + Raghav POV - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Nice Update...If I'm not wrong Raghav has done everything deliberately to push Kalpi away

Update the next part ASAP😊

hmm u r right to some extent...but its gonna backfire badly...am telling you 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mihika

who is this someone??😕 btw it was nice actually it was more of a challenging update ..👏 update soon

yupp...it was dare bare update...both daring each other in their own way...wait and watch...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anjinie

I hope Kalpi makes Raghav jealous. lovely update

she won't do it...but someone else might...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Awesome update
Aww again Raghav insult Kalpi...
Who is Kalpi missing and wish was there???
This suspense is driving me crazy lol
Plz continue soon

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😆...ragna are crazy so we too need to be at least little crazy..Raghav sudhrega nahi jaldi...but insult...toh an bahut ho gayi...now its his bad time..learning a lesson.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: FanOfRagna

OMG!! It's freakin' awesome dear. Plz continue ... And who is diz someone ?? Prem or sammy ??

neither prem nor sammy 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
It"s an awesome os👏... Poor Kalpi😭.. update soon..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4
' SO AGAIN paakhi is the lucky one. Y of all this day I had to realize one feeling I never felt before ever. Have I actually fallen in love now or had already been there in childhood itself when it didn't mean anything.. Raghav was special always. And I didn't even realize when this feeling grew into love. Now I understand why his every word hurts me and never others had that effect on me. I am so unlucky. I can't share my pain with anyone.' She looks towards her Saree and had a sweet smile. This was one and only gift she had received from someone who had seen similar ups and down ...who had travekked a similar path with her.' Oh , how I miss those moments and that support now...plz god..'
She was still lost in her thoughts and was about to go back. She had decided to leave the party before anyone noticed. She was tired of fighting, of proving herself again and again, for being insulted,for loving a person who would always mock and hate her. She was completely broken and shattered feeling the most lonely soul on this earth...when she heard Sammy calling her name and being pulled back to where paakhi and Raghav were. She had no heart and courage to see the lovebirds. She was happy for paakhi.. But somewhere she longed to be where paakhi was...that is with Raghav. She felt drained of all spark and energy and the only tonic which she needed now she won't be getting...tiredly she looked up at Sammy.." What's with you Sammy? Y the hell r u yelling? " Sammy was a little surprised at her irritating behavior and so were paakhi and Raghav. She never behaved like this.
R- " what Sammy? U hurt the princess . see she's getting so irritated as if u just disturbed her dream date." Everyone chuckeled and tht Raghav was just joking and pulling kalpi leg. But kalpi knew he was making fun of her again. And she was more hurt again.
Paakhi- " common Raghav, stop pulling her legs. She's so serious kinds I think nobody would dare date her"
S- OK now! Enough of jokes. Maya had called up. She couldn't make it to the party , but she had invited one of her cousin who was here in India in this party and he has come. So Raghav would you guys mind...he's new here.
R- sure why not! After all its her success party as well. Call in I don't mind.
Kalpi just wanted to go home and paakhi was drooling over Raghav..who was in turn slyly looking at tired kalpi from the corner of his eyes. Kalpi looked at them and at that moment Raghav asked paakhi for a dance after they meet Maya's cousin. Kapaakhi was kind of acting crazy. She went near kalpi .
P- kalpi, what a day. See Raghav asked me for a dance. Isn't it so great.
kalpi with a slight frown" what? I tht he proposed you. U were acting so happy?
P- loz..really..hope your dream comes true. Chalo at least he complimented me for my looks for first time. Khadoos kahin ka . I tni dear se uske saath khadi noon...much baat hi nahi karta...he's acting so weird. Na jaane kahaan khoya rehta hain. Aur tu yeah bata , what were you guys talking standing there haan? For one moment I tht he couldn't take his eyes off you! Thank god..I was so wrong.
K- oh! We were actually just talking about upcoming projects..
P- really! It seemed something else..let it go...I am so excited to dance with him...kalpi..what will you do...with whom will you dance?
Kalpi - actually I will just meet this guest and go home. I am feeling very tired.
R- yeah paakhi, let her go. Waise who will dance with her? He said infuriatingly.
Sammy came along with the guest.
S - so guys here is Maya's cousin., ABhay...Mr.Abhay Raichand, son of chand raichand...
Since it was a masquerade party all were in theirmasks and do was Abhay.( he he..guys I just love abhay and I just need a chance to bring him into my stories and I miss my vampire Abhay very very much😆😉😉)
Abhay shook hands with everyone except kalpi.
R- hey welcome. I think I have heard ur name somewhere.
P- of course Raghav He's a famous fashion designer. Last year he won the best young designer in Paris fashion week just the same year you won your entrepreneur award.
Paakhi put her hand forward but Abhay ignored her completely and was looking at the shocked Kalpana..with a very huge grin.
Abhay- " hey beautiful, am abhay..Abhay Raichand..." Kalpi was still standing like a statue staring at him with open mouth. All were surprised seeing her reaction. As if she's seen a ghost. Raghav didn't like the way she was behaving that too with Mayas cousin. He already wanted to hate her ...she had hurt his ego big time already...neither did he like abhay calling him beautiful and staring at her..
Raghav mockingly" miss jhadav.!.behave when we have a guest. If u r not feeling well just get lost and don't bother coming back and spoil mood of everyone here"
Kalpi came out ta her trance hearing Raghav hard words..they made her heart bleed...but now what she was watching ..was it real..she stared into the blue eyes which were kind if reading her soul, her plight. This was the most amazing blue eyes she had ever seen. How could she ever forget them .she saw his expressions change...hearing those hard words and neither she nor anyone standing there could fathom what happened next.
Abhay stopped Raghav in between his words...cut him in between and said in an arrogant manner
Abahy- u know what Raghav...u want to get her lost...thanx a lot..but u know...I would never let her get lost...right beautiful..so how about this thought...does it impress you much to have a dance with me...Kalpana...u just look like my imagination"
Kalpana's eyes bulged out of its socket...her mouth formed a big O..and same was the state of Sammy and paakhi. They couldn't believe the gall of this abhay...he was mocking Raghav...the Raghav Singhania...Sammy knew Raghav wouldn't like it at all..he never liked someone throwing him in a corner.
Raghav was very furious. First ever time someone was mocking him..no one dared do that. Arrogance of this man..and hell what the hell he's flirting around with kalpi..no one messes with Raghav and well he's gonna get back...when he sees abhay bending and whispering something in kalpi ears whivj made her mouth shut and and and..heck..she's smiling...I just don't believe...she's smiling at this bloody stranger. Sammy and pakhi were watching Raghav intently fearing his temper but they too were shocked at the act of abhay and kalpi smiling and that whispering looked so intimate.
Abhay- bent slightly and whispered... " kabootri mooh band jar, bechare macharon par Rehem kha..kyun infection faila rahi hai.".
Kalpana POV
Kalpi was shocked.., surprised and happy and as she heard the word kabootri...all her tensions fled away. She couldn't believe her eyes. She was gawking at him. She couldn't believe that he was her Abhay...her Abhay whom she was missing badly..she was craving for him and here he is. He hasn't changed a bit. Same arrogance, haughtiness naughtiness , flirtiness...he hasn't changed at all...its been years since she met him...she was elated..her happiness knew no bounds...she forgot all heribdults everything seeing him..she saw everyone's strange faces glaring them both but she didn't care...all she was doing was watching Abhay ...her abhay when she heard Raghav and saw her glaring at them...
R- hello Mr.abhay...look this girl is just a junior...u must mingle with people of ur standard..of your class...these people will ruin our mood and I would defo not want Maya to complain it to me.
A- thanks Mr. Singhania...but mail kya kahoon..mail shayar toh nahi..par jabse dekha Maine isko mujhko shayri as gayi..class may matter for you.. But an chahe junior ho ya koi aur ..yeah dil hain ki manta nahi..." He looks towards kalpi and winks.." So Mr. Raghav.. Tomorrow is valentines day...and today I et a very beautiful lady...who has created a special place in my heart..so let's enjoy this party...I think u and paakhi were about to go and dance right... U may proceed...till I wake this sleeping beauty named kalpna...to make my day by dancing with me? So will you dance with me...?"
P- Hey , Abhay...but you know what sh never dances..she just doesn't no to dance..
Raghav and Sammy both were fuming at his open flirty behavior with Kalpana..they both took an instant disliking to this guy...and they were equally surprised at a changed kalpi...she seemed like she was enjoying this frame and his flirtiness...she was blushing and smiling at the same time which was new to them...they always tht she was an arrogant and a suky and serious kind of person.
R- ash! So abhay...let's see if she dances or not...coz if paakhi is right...u would look as a fool and that's your wish if you wanna look like a fool...
Raghav was smirking when again he saw kalpi who was watching him furiously...this time he could see so much hatred in her eyes...he felt very bad at insulting her but he had no choice...coz he would never let her become his weakness and break his shell...for that he had to break her...
Kalpi POV
I can e a damn ...he's such an arrogant swine...he's so angry at one moment and next he's insulting me like a trash...I will not take it lying...today Raghav...I will break this fake shell of hours and yes I know u r hurting me purposely using paakhi and ur crude remarks..but enough is enough...I won't sulk anymore...I will enjoy this night like never and will make sure that u and all see every bit of it...
To be cont'd...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Guys I pdated part 4 plz read❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
beautiful update.
Love this new character. And every bit of the update
Plz update next chapter. Aaj plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Hmmm interesting so this abhay must be a frnd of hers :) Sgez gonna dance & Raghav will be left fuming bt this tym in jealosy :)
Lovelytrack olz cont soon ;)

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