OS...MY VALENTINE...completed + Raghav POV - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
whoa...whoa, what an update😆 Jealous, fuming Raghav is always a treat. I can see Raghav's plan getting back fired🤪
Please update the next part soon

P.S. Thanks for Abhay Raichand, Vampire King...I miss him so very much❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Abhay is Kalpi's childhood friend, hope she shows them that she can dance n make Raghav n gang like fools, awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
wooohooo raghav jealous yeahhh awesome update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 5
KALPI POV

' See abhay , just what your single presence has done to my broken confidence...thank a Lott..I couldn't have got a better gift ever..
P- kalpi why don't u tell him you can't.. Why make a fool of him and yourself...what would Maya say..how our employees r?
Raghav didn't like one bit the way paakhi was speaking but he kept quiet ..he wanted kalpi to go away and he was also hating the way that idiot was behaving but since he was Maya's cousin he just kept his anger in check...but what happened next took him by surprise..MIT shook the foundation he was standing on...
Abhay- Really miss. Kapoor...! Haha ! But you don't no me...I can even make a stick dance..and this is Kalpana you r talking about...who in my knowledge is one of the best dancers around. I never knew how my dance istructer made her famous as a non dancer...quite a talent you have Kalpana...to be known as a non talented...
All are shocked at this revelation...kalpi glaringly watches abhay " abhay can't u just shut your bloody mouth...u will never change , I just hate you this moment"
A- " really..and I thought you were missing me so much that I just came down to India in search for you...and my my...what divi see..my kalpna exactly looks as my kalpna...I so wanted to see you in this Saree...always dreamt of it...after all this was my first ever creation designed by myself especially for you...and you say you hate me" he was pouting and making puppy faces..
Kalpi tht' god he will never change ever. Darn he's so cute just like a baby...pouting as if been scolded ...really I missed him so much...he really came for me..to meet me. Its a dream cone true. I missed all this fun so much. No one makes me feel like he does. And I really want to enjoy tonight..ciz I know he has to be somewhere else tomorrow. And I always wanted him to see me wearing this Saree...wow...seemsctoday is best day of mybkife in recent times... Now Mr. Khadoos u will know that am not alone...I too have someone who credits and values me. Who can't take any bullshit for me. I could just feel raghavs burning gaze on me. Omg! He was checking me out..looking at me furiously..from top to toe...he was throwing daggers at me...if looks could kill I would have been dead..! I was taken aback by this reaction of his. He hates me right...then what was his problem...and why am I feeling so guilty...what's wrong with me...why should I even care. He didn't even once think before insulting me in front of the stranger...so y is he intimidating me...no wait...y is he coming here...abhay finish your damn call ..come fast, oh shit!'
Raghav sends Sammy and paakhi off to get a drink and harshly pulls kalpna towards him..
R- hell! What is this ? Who is this bloody jerk? How do you know him and fro when? What the hell he meant that he came down especially for you? U both know each other. And and this Saree...heck..how dare u Kalpana.. I heard everything. Infacct he was so loud that everyone her knows that he and you r...Dan it...so u knew he was coming here and you r so sexily decked up for him...why ? Oh so u wanna impress him! Huh ! And I never knew u were so easily sold. How much did he pay to get you? Tell me...u know what I feel like puking thinking about how low and despo you r...he's flirting around ETH you and you just keep on smiling..
K- look Raghav...u r mad...u have gone insane...its nothing like what you think..u don't even no what u r talking..u r hurting me..just leave me.I don't wanna talk to you?
R- oh so am mad now, u never smile at e like this, u never flirt around with anyone...and with him u r practically ready to fall in hislap...who is he to you? U have proved I t not worth anyone. You r a cheater? A greedy female just like others..u r no different...I never knew you had connection with such big people...say what di you want..I can give you much better gifts much costlier...I am as rich as he is...so will you come with me..u know what even then I don't want you...I just hate you the core...I can never love a cheap and despo girl like you...how badly I hate you...and u will be the last female on earth that Raghav singhaniya will look at..." With this he pushed her away and stormed away towards the drink counter. Kalpi was utterly shocked at his outburst. She was scared, hurt pained. Even tears were not falling over. She couldn't believe that he would think so low of her . she felt cheap and disgusting. He felt like an alien..an altogether a different man...he was contradicting himself. Questioning and then answering himself. He had already drunk three glasses in one row. He looked scary. Like a maniac. Actually even paakhi was looking scared.' What should I do? Oh he won't believe anything I say. But I shouldn't weaken. My love doesn't give him right to cheapofy me..to disgust me to accept insults. It demands trust , faith , honesty and love. And it will get its due. U will learn Raghav to get that lost faith and trust. Everyone is not the same. And I for one...well now I will never leave you. I will face you headstrong. Raghav...I will win you back. This time I am sure you love me to an extent that you hate yourself for loving me. RAGHAV YOU WILL BE MY VALENTINE AND AM SURE ABOUT IT. U WONT LET ME IN...FINE I WILL BARGE IN BY HOOK OR CROOK..AND SHE GAVE A BIG SMILE...ALL TO HERSELF...SHE HAD GOT HER LIGHT AND HER WAY BACK...
A- So u finally decided you will win him. Good, now god save him from you..poor guy...
K- look whose talking..yupp abhay..its weird naa..why u all guys act as morons...can't a simple I love you do...and how did you know that I love him...
A- kalpi...you have been my kabootri...my messenger to my Pia...I have been through all thick and thin of that age with you...I know you inside out just as you no me...as for guys...well they need girls like you to bring them on line..he grinned...see ur man wants to kill me right this moment...and am so enjoying it. See he's not even taking his eyes off you..though he's dancing with someone else...
k- Abhay...do u think he loves me
A- he's insanely crazy about you...and just hold my hand kalpi..and I give you a live telecast."..holding her hands " funny he wants to kill me..haha he loves you hard..but stupid fool. Is still fighting a big ego...only then will he cone down on his knees." They both r grinning..from afar it looked as if they r sharing some special talks and the way kalpi is blushing..well may give ideas..haha
K- Abhay..it seems history repeating itself. The way you had stay away morcha with Pia...I think raghs too is the member of same morcha...tell me was he ur old follower...u must be connecting to him so much na...thank god pia never gave up on you...and so will I .
A- don't remind me sweety...I was very very very idiot..only coz of pia...I am a sane man...and so is this idiot...soon he too will be sane when he comes to know that he's trapped by this mini tsunami called Kalpana whose not gonna leave him...poor guy..my all consolations to you..mmy bad luck I met pia and your bad luck you met kalpi...haha we met wrong girls bro...an koi nahi bacha sakega tumhe Raghav...so kalpi chal Teri paakhi KO dikhade tu dance kaise karti hain...aue haan thank kalpi..for wearingvthis Saree..meri and pia ki first creation. Acha u know we also have started a casual line in your name. We both miss you so much. Finally we getting married as her father have given us permission now...so u have to be the I at my wedding at any cost...and bring that akdoo also with you...I guess he will be most happy hearing about my marriage but with pia and not you...chuckling..he pulled her on the floor with him whilst two brooding angry eyes were watching silently all this from afar...

So how was it guys...still to be continued...only if you guys want and give good dashing comment...


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Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
awesome.
one more update.
but still want to read more.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
I am loving this...You are on a roll today 👍🏼
Fantastic Update...waiting for the next part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice update.. Loved it :))))
continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
heiii ... it was really nice update...don't u think the insults ve gone too far... i love u for bringing abhay.. continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
superb update👏
u r on a full swing today
plzzz update next part today itself
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Ohh my godd i njoyed this oS to the core... I njoyed this than a show yaar...sachhi itz aswesome ...full fire,jealousy,passion,hate,love...ohh my god all in one frame...
I loved abhay...kalpi's bonding wid him...
Njoyed each & every bit of this OS..totally rockingg OS 😳
Jus awesome,marvellous..fantabulous⭐️👏👏
U r a rockstar my di jaan ⭐️⭐️
Love u loads di 🤗
Plz countinue ASAP..can't wait yar

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