OS...MY VALENTINE...completed + Raghav POV

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi all ..just got an idea...so here I am...plz enjoy and forego the mistakes...

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PART 1 PG 1

PART 2 PG 1

PART 3 PG 5

PART 4 PG 7

PART 5 PG8

PART 6 PG 10 LAST PART+ NOTE PG10

OS COMPLETED + Raghav POV pg 12

Kalpi POV

'I never wanted to go to that damned party. Definitely am not required there too. But this paakhi will never let me live in peace. She always have to poke everything to aayi. And heights she wants to wear this shit of a dress when few days back she was blaiming me for selling her presentation. I don't have a choice..do ?. I still can't forget the way Mr.singhaniya behaved with me that day. And still he isn't sorry for what he did even when I proved myself loyal. He's strange...if he hates me so much why give me an other chance. Sammy..

I tht he was really a cool smart man. But he too is same , totally judgmental and why? Just because I am not as reach as them, that I am needy and they r not, so do they have a right to point finger at me? Paakhi should have been careful with her plan and so should have that akdoo..he seems to be so smart and clever but he proved himself to be a total dumb...which big magnate goes into such big deals without a back up plan. It still pains in my heart. Thank ayi for making me Strong and I will surely not back away from my 30 day challenge. I will answer u back Mr.arrogant by my work and not my mouth. Uff this stupid valentine party. How badly I miss having a best friend this time. Really sometimes u need them. Huh..m not wearing this skimpy gown.Then what do I wher?'

Searching through her clothes she found a peacock colored shimmer shiffon Saree...she smiled seeing at it. This saree was special. She decided to wear the same.

' Its my lucky Saree and I feel I need all luck today. It has so many hues and effects in it just like my life. Yet its classy and one and only party stuff I got'

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Looking in the mirror ..she applied khol to her eyes with a touch of green and blue liner in a stylish way. A little mascara to enhance her already curved eyelashes, a full sequein blouse in turquoise blue and little silver and copper touch which was highlighting her glowing skin with a deep cut knotted back..almost backless.

'Wow, I really look good. I need to coz I wan to Stand tall amidst all those rich people. I can't let Mr.arrogant intimidate me or. Rather anyone. I know what I am and will prove my worth. '

She had curled her hairs a bit and let it lose falling on her sholdier. Watching herself I mirror.she tht a out the Saree again smiling ..and hoping against hope that someone she was remembering would see her in it. But , knew it would ever happen when she heard paakhi entering wearing a gown...she was looking as pretty as ever..yes she was indeed beautiful and good at heart. But only when it came to say I she hated her. Paakhi was looking stunning and suddenly angry.

P- kalpi...why aren't u wearing a gown I sent you. You didn't like it.? I thought we both would be wearing gowns and have so much fun.

K- paakhi...I don't wear those type of clothes you no na. I like to be simple and Indian looks good on me. I am more comfortable in Saree.

P- hmm... On second thoughts u r right. And kalpi u r looking stunning. This Saree is so beautiful. U never showed me this Saree. If I would have seen u swear I would have worn it today...rather I feel..I too have got a new Saree which dad gave me...let's change it..u wear that and I wear urs.

K- no P , am not gonna change it and this is old one...it won't suit you., neither it is any designers..so let's go..we will be late.and if u cry for this and call ayi..I swear I will not go with you neither talk to you.

P- fine, but ..OK let me change...I too wanna wear a Saree now. Just give me few min.

Kalpna knew why paakhi was doing it. She had angered paakhi by refusing to budge so now paakhi to wanted to wear a Saree to compete her. Kamala and vitthal saw them both and Vere delighted on seeing both in Sarees. They both complemented them...

Kamala was only staring at paakhi and finally she said that she was the most beautiful girl in world which hurt kalpi..but vitthal too said that kalpi was most beautiful person and a princess of his heart. Kalpi had tears in her eyes but she put up a smile and left with paakhi for the dumb valentine party...

TO BE CONTUNUED ONLY IF U GUYS WANT ME TO..SO PLZ GIVE ME COMMENTS SO THAT I CONTINUE AND PLZ SHARE UR THOUGHTS REGARDING WHAT U THINK WILL HAPPEN IN MY PARTY...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 2

KALKHI- KALPI+ PAAKHI

Kalkhi entered the party with masks on. Yes it was a masquerade party. Pakhi was very excited. She was chattering non stop while kalpi was feeling annoyed and yet happy at her enthusiasm. She loved pakhi' s liveliness to her seriousness. But how could she feel so lively when her life itself was a struggle. It wasn' t all roses for her. Many thorns would prick her before she got the rose. Kalpi observed the setting. It was too dreamy, fairy tales like..with day m lighting... Soft music playing..everyone present was hiding behind a mask...what an irony...so easy to hide itself under a mask faking ur self and still believing that he/ she are here to celebrate love. All fake...just like that Mr.Arrogant. kalpi just wanted this damned party to be over. She silently took a drink and went and stood in a corner watching everyone. She saw paakhi mingling with a few peeps. Guess she recognizes them. This was when she felt like someone staring her intensely. She didn't no who it was but she could feel the hair on her neck stand ..a shiver running down her body..her stance became erect all of a sudden when she felt someone nearing her. She was feeling goosebumps yet she didn't dare...she had a gutt feeling of who was closing in on her. And she dearly wanted to avoid him. Her hurt was still raw and she didn't want to get more insulted. She decided to get some fresh air and moved away.

" where do u think u r going? Running away.. Huh..? "

' didn't dare turn and see. He was to near to me.what is with him? Y doesn't he ever leave me alone'

" y r u shying away? U look just ravishing. I know u won't believe..but u look the most beautiful girl here tonight...mind you Raghav Singhania doesn't complement anyone much. Will u plz now turn around?"

' I have no choice. Better face him than run away. But hey, wait he did complement me'.

with a Lil nervous smile she turned around only to be pushed in a dim corner by his rough hands. He was staring her inquisitively..watching her from tip to toe...he pinned her to a pillar..came near.. Much near to her comfort...almost feeling her breath. He just bent and blew away a stray hair falling on her eyes...

kalpi was too shocked to utter anything. She never dared to think of Raghav in this light. He was too...hott for her right now. She was dumb at his this behViour. This side of Raghav was very new and different . The look in his eyes was enigmatic. It was consuming her fragile strength. She was feeling thrilling with his nearness. Her breath was stuck ...she had lost her voice. His breath on her was tingling and burning her skin. She wanted to runaway...or hide somewhere... And the way he had pinned her was making her senses wild. She could face ten arrogant raghavs but this romantic passionate Raghav was kindling in her feelings unknown to her. As she tried to speak he shut her up with his finger.

Raghav was intensely staring at her." Ur eyes r like a doe, so innocent so pure. They r beautiful. Your lips...they r like those rise petals which demand to be crushed..ur figure..it just caps a man to cherish it.. Ur smile just lights up even a dead heart..I never thought u would look so so stunning. Stop! Stop chewing that lips of urs...don't u know what's it doing to me...u r here to kill me right...then u have succeeded..u have killed me today...made me realize something. Shh..don't speak. Let me speak today and you hear. I know u r wearing this Saree and this color to impress me right. U know I love dark colors and Sarees. Gowns r not my taste. Right...I know what u feel for me..pulling up her chin..looking at kalpi...I know paakhi Kapoor what u feel for me. Today I too wanna tell what I feel for you .paakhi ..I love you...yes I love you".

Do u guys want me to continue...

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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 11 years ago

1st part
awesome. Just wonderful update.
2nd part

u must b joking right.
Pakhi r u serious.
That i would say 4 d shock.

Mind blowing update.

And plz do continue soon.

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FanOfRagna

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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting ! Continue dear ...

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beginner46

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Posted: 11 years ago

Love it dear plz continue 😊

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bubblydoll

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Posted: 11 years ago

great start... pls do continue soon..

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow great start...continue soon😃

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update👏

You literally gave me mini stroke at the ending😡 I trust you'll clear the suspense very soon.

waiting for the update...continue soon😊

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blackdollphin

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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting :)))))) please continue soon:))))

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
nice update👏
You literally gave me mini stroke at the ending😡 I trust you'll clear the suspense very soon.

waiting for the update...continue soon😊

be ready for more attacks ..its a dark OS

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