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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: SoniLuvsRT
OMG ...such a looong wait🤔...finally u updated..yipeee🤪Thanks di seriously me too waiting for the same that when I will have time to update 😆 Seriously all waited so much for my update hatts off 😆

Update was brillient & very lovely 👏👏👏 Great job sweetheart👍🏼 Thank you thank you so much di 🤗 Abb mein itna bhi kuch khaas nahi 😳 🤣

I loved this to the core❤️❤️❤️...& the P2K bonding was beautiful😳😳 Again thanks di 😃

Thank U so much jaan for PM 🤗 & Loads of Love❤️❤️❤️ otherwise i would never come to know abt update😆😆 Lolz others are telling the same di 😆 Loads of love from my side tooo myy sooonniii ddiii ❤️ 😳

Pljjj update soon..😭...really very very very egarly wating for a next updateWill try but next week se pehle toh impossible hai di 🥱 Thank you so much di for liking and commenting 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: blueAngel09

Oh shalaka quite unique name no😉😆But nice name dear😳And I am shreya

Thanks shreya yaa i knw Its quite unique..😉Btw i luved ur ff..its quite interesting

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Suhana622
Di, why r u torturing us like the CVs of the drama. Why was there no raghav? But still di, thanx for the long update.🤗 now I really can't wait for the next update

Ab mere itne bure din aa gaye hai log mijhe EMA cv's se compare kar rahe hai 🤢 😭 😆

Choti just wait for the next update dear 😉 Usme toh bas raghav hi raghav hai 😛 Update next week se pehle nahi mil sakta 🥱 Thanks choti for liking and commenting dear 🤗

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tia_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Lovely update and after long time enjoyed reading your ff back 👏

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Soni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: blueAngel09

ohh my darling koi gal nhi..whenever u'll get time then update...but jus PM me..okk sweetie😳😳...& yess u r talented & thats y u deserve this appreciation😃..Love u too my darling🤗...

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sanosantoso

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

lovely ff i must say well written

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876723

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

i cant wait for the next update

i really wanna know what happenend between rafhav and kalpi

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Cheenu1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

nice update thanks shreya for such a lovely ff i love reading ff and i read all forum ff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: blueAngel09

 Part-6


 Next morning... the sun was shining brightly in the sky... all awaken and got busy in their regular chores... but someone still sleeping and dreaming... that person was none other than kamla's princess... kalpi...




 Kamla was trying her best to wake up kalpi...but kalpi was in deep sleep.Kalpi doesn't like if someone tries to wake her up."kalpi...please wake up...you are getting late for your college... please wake up dear..." requested kamla.After hearing this kalpi opens her eyes a little bit..and replies in a sleepy voice..." Mom please only 5 minutes.. I am sure I will be on time...please mom..." telling that kalpi grabbed a pillow next to her and holds it tightly in her hands still with closed eyes.


 
 "This girl never pays attention to my words...oh god...please help me " Kamla prays.


"Someone needs any help?" A voice came behind from kamla.


 Kamla turned to see the source of the voice and gets shocked to see Pakhi standing here.


 Pakhi just ran towards kamla and hugged her."I missed you so much Aunt..." said Pakhi while hugging kamla. She also hugged her back...


 While breaking the hug kamla asks"How are you dear? Why didn't you came here from long time ? And how is your family ones ? "


 "Chill Aunt, all are well and I am also fine and we were not in the town for few months that's the reason I am not able to come here."Answers Pakhi with big smile on her face.


 "Okeyz aunt,let's get back to our main work" winked Pakhi.


 Pakhi just took her cell and started playing some anonymously flop hip-hop tracks that irritant kalpi much more than anything else.
 She started grooving, jumping on the bed without missing any beat when kamla left the room for making breakfast.


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 "For God sake please stop it Pakhi !!" Shouted kalpi on Pakhi throwing a pillow on her but luckily Pakhi catches it without hurting herself but kalpi irritatingly shouts "Pakhi" on pakhi still annoyance in her voice.


 Pakhi stopped there for a moment don't know how to react.She stood there like a dumb girl who is just now scolded by her teacher for a big mistake.


 Seeing all this act of Pakhi,kalpi raised her eyebrows still glaring at Pakhi. Pakhi didn't dare to look once at angry kalpi and just closed her eyes.In a moment kalpi broke by laughing out loud and started teasing Pakhi.Pakhi realized it kalpi was just joking and she took on a serious note...


 "Hahahah you dumbo, how can I be angry with my sis huh ! You are seriously the biggest fool in the world Pakhi hehehe...!! "Kalpi laughed out loud.


 "Okey okey kalpi,stop bullying me and please get ready we are almost late for the college..." informed Pakhi.


 Kalpi just jumped out of her bed hugged Pakhi..."coming in 5 minutes,bye ",took a dress from cupboard and locked herself in her washroom.


 "Oh !! This girl, please God send someone who will take care of kalpi and her mood swings...!" prayed Pakhi.




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 After finishing their classes and college both kalpi and Pakhi were walking in the outside lane of their college...



 "Thank you pakhi ,you just wake me up in right time otherwise today I had to miss my day in college... and please Pakhi stop trying all this nonsensical acts to wake me up please, it was seriously headache still my head is paining...!! "said kalpi.
 "Okey my sis,forgive me please " Pakhi holds her ears and says sorry with a smile. Both just smiles...and continued their walking.
 


 Soon both reached in parking of the college.. and Pakhi's eyes started searching for someone...! It didn't get unnoticed by kalpi and she enquires "Pakhi what happened ? Are you searching for someone ?"


 "Yeah,my silly bro don't know why he always late when it comes to pick me from my college !"answers Pakhi still searching for Prem by looking here and there...




 "If Prem didn't make it I will make it up for you dear,don't worry...I will drop you home...I already had my two wheeler..." assured kalpi.


 "Yeah,thanks..." Pakhi didn't paid much attention to kalpi's words.


 "You know Pakhi " asked kalpi coming in front of her..


 "Hmm..." looked Pakhi at kalpi...


"I think you should had a vehicle for yourself,it will made easy for your travelling fantasy...and I know you can spend your whole life by travelling here and there... hehehe" winked kalpi adding a little laugh in it...


 "Haha...don't laugh kalpi... its not that funny yaa...okey I got it today only I will ask my mom and dad to buy a car for me, it will so awesome naa...thanks kalpi... you are the best my sis..." and she hugged kalpi being very much excited...!!


 "Yeah it will be great..." while breaking the hug and started concentrating on anything else...



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 After a while, suddenly both the girls heard some kind of car's horn sound...someone was making it very loudly and disturbing others...and it was coming behind from outside college's main gate where many old,big,bushy, trees were planted...


 "It must be him...today I am going to kill my bro...now he's dead.."angered Pakhi and started taking big steps heading towards the noise and kalpi behind her trying to match her steps...


 Pakhi started showing off her anger on the person who was making the loud noise and the person was none other,her brother Prem...


 "You idiot...you jerk...you fool...how can you do this to me huh ? Why you are so late...? You know me and kalpi was waiting for you for so long...!! "


 Prem was about to scold her because she was crossing her limits but when Prem heard kalpi's name from Pakhi and saw kalpi coming towards them...he thought not react...




 "Calm down...calm down...my lil sis..I know you were waiting for me...but what to do?...dad gave me a very important document that he wanted me to handover this document in right hand...so that's why I am late...sorry sis...( and at that time kalpi was also standing there holding her books near Pakhi) and looking at kalpi "really sorry kalpi..." pleaded Prem.


 "No..no... Prem its totally fine...don't be sorry...let me take your leave please..." said kalpi.


 "Why in hurry kalpi... come let's have fun in my house I want you to meet my grandma...you know...she's world's sweetest person !!" Said Pakhi.




 "No..dear..actually my mom's birthday is in next week so I have to do a lot of preparations for it..." says kalpi.


 "Okey dear...but please I will also come in Aunt's birthday huh !" Giggles Pakhi.


 "Yeah sure dear...bye Prem... bye Pakhi..." and kalpi bids adieu to Prem and Pakhi.. and leaves.


 Prem was thinking to stop her...but why he will do so...??


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 I know the update was literally boring🥱But I am sure upcoming updates will be something...😉😉


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