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Posted: 11 years ago
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part-3

It was now more than a week after virat and manvi's first meeting and manvi was already madly and badly in love with virat but virat was always ignorant to her. He would talk to her when it was too important else he would remain in a total silent mode. Virat's behaviour annoyed her it was true but what irritated her the most was maya. Maya was the only friend of virat with whom he would speak a bit and that was what enough to irk manvi. Maya was a typical Indian girl nothing like manvi or jeevika, she was a salwar suit girl, always dressed up in Indian dresses, her arms adorned with glass bangles.. Manvi could have accepted her in the way she was but her chipku characteristic made manvi hate her. She would always remain stick to virat and virat would never mind that whereas he would always maintain a distance with manvi.. Manvi desperately wanted answers for this behaviour of virat but she could not as virat would simply ignore her.
Days passed by and Virat remained the same with Manvi.. It had been now a month and now they are offered their projects. It was an international construction company who were up for their new project - it was to build a society for 100 families, they are to construct small bunglows within the budget of middle class families, it was a great challenge and so they engaged these future architects and designers for these task. Each pair are assigned for each bunglow, so in that case Virat would build a bunglow and Manvi would design it. For Virat these project meant a lot as the best 10 would get job in this company itself but for Manvi it was a time to have Virat close to her and away from Maya.


[At the site]

Virat was busy examing the site for his work but Manvi...



She was busy planning how to get close to Virat, while going through her phone when something struck her sight, it was the date.. Yes the date, it was the 14th of feb.
M- kuch na kuch to karna padega ek lovely sham plan karne k liye par karu kya?? Viren ko call kerti hu.. She dials viren's number.
Vi- hello sis..
M- wah wah aj achanak ye bhaiyagiri kyun?
Vi- wo kya hai na jeevika ka farman hai sari ladkiyan aj se meri behne hai.. U know na kitni jealous hai wo.. Par tumhe kyu shock lag raha hai tumhi ne to shuruwat ki thi mujhe apna bhaiya banake..
M- wo ho chillax da, just kidding par now be serious hun.. Kyunki mujhe tumhari help chahiye right now
. Vi- meri help wo v tumhe?? Mere kan to nai baaj rahe na?
M- nope da..
Vi- to fir batao
. Manvi tells him that she wants to celebrate v-day with Virat.
Vi-kam to muskil hai par na mumkin nai. Mai kuch plan karke tumhe call back karta hu.. Bubye..
M- yup bye.
She looks at Virat and smile shyly..
M- ab jab tak da kuch plan nai banate hai isse hi pakati hun.
M-hi.. Tum pak nai jate saradin kam karke?
V- yaha kam karne aya hu to wohi karunga..
M- ha wo to hai, par thoda sa masti to kar hi sakte ho.
V- kaam k time aisi behuda baatein tum jaisa hi koi kar sakta hai..
M- are tum to naraz ho gaya.. Sorry haan, kaam karo tum main kuch aur karti hun.
V- ek minute. M- tumne mujhe bulaya.. Haye..(dreamily)
v- nautanki.. Ek baat kehna tha tumhari hi bhalai ki hai..
M- haye really..
V- dekho tumhe to ab koi kam nai hai to tum na aao to behtar hai, jab bunglow ban jayega tab aaram se apna kam karna.
M- are are are tum to bade chep ho, yaha mai tumhe company dene ko aayi hu aur tum..
V- mujhe tumhari company ki jarurat nai hai, yea tum samaj jao to acha hai..
M- huh?? How mean..
V- excuse me mujhe bohot kam hai so pls.
Virat leaves and Manvi stands fuming in anger.
M- haye bhagwan, ye tune kya kia manvi kis pathar dil se pyaar kar baithi.. Aur yea Viren uska phone kyu nai aaya ab tak.

PRECAP- v-day in a dhaba.
. { ok so it was short I know but I want see the comments first and know wheather you all are still interested in it}
Edited by Bhabani90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updated.. please read like and comment..
Edited by Bhabani90 - 11 years ago
NIVILOV thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsam dear 😃 hy my fav writer mahima n u both r agian back n lovly pdate ❤️ bt want more dear i lov manviz dailog " kis pathar dil se pyar karbethi he he " update soon dear n next time long wala
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vow dear it,s awsum 😃 after longtime u update story bt dear 😉 it,s so short want more n want fast update lov ❤️ manvi n viren bro sis jodi n this virat he iz realy kadu n pathar dil like manvi said hay poor manvi wy did,nt virat understing manvi feeling 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vow dear it,s awsum 😃 after longtime u update story bt dear 😉 it,s so short want more n want fast update lov ❤️ manvi n viren bro sis jodi n this virat he iz realy kadu n pathar dil like manvi said hay poor manvi wy did,nt virat understing manvi feeling 😔Vow dear it,s awsum 😃 after longtime u update story bt dear 😉 it,s so short want more n want fast update lov ❤️ manvi n viren bro sis jodi n this virat he iz realy kadu n pathar dil like manvi said hay poor manvi wy did,nt virat understing manvi feeling 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
maine toh aise ho dekha k pta ni ye part three naya h ya pehle wala...
dekha toh naya tha... chalo thank god warna toh miss hi ho jata... 😉
yes it was short but nice... manvi planning with viren... great... virman convo was awesome... ek dum mast... par mera dil khush ho gya after reading manvir convo n jeevika jealous n viren calling every girl sister... 🤣
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hooo this time m too late...wese ek baat kahu...bhut chota tha...or ye serious virat to sach may khdus hogya...ladki ko to aane say he mana ker raha h...or bicharey viren ki chinta hori h muje to apna v day chorke inki planning krega. .hahaha..gud 1... or ye pehli baar dekha h v day ki planning ek ladki ladkey ke liye ker ri h...good h exclusiv h ye to...gud job babes darling...bus next time long hona chahiye. .or next tym wale me muje sang hoon tere chahiye..my most fav. or wo b biggest long wali...and thnxx naanu for appriciat us...love u both...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I forgot everythink abt the story u idiot...n thats not my fault u updt after almost 4-5 mnths...thats not right

any ways never mind...updt was superb n quite hatke...bcs here Ladki is behind the Ladka...cool

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. TODAY I STUDIED UR STORY AND IT SEEMS INTERESTING SO GUD WISHES 2 U 4 CONTINUING UR STORY, WANTS NEXT UPDATE SOON.😊

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