Aahatein Teri... Part 3 up..

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avika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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No teaser i want update n u know wat i want pls consider it

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

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*IMPORTANT*
[So I had put u all in a lot of confusion so let me clear that first --- the prologue is about the present life of Manvi where virat is missing and even half of the first part is about the present and then from the mid 1st part its all about the past - about how they met, fell in love and got married. The entire thing now will be of the flashback and it will be in Manvi's pov since its she who is remembering it all. Hope I have cleared it all lets head to the update.]
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*Part ~ 2
"teri ore"
Whenever i look at jeevi am amazed to find how my sweet, shy friend had turned into a viren freak from the past two years. The three one syllabled word "i love you" had a magical spell on her. Haye when will I go through these feelings?? 'Keep hope manvi, umeed par to duniya kayam hai" I keep chanting this in my mind to supress the restlessness that preoccupies my little brain in search of my prince in armour.. The bell rang and it striked me that I was standing in the same place for the last 20 minutes busy in my not so stupid thoughts.. I ran through the corridors leaving behind my princely dream and to attend the joint class with the M. Arch students. God knows who am I going to have as my partner??? As I entered the project room I found myself as the center of attraction, everyone eyeing me either out of curiosity or jealousy.. A plastered a big sweet smile as I moved further.
Soon i found my love struck friend Jeevika along with her Viren. Viren is actually I nice guy atleast the best among those richie rich of the college and the best thing I like of him is the way he treats me...just like a small sister. I walked to them and soon a peon entered the room with a list and fixed it in the notice board beside the white board. It was the list for the pairs who are going to work together for the project. As I moved closer everyone made a place for me... Thats the magic of Manvi the great you see. My eyes soon started to scan the list and there I found myself with some Virat Vadera. To be honest the name sounded way to better to me.. Kuch kuch hota gaya u know.. I walked towards jeevi and viren. J- hey kon mila?
M- huh? What?
J-as a partner. M- koi Virat Vadera hai. Vi- virat? U r so gone manvi no no actually he is gone.
M- kyu?
Vi- o to jab milogi u will get to know.
M- huh?
Vi- lo agaya.. I turned to see my partner and what I saw was a prince in ordinary clothes..
He was wearing a simple ordinary red blue checked full shirt with sleeves folded till a little below the elbow paired with a faded jeans. His left hand had a silver chained watch and the right hand had some red yellow religious threads. A black adidas was hanging from his left shoulder and he was continuously rubbing his palms with each other. His hairs were light brown dancing in his forehead and his face...heavenly...small determined eyes with the depth that can drown anyone, the lips...just perfect for a kiss. My small filmy mind start travelling every la la land with him- gane ka khet and sometime sarso ka... Mangrove jungles and sometime juhu beach... He turned my Shahrukh Khan and I his kajol.. Tujhe dekha to ye jana sanam pyar hota hai dewana sanam... He my Salman and I his Madhuri... Pehla pehla pyar hai pehli pehli bar hai... He Amir and me Asin... Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas tu agayi mujhko ras ras ab to.. And finally Akhsahy and Katrina... Dil kho gaya ho gaya kisika ab rasta mil gaya khushi
Ka, ab rasta mil gaya khushi ka aa rista naya rabba dil chu raha hai khiche mujhe koi dour teri ore.. A soft push from jeevi and I was back on earth and what I saw that I was blocking Virat's way standing at the door staring at him like a ullu... And he like a gentleman was pleading me to stand aside. I gave him the way and he entered. I swear it never happened to me I was always a practical and tough girl but a sight of him made me crazy.. Yaamla pagla dewana.. But what can I do he has a dashing personality.. Perfect. J- manvi? Manvi? Where r u lost again? M- jeeviii... I Think I LOVE him.. J- kya? Love? Whom? M-virat vadera.. Who else! J- oye pagal u just saw him.. Don't get over excited .. Tune suna na What Viren said.. M- bhar me ja tu aur tera viren I toh already love him.. J- kya kaha tune? Bhar me jao main? (sobbing) M- O Shit.. Sorry i didn't mean it. Yaar tujhe v samajhna chahiye tha.. M in love aur tu bhasan de rai hai.. J- par manvi he is not ur type. M- so what I will become his type..
Viren was right am so gone.. One look at Virat and am lost with him in those romantic filmy numbers. I saw him taking a seat on the desh which I took.. Oh God! So he is gonna be my bench partner too.. I did a little bhangra and headed towards him to start my love story..

bye for today.. Saionara.

Edited by Bhabani90 - 12 years ago

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maahiya90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

me first...excitd...update was terfic...manvi such a kiddoo.. she actuly behav like teenagr..hahaha..bhangra...superb...all songs r grt...i loved it...curious to read furthr...waiting waiting..lov u darling...umhaaa..tc...update asap...

Edited by Mahi90 - 12 years ago

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

nice update she dreaming her prince charming
and she got his M arch student partner or his prince update soon

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Awesome...lolzzz...ye to total filmy jo gaya...love at a 1st side...cool...but its 2 short bhabani...cont soon

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Awesome..!! ! like the Bindaas Maanvi..but seeing the previous updates theres a huge difference in both...n losing some 1 does make an impact n u have explained that really well...excited for the upcoming updates n Thanks for the PM..!!

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Viru_Neutrogina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

😊 👏 😃

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Viru_Neutrogina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

It was such a wonderful update...loved both the parts...feeling sad for manvi...but past tho i am excited to know...pls update soon and do pm me...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Awsm updt... loved it...Cont soon and thnks fr th pm...

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

awesome update this is the manvi we love too filmy dramebaaz nautanki 😛
her prince charming dream her aattitude her over filmy dialogues thoughts and matching songs with bollywood great jodis imagination just so wooow ...
update next part sooon
and thanx alott for the pm 😊

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