Aahatein Teri... Part 3 up..

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sha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Very nice 😊
Plz continue soon

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saemeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

nice concept. .pm me wen u update

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

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Part 1

"I, Mrs. Manvi Virat Vadera, assure you that we are the best option for this project of yours, Mr. Rehman" spoke manvi with a fake smile which now always remained in her lips from the last one year. She ended the meeting bagging the project for her company. After another hectic day filled with meetings and conference manvi returned home and was greeted by Rajsri. R- beta aj din kaisa bita? M- thik tha maa. R- chalo fresh ho jao main khana lagati hun. M- ji maa. It was already late night and everybody retired to bed but Rajsri wud always wait for manvi as she knew how much loneliness haunts her. After a silence filled dinner manvi stood to leave for her room when, R- manvi beta porso kya tum thora waqt nikal paogi? M- kyun maa? Kuch kam hai? R- beta Vishal aa raha hai to use airport receive karne jana tha, mayank ka exam hai nai to o chala jata. Aise tanni jayegi tumhare sath. M- maa aap fikar mat karo maim chali jaungi. Good night. R- good night beta.

Manvi entered her room and shut the door. With the door she removed the mask that she wears of being strong, happy and brave. Only the walls and the decors know what is her real self, how her every nights ends with continuos shedding of tears. Only it knows the real broken, gloomy and weak manvi that successfully remain hidden under the veil of a fake smile. She looked at him still smilling at her.. She went closer and picked the frame that captured one of his rarest smile.

Jab kahi v aahat hui iu laga k tu aagaya, khusboo k jhoke ki tarha meri saansei mehka gaya..

."yaad hai tumhe tum humesa mujhe kehte the ki vishal she tum mujhe milwaoge face to face par ye wada v tod doge kya? Pls ajao na bapas.. Pls.. "

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M- ye tum kisse baat kar rahe the.. V- vishal. M- vishal kon? V-mera bhai hai. M- yea bhai kab paida hogaya tumhara? V- (gives angry glare) M- i mean tum to teen the na? Pehle kavi bataya nai tumne. V- wo isliye kyunki ye mera sabse chahita hai, tumhe face to face milwaonga usse. M- oh really. V- sirf bhai nai best friend hai wo mera. M- tab to milna hi padega.. Par wo rehta kaha hai? V- U.S mei mba ki padhai kar raha hai apni, bohot studious hai wo. M- humari shadi mei to ayega na? V- nai aa payega par saal var tak aa jayega.. M- toh bohot intezar karna padega. V- obviously akhir wo hai hi is kabil..
Wo bhi ek daur tha hum sada paas the, ab to hai dooriya darmiyaa..

2 years ago..

Red.. Nai blue.. Aha nai yellow.. Nope pink na na white.. cancel.. Ena meena mina mo.. Done sexy black for sexy manvi. She selected a black midi revealing her petite figure more then hiding, her skinny legs visible from above the knees and her arms all exposed as the dress was holded by two straps in her shoulder. A minimal make up but dark kohl, hairs left open and curled, wearing her pencil hills and her glasses she left her home in her new duster for college. Manvi Chaudhury, every boy's fascination , every girl's jealousy and fashioned diva of the college entered the campus stealing every male heart like always since the last one and a half year. She is in 2nd year of her interior designer course that she joined after her school. She is the dream of every boy of the college as she is still single and not a bit interested to play along boys and waiting for her perfect man.
M- hey hi jeevi, my bestu.. Missed u a lot babes..
J- hi manny missed u too. So how was the France trip? Mila koi Frenchu?
M- nai re.. Pata nai where is my Dream boy hiding? Leave it yea bata wats up with classes?
J- great.. And the best part is we gotta do a project in the next 2 months and m damn excited.
M- haww. Kaisa project?
J- are kal se hi start hoga and its a combine project jo hume M. Arch k students k sath milkar complete karna hai.
M- what? Par they are seniors what r we suppose to do.?
J- wo ghar banayenge aur hum sajayenge. (blushes).
M- oh got it. Par tu blush kyu kar rai hai?
J- wo hume woha couple partners me kam karna hai so..
M- huh.. Now don't tell me tu viren ki partner ban rai hai.. Partners to incharge hi banayenge na?
J- ha. Par viren ne baat kar li hai unse.(blushes)
M- lo tab to ban gaya tum dono ka ghar .
J- are ghar nai model banana hai uska.
M- watever lets go..

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Edited by Bhabani90 - 12 years ago

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maahiya90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

bingo. .me first me first...and chotu tha..bt bhut suspenc wala tha..kaha gya iska pati???har din or raat ki trah??matlb bhut tim se gaayb hai...kaha gya??wating for thier lov story befor mrg...m sure he was her senior...update soon yar ...but longone...umhaaa tc...lov u rey.. <3<3 <3

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Superb...
Liked it...
Awesome one...
Wann know more...
Updated soon...

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Superb updt...now who is this new guy? N where is virat? Cont soon

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

aye hayee...virat as an architect???😃😃😃😃😃😃
i'm studying architecture.so this ff will hold a special place.😛😛😛😛
taratari update koro!!!!isshh...amader department-e senior ektao goodlooking chhele nei.r tumi virat-k architect banale???❤️❤️❤️i think i'm gonna pass out.🤢update fast!!!!plz!!!can't wait to know how he designs.

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

nice update but where he
what happens in past with them
update soon

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

bhabani di the update was fabulousss... 😃

flashback was awesome ❤️ loved it ❤️ i think virat is manvi's senior and also her husband but where he is ? vishal brother of her husband who is still a unknown to us 😛 so update asap 😃 want to know the secret 😃