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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue - below

character list- page 5

part 1- page 7

part 2- page 10

Part 3 - page 12
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye sended link n btw u said u will update keshariya balaam wat happpened
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.Prologue:Prologue:

Like any other day she woke up with the ring of the alarm clock. She descended the bed and made her way to take shower. Drying her hairs she came into the room and stood before the mirror. Adoring her hands with sparkling red bangles and dressing in a pink anarkali she brushed her hair. And then came the most important part of her dressing, she took a pinch of vermilion and filled her parting of the hair and then wore the mangalsutra that became a part of her existence. She looked at her image and smiled. Then she turned her head to find him smiling at her through the photo frame.
She came out of her room and entered the temple and did puja and moved towards the kitchen, preparing breakfast and tea she set the breakfast table.
She walked towards Tani's room..
" tani chalo jaldi utho school nai jana kya? Cumon get up."
"bhabi 5 min aur pls"
"no no get up fast, chalo utho"
Leaving behind further arguments tani woke up and hugged her. "good morning bhabi" "good morning, chalo get ready"
she placed a kiss on tani's forehead and left for Mayank's room. "good morning devarji, aj college jane ka irada hai ki nai ya saradin workout hi karna hai" "good morning bhabi, bas ata hun, u know na m the most hottest guy in the college apne aap ko maintain to karna padega"
"oho main to vul hi gai thi, to aj aapki madam ko impress karne ka acha plan banaya gaya hai"
"kya bhabi aap v"
"oye sharmana band kar aur jaldi kar" "ji"

She walked to the breakfast table and handling the newspaper to papa she bend to touch the feets of both papa and ma to seek their blessing. She then prepared their plates and packed tani's and her lunch box.
"baijainti.. Aj lunch mei paneer bana lena aur baki ma se punch lena aur ha papa aur ma ko waqt par daabaiya dena. Samjii"
"ji memsahab"
"tani jaldi karo, late ho jayenge"
"ji bhabi"
"ma papa hum nikalte hai "
"beta dhyan se aur samhal k gari chalana" and ma's voice choked. It always happens to her when anyone is going outside.

She bent down and hugged maa.
"maa i will take care" maa kissed her forehead and wiped both of their tears. "bhabi chale"
"hmm. Bye papa bye maa"
"bye bacho" and they left. She dropped tani in school and headed towards office.

This was her life from the last 1 year.


how was it ? Pls cmnt and hit like if u like it.
Edited by Bhabani90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue is very interesting... plzz cont soon nd do pm me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the prologue
waiting to read more
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo congo...congo...for new story...nici prolog madaam...all the best... tc.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls continue soon dear. its getting interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting...continue sooon
thks 4 de pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
interesting concept
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow new ff!!!!! superb prologue... lvd it!!!! 1questn..is virat dead hr???

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