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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

wowww that was an intelligent and damn interesting yet emotional update ...just written superbly with the brainy stuff which we can never even think of anu you are just amazing with ur wrk yu just leave us speechless 👏 👏
virat in tht snappy mood coz he was actually jealous tht he was nt their with his kids at those first or special moments in their life and be with manvi wen she wanted to kill herself virat was scared was angry and frustrated more on himself than manvi his feelings and thougths very well written ...
then the kids part specially ria giving those hugs to virat and immediate effect it shows he feels better then the cookie moment of the daddy and the daughter 😆 😆
poor nikki gt punishment for the ria's plan 😆
and how peter planned virat gt it with the help of the kids man this is called real thinking anu yu are jyst amazing 👏 👏
so already someone is in the house omg i just hope all are safe and virat catches the guy before he actually harms his family ...
update next part sooon and thanx alott for the pm 😊

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Hola

Well I know I rarely get time to drop by and appreciate your work or anyones as a matter of fact but wad to do just kinda busy but knowing that my favourite ff is coming to an end made me feel like writing a small comment of appreciation...!

Well I am a huge fan of this FF I really luv you writing style each update has some much expression to it that I feel like I am into the whole story I could feel what each of them was going through...!!
I really just dropped into the forum one fine day and just wanted to read the concept of this as ADDICTED by Enrique one of my fav songs so its kinda made me step into this ff!!

well I couldn't stop myself I guess dat time about 15 updates I guess I don remember wer done and I had finished each chap and was eagerly waiting for the next update and from then on I used to drop by and regularly read this story..!! wel I know u do really know me buut u have done a fabulous job and I really enjoy reading it...!!

Well I can go on and on about how talented you are but you will be bored as well...so why not come to this recent update!!

well it had so much of surprise a twist that changed the whole story uptill now...!! AVNASH was the twist OMG!! it was so smartly planned every detail was written to perfection I luv such mysteries and my gwad Virat is one intelligent person figured it all out but too late looks like some has already entered the house...!!! so Randy has a temporary replacement who gives the passcode away!! All planed in such a way even the minor details were taken care of..!!

the security cameras...this was one hell of a suspense it is a fabulous read and I really enjoyed each and everypart of it be it Virats anguish and jealous or Maanvis Caring and afraid to lose virat nature..i luv Ria the most donno why...daddys girl she is and I must say she is just as smart!! and nikki an guy obsessed with cricket cutely blames his "spider-man" for breaking the vase!!

Well hands off yaar I really am impressed by all of the above and much more in this FF!!! 👏

Regards,

safrena

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js1234

@js1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Awesomeness had nothing on you!

Both were beautifully thought out planned meticulously and executed flawlessly.

Thank you for giving such amazing read

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Maria

@neha fan1

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Brilliant absolutely brilliant!! Wow u are an amazing writer I dnt knw how many times I must state this. U nailed it! Wot a gripping update I was literally at the edge of my bed! I luv da kids dey are so cute! Ria is so adorable! Lol if only she was real I would have kidnapped her! Aw Virman moment ... Damn dat lil girl is everywhere! What a lovely family da vahderas are! Oh god someone has already entered! Sugar! Virat get ur family out of der! Damn how do u come up wiv such stuff? If only ur stories where made on to da screen u would have been blasting through the trp chart! Seriously I dnt knw wot I'm gonna do wen this ff ends its my favourite! Do a season 2 of addicted like hw Virman met der college days and Charles lol we get jealous hotty virat lol I dnt wanna say goodbye just yet to it! I can go on praising u!.. Cnt wait for next update!

Edited by neha fan1 - 12 years ago

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

awesome update! How Virat said all his hurt feelings was so heartbreaking. Loved how Ria got Nikki punished... and tricky lady will become

Now they are going to be attacked.

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Coolio1313

@Coolio1313

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

OMG OMG !!!xxx

My heart is racing rite now !

So much suspense is killing me

Ahhh !!!.

👏

Awww xx

Ria is sooo cute

Hehhehee

⭐️

AMAZING UPDATE

U better continue this fast !!!xx

Thanks for the pm xx

P.s .. thanks for sending the link to ur other story haveng read it all

so ill comment once have

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

wow , you are just too good,
for a moment i felt sad for manvi but thank god virat behaved normal again, but what will happen now??
this is so exciting

thanks for pm

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Avika

@Avika318

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

wow!!! u r an amazing writer!!
Just luved both the updates!!!❤️
I hope this Ashish does not create too many problems!! But now he has entered through the garage entrance!!😕
Really exciting!! Please update soon!!
Thanks for the PM!!
x Avika x