who are u???
or what are u???
are u really human???
how oh how are u doing dis diii??? from where are u getting such ideas??? y are u dis brilliant??? u are awesome!!! u drive me mad!!
my favourite was 'my umbrella', den it became addicted den suddenly sacha pyaar den again addicted den TLF,, den it was BILY now again its addicted!!! can u get me??? i mean u are unbelievable!!! wen u update each of ur story, from moment to moment, my favourite story is changing,, i cant choose vch is best from ur stories... u are absolutely brilliant!! damn clever!!! pitch perfect!!! u are a rocking person!!!
u have some disease,, yeah i said dat u have some disease,, u have multiple personality disorder.. d advance condition of that disease i guess, u have the capabilty to change urself to watever u think.. oh yeah um uttering something stupid but continue reading, u have to listen to me... dis disease is the one causing u to become virat, manvi, ria, nikki & even dat Ashish, blanco & all the characters in all ur stories... each character is so perfect & different in ur story... do you know wat are u doing??? i mean if i were u, i'll stop writing & start drooling over my own work.. um scratching my head here, banging myself here, i am cursing myself for not being born anywhere near u,,, i badly badly badlyyy want to hug u tight, give u infinite kisses & express how i feel now through emotions... words never worth it.. the whole update, i was behaving like um having some mental problems,, goodness um in my room, if somebody had seen me wen i was reading ur update, probably i wud have been in some mental hospital by now... why u ask me?? wel i was 'angry' 'almost crying' 'shattered' wen virat was shouting at manvi... 'smiling' 'grinning' 'laughing' 'wondering' 'was amazed' in whole ria-virat-nikki-manvi thing... 'smiling again' 'loving' 'giving how sweet expression' 'having tear of joy' 'landed up roflin' wen virat manvi patched up & ria caught dem... 'enjoying' 'was happy' at virat & vanshika's conversation... finally was giving 'OMG' 'thrilling' 'how actionful' 'mahnnn he's clever' 'wat is gonna happen now' looks at blanco-virat's discovery... aint i deserve a place in some mental asylum for giving thousands of expressions like a 90s heroine at a laptop from some other person's point of view????? if any such thing happend in future,, U ARE RESPONSIBLE!!!!!
how can i not comment for such a brillliant update diii??????
lady,, u are full of reality!!! i cud see the rage in virat's eyes, he's no saint to forgive manvi burrying all his erupting emotions inside him... i was able to see him shouting at her, i was able to see the yearning in his eyes to be with his children in all deir first steps,, i figured out his loss, i figured out how much he's angry at all the happenings around him vch happened to be the reason for his absence near his children rather some jerk's presence... i was like, 'OMG how much he wud have gone thru while seeing dose pics'.. without stocking up all the emotions in him & bursting out in an inappropriate situation, he did the right thing by shouting at manvi den & dere,, hence end of topic it became on the same day... brilliant di!! salute to u for giving the exact emotion & situation thru ur words!!! ❤️
next comes the most adorable scene!!!! Ria-Virat scene.. damn it had got such an importance in the whole thing ryt??? if Ria hadnt come dere, situation wud have been totally different.. Ria's actually the queen of the update... and u are 'i dont know' wat to call u.. how cleverly u linked up the two issues!!! why am i jumping to the climax,,, urghhh i'll come step by step...
''I feel two small hands feel my face. I open my eyes with a big smile''
wen ria approached virat,, my atmosphere turned heavenly!! i felt like im in some cloud, floating... den i found out how awesome virat wud have felt at the moment (true its a story, leave it,, its real for me).. wen her soft hands (yup dey are soft, i can feel it) touched virat, its bliss!! the tension out dere just flew... how can a darling daughter turn out a tension filled atmosphere to heaven, perfect entry of Ria to take out virat's mood..
''She gives me a small kiss on my chin coz my head in dropped back and she cant reach my face. Kids! I open my eyes unable to stop smiling''
wat i love in u is dis small small touch ups.. instead of 'she gives me a kiss' bluntly u added dat she kissed in his chin as she cant reach his face... do u know how beautiful it is?? it helps me to picturise the whole heavenly moments & trust me um having tears in thinking how briiliant u are.. u always do this.. u always amaze me giving such descriptions.. viart's realization of 'she cudnt reach my face' and unstoppable smiling,, mahnnn its heavenly!!! i can just read dese lines again & again!!
''I feel her put her tiny hands around me. "Oh my! Half my problems are solved. How about another one? Tighter?" I tell her and she hugs me again, this time her hands around my neck squeezing my breath''
"I have a kid problem."
''Momma won't yell at you?"
this whole phase was heaven for me... i dearly, heartily loved the whole conversation & um flat!!!
Ria is sooo smart!!! Nikki is really a victim!!! seroiusly, a girl is too naughty... u really did a great job by giving the kids' adorable moments ❤️
wen dere's true love, fights dont last long.. solid proof is dis couple.. virat let out all his anger becoz 'anger' was d one thing dat dominated at that instant... with time he realising his mistake & confessing to manvi was awesome!! d patch up, understanding & romance was brilliant!! and excellent again goes to Ria's entry "What are you guys doing?" yup Ria is everywhere!!! (the part i grinned most)
thanks to vanshika's phone call & inquiry about her grandkids.. d whole beautiful, soothing moment turned action filled!!!
u are just out of the world di for relating the two things,, for coming back to the game from whole Ria-Nikki thing... u did a GREAT job!! from where on earth are u grabbing such hints?? um speechless at ur brilliance..
the whole Ashish thing is drama,,, clever enemies!! clearly Cunns has diverted virat's attention to Manvi & her past and on the other hand is sneaking into virat's highly protected home... i dint expect him to frankly challenge virat wen virat called him... it showed he has a bigger plan and he's damn cunning!! ofcoz he is, from engine failure of choppers- taking pictures of Mer & virat- trying to kill manvi- trying to get to virat thru Mer by kidnapping her son-now, diverting his attention,,,, master plan!!! how did u do this dii??? its so out of some one's imagination.. how can u think so much dat too in such a clever manner??? how did u design, plot & outlined all dese??? um dumb really, i dont know how to appreciate u.. U are some one specially designed vt all beauty... thanks for coming in my life.. ❤️
demand- U ARE GIVING ME ADDICTED UPDATE NEXT!!!! DO NOT TOUCH ANY OTHER STORY UNTIL OR OTHERWISE PART 28 IS FINISHED IN ADDICTED!!!!
dats it!!!!!! get extra hugs, kisses,, alottt of love & love only
hats off for ur action filled brain!!!!
get going!!! ❤️
PS: i admired d place where virat thought ''I need to think like him. If I was Cunns, what would I do to reach Manvi before 10 AM tomorrow?'' action at its peak!!
banner rocks!! ❤️
