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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Oh shit I'm so excited I can't wait to read the next part. You've done wonders with Addicted. Kept up with the mystery so well.
Ria is such a naughty girl so innocent and yet manages to get her brother in trouble to keep out of trouble her self.
Thankfully Virat wasn't mad at Manvi for long can't bear to see him hurting they've been through sl much together.
So the next ones going to be the last damn I'm going to miss this so much. I know you have more stories but hope you comeback with a similar story like addicted with as much suspense, mystery and passion as this.

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Anu i juz don't noe wat to say ,where to start from ~~ loss of words now !!! coz the update leave me speechless :D it was mindblowing yaar !!!❤️ this was way too awesome Starting with peter n virat convo !! this shows peter is gonna do something very bad !! OMG virat burst out to manvi was marvelous !! he was jealous !! he have lost the precious moments which he can never get bak!!!😔 i could feel it !!! the pain the anger of him everything was presented Superbly 👍🏼 awwn Ria the way the father daughter convo was soo cute n adorable :D the way he give the hug awwn kid problem!!! 😆this girl can get more cute that this awwn i love her❤️😳 :D tat part juz touch my heart Anu !!! i can't get enough of this convo :D look i m grinning like a idiot now :D😃😃 haww shaitan !!! he trapped nikki 😉😆omg chalaaki toh dekh uski 😛poor nikki he was grounded !!😆 virat really need to hire a detective to look upon teenager ria😆 virman patch up= cute n lovely ❤️ n the last part !!! Breathtaking !!! i was like wat is gonna happen now??? the way u revealed virat found out !!gosh wat can i say now !! hats off !!~~Anu how did u do this !! i salute u ~~~ this is beyond Awesome !!!👏👏👏i can't juz tell in words how good it is !!! FABULOUS !!~~❤️❤️ i juz loved it a lot❤️
Anu u r gonna end this story?? is it ?? first i thought u was gonna end this track only !! but lately i come to noe u r end this story !! i noe u must have think something behind this ending !!! it's fine !! but i juz wanna say i m gonna miss this alot !! u noe when i heard tat u gonna end i even felt like crying !! i noe i m being emotional freak but sacchi i m gonna miss this alot especially Ria n nikki !! they are really close to my heart !!! i noe they are juz character par i m totally attached to them!!! gonna miss them like hell😭😭
looking forward for next update !!~~ will be eagerly waiting !!i m hell excited for next part~~thanx for the pm Anu 🤗

Edited by .Yamin. - 12 years ago

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simmy7

@simmy7

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

two back to bak updates loved it. before ending the story please want some happy family moments please. awsome

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

nice update ria and nikki part was nice
he trust her but he was upset that was not with his family
in past time update soon

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

superb... update
ria is very sweet and shaitan..!!😊

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Anu this is just BRILLIANT!! 👏👏 Hats off to you 👏👏.. Ria's childish naughty act helped Virat to solve the entire puzzle.. Amazing.. Best part in the update ⭐️.. Cunns is really evil but intelligent also.. He took the advantage of Virat's love and possessiveness towards Manvi.. He just wanted to divert Virat's attention towards Ashish so that he can easily execute his master plan.. But he definitely underestimated Virat.. Virat's mind works really fast.. Impressive 👍🏼.. Loved Virat's outburst.. Very well portrayed 👏👏.. He was jealous, hurt because he missed so many memorable moments of their kids life, he was scared because Manvi actually wanted to commit suicide at one point of time and he was not there with her to protect her, and of course after his conversation with Cunns he was frustrated and confused also.. So many things were going on in his mind.. Virat-Ria moments ❤️.. She is really smart 😛.. Poor Nikki 😆.. He got punished because of her way too smart sister.. Loved Virman romance ❤️.. True, Ria is everywhere 😆.. So someone is already present in their house now.. Really excited to read the next update.. Will be eagerly waiting for it.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Miishii

@Miishii

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Nooo I cannot see this ending. This is my fav along with TLF and now BILU is also growing on me! Fab updates as usual..so many twists and secrets! How I wish I could kill that Ashish! I'm really scared to know what is going to happen next. If the bad guys are in the house, that means not only Manvi but the kids and Virat are also in danger! Eeeks. 😲 Waiting for update but don't want it to end lol. Have you ever thought about writing more on Ria's heart condition? Or maybe they can finally go for a family vacation after beating the goons because they have kind of been trapped at home always due to security issues..lol I'm just trying to find ways to prolong the story. :P

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tanishalnk

@tanishalnk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Anu mind blowing update...seriously it's freaking awesome. ...fantastic
Virat outburst...manvis guilty...nd kids omg...
They gave hint to virat
Seriously bow down madam 👏 👏 👏

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

wow awesome update i hope nothing happens to maanvi & virat ,ria&nikki please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear . 👏 u r a fabulous writer dear.

Edited by kusharberry - 12 years ago