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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Amazing twist..excited!!
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finding new word for u to praise u... Jahapana tussiii great ho ...

I'm in love with addicted once again... Everything was beautifully written love the new twist hahah immlaughing like anything... Asish n his proofs ROFL hahahhahahaha goddds!
Drunk virat haiii make him more plzzz! Want manvibtonjoin office ASAP! Want more kids section ... N now speechless just wanna say update soon can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar...
i love it...
i think that guy is mad...
plzzz update soon waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
After reading Faria's post in FF I was scared that Manvi and evil no chance.. now got it.. dis Ashish is a pshyco lol.. Fab update Anu.. He considered Childrens date as his date with Manvi.. buhahaha.. dinmers nd sleepovers for children not for him.. Cant wait for next part and VirMan convo on dis matter.. I knw Virat trust her.. Continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks , wonderful update
can you PM me a copy as well since im not on FB
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Posted: 12 years ago
i'm so sorry for not commenting on any of ur works for an week or so.but u ought 2 know by now that i love them with all my heart.i love u anu!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love the new twist that you've put.

I'm sure someone is trying to create a misunderstanding between them.

Loved the drunk Virat and looking forward to seeing the angry Virat come out again with this situation.

You are absolutely too good the things you come up with are so amazing it just keeps me glued.



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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg Anu New twist !!! this is really Amazing :D Who is this Ashish??? how dare he say like this abt manvi ???🤔 he really deserve the punch for virat 😡 why is he suddenly appear ???😡 gosh kya bakwaas bole jaa rahaa tha😡
The update is Fabulous starting from virman n the kids :D virat n nikki i juz loved the bond 😛 mama kaa chamchaa😆 i really loved when virat tease him😃 Family moments awwn :D this is soo nice !!!! happy happy days !!! i juz loved it yaar❤️ this feels soo good !!! errm i m feeling soo happy n good now !!!😃😃 ur update really effect me :D the foursome convo was nice too !!! LOVELY⭐️⭐️flirty virat gosh i loved it😳😳 i have a 440 watt ki smile on my face while reading the virman moment awwn😳😳😳 i really loved the whole update to the core ❤️ this is seriously mind blowing :D i m really looking forward for next update !!! but now i guess it is but i love u turn :D n i m looking forward for it too :D joe bhi hoe all are my favorites !!!! will be eagerly waiting :D thanx for the pm Anu🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
anu the first half of the update was beautiful i mean you made us enjoy it in a different way this time how you wrote about the old times one can feel so much connected to the story i cant even explain...the fear those little kids have was so much necessary to be mentioned and you nailed it sometimes it happens that while writing you miss out certain important stuff but i have never seen you missing mentioning any single thing that is a lovely part of the story...
there was so much in this update i mean if i say in the point of highlights then there were some beautiful moments there were some emotional too and there you go suspense and a bit was thrill was present at the same time
Does trust have to be earned? Or is it simply a matter of faith? this is so much true and what i feel is it will maybe justified in the next update because now manvi needs to know that virat trusts her...



"Jeanie!? Better behave with Jeanie son. We don't want her parents banging our door. Do we?"
"No." Nikki replies innocently. this was sooo adorable...goshhh nikki is dammm cute
"I love you a lot kiddo and I am not going anywhere. Even if I do, I will always come back. You get that right?" Virat asks Nikki.
"You won't leave?" Nikki asks without looking at any of us. Virat looks at me so surprised.
"Never buddy. Not even if you mom kicks me out." Virat smiles kissing his forehead. "I love you." this is what i loved the most and also my fav part of this update..kids really need to be assured in these kinda things or they just get bottled up with everything inside them..the way virat decided to talk with him really proves him to be a responsible father and i loved that...
"I thought I would never see him like this again beta." She confesses.
"I know! You are glad to see him like this? Turning the whole house upside down and torturing us all with his stupid pranks all day?" I ask her as my eyes start filling up too. this was the most emotional part i must say...neither you forgot virman nor the kids and here you came up with a mother's feelings as well...that the reason i say that you dont miss a single thing that is an important part to be mentioned
I move closer and rest my head on his chest to hide the face splitting smile on my face. I am just happy - no correction - I am happiest girl on the whole planet. beautiful is the only word i have for how you wrote this part...

"You are right about that! We should try that again. Right honey?" Viren kisses Jeevika.
"You guys should really get a room." Virat teases.
"Right, look who is talking." retorts Viren angrily, but he gets up holding Jeevika's hand. "We have a morning flight tomorrow. We better go and get some sleep." He tells us.
"I sincerely doubt that bhai." Virat chuckles.
"Abey chal, Besharam." Viren throws a pillow at us and leaves. it gave so much of a ehmmbh wala feel in it 😊❤️



"I will work for short hours baby. But, I have to go. I have some major scores to settle. Watch out you f**king psychos!!" he shouts into the open air. Watching him like this is hilarious. He is usually so in control and civil. this was hilariousss😆


A pretty face, a golden heart and a brilliant mind." awww😳


I SAID MOVE AWAY!! I WILL NOT REPEAT AGAIN." Virat is boiling mad. yeahhh he is back in actionnn 🤪 how can he let him be any inch close to his love 😆





lots of love ❤️

Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago

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