anu the first half of the update was beautiful i mean you made us enjoy it in a different way this time how you wrote about the old times one can feel so much connected to the story i cant even explain...the fear those little kids have was so much necessary to be mentioned and you nailed it sometimes it happens that while writing you miss out certain important stuff but i have never seen you missing mentioning any single thing that is a lovely part of the story...there was so much in this update i mean if i say in the point of highlights then there were some beautiful moments there were some emotional too and there you go suspense and a bit was thrill was present at the same time
Does trust have to be earned? Or is it simply a matter of faith? this is so much true and what i feel is it will maybe justified in the next update because now manvi needs to know that virat trusts her...
"Jeanie!? Better behave with Jeanie son. We don't want her parents banging our door. Do we?"
"No." Nikki replies innocently. this was sooo adorable...goshhh nikki is dammm cute
"I love you a lot kiddo and I am not going anywhere. Even if I do, I will always come back. You get that right?" Virat asks Nikki.
"You won't leave?" Nikki asks without looking at any of us. Virat looks at me so surprised.
"Never buddy. Not even if you mom kicks me out." Virat smiles kissing his forehead. "I love you." this is what i loved the most and also my fav part of this update..kids really need to be assured in these kinda things or they just get bottled up with everything inside them..the way virat decided to talk with him really proves him to be a responsible father and i loved that...
"I thought I would never see him like this again beta." She confesses.
"I know! You are glad to see him like this? Turning the whole house upside down and torturing us all with his stupid pranks all day?" I ask her as my eyes start filling up too. this was the most emotional part i must say...neither you forgot virman nor the kids and here you came up with a mother's feelings as well...that the reason i say that you dont miss a single thing that is an important part to be mentioned
I move closer and rest my head on his chest to hide the face splitting smile on my face. I am just happy - no correction - I am happiest girl on the whole planet. beautiful is the only word i have for how you wrote this part...
"You are right about that! We should try that again. Right honey?" Viren kisses Jeevika.
"You guys should really get a room." Virat teases.
"Right, look who is talking." retorts Viren angrily, but he gets up holding Jeevika's hand. "We have a morning flight tomorrow. We better go and get some sleep." He tells us.
"I sincerely doubt that bhai." Virat chuckles.
"Abey chal, Besharam." Viren throws a pillow at us and leaves. it gave so much of a ehmmbh wala feel in it 😊❤️
"I will work for short hours baby. But, I have to go. I have some major scores to settle. Watch out you f**king psychos!!" he shouts into the open air. Watching him like this is hilarious. He is usually so in control and civil. this was hilariousss😆
A pretty face, a golden heart and a brilliant mind." awww😳
I SAID MOVE AWAY!! I WILL NOT REPEAT AGAIN." Virat is boiling mad. yeahhh he is back in actionnn 🤪 how can he let him be any inch close to his love 😆
lots of love ❤️
Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago