VirmanSS:Being Alive Part 9 updated (PAGE 18)

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Disha

@Imsecondlife

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
This is truely awesome...i m glad that i got 1 more best writer here...seriously u right really well...amazing...but wats the issue with manvi? Wat happned with her?...cont soon n thnx for the PM

kya bol rahi hai yaar??? 1more best writer?sharminda mat kar!!!!😳
u gyuz r cho chweet!!! have patience ,u'll get to know abt Manvi.surely will pm u

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Disha

@Imsecondlife

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Guyz, m on cloud 9 after reading all ur comments.😃 d story just came from heart,but now i think i have to b careful, coz i have to match up to ur expectations.
I have d whole story in mind,just need tym to pen down.n moreover I have to work on my research project also,so plz just give me 2/3 days n hopefully i'll b able to give u another chapter.

well yes,its not a love at 1st sight story, n Virat did not fall in love with manvi's eyes or hair or antics.he just felt a connection with her through his heart.a connection of pain. & who might know ,this may turn into love in future.but who can b so sure??after all life is sooo unpredictable!! isn't it.

Edited by Imsecondlife - 12 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Disha wonderful updates👏👏.. Loved your style of writing.. Virat's entry was so good 😳.. Loved his bonding with his mom and bro.. Virman first meeting was very unique.. So no love at first sight thing.. Thats really interesting.. Loved the updates.. Really eager to know about their past.. Precap sounds very good.. After reading your note I am even more excited..Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😃

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome update...😊
it was really good...loved virat entry.😉...
So virat have a past and manvi having something painful...interesting...
really loved both the updates..👏...precap is so nice...looking forward for next update...😃
Thank u so much for the pm...😊

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Are seriouly, u r very good writer...cont soon

Originally posted by: Imsecondlife

kya bol rahi hai yaar??? 1more best writer?sharminda mat kar!!!!😳
u gyuz r cho chweet!!! have patience ,u'll get to know abt Manvi.surely will pm u

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Anchal Gulati

@Anchal_Kamli

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OMG!!!!!!!!!! Its Awsomeee... sooo beautifulll...<3
Thnxx alott fr d p.m... plz.. continue soonn...:)

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helina

@helina

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hi Disha... awesome updates both are. Virman r both in pain.some connection they have with pain. Long and two updates at a time. WoW. It will be interesting to read their journey. Glad to see your pm. Hope you update soon.

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

hey loved both the updates...pm me next tym...waiting

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

u say ur nt much of a good writer bt plz dnt say that cuz u really r a great writer according to me the way u've set things out n all really looking forward to reading this SS of urs aaawww virat has a past hope manvi is able to help him overcome it n the same with her that virat helps her with watever pain she is goin through i really love the way u've shown the way they hav connected through thier hearts without even making it love at first sight try n continue as soon as possible n than for the pm😊