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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wow kays!
i loved it
felt really bad for jeevika😭
viren to😡do continue soonn

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karanshalaka

@karanshalaka

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Awesum... luved it... update ASAP... do PM!

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Expressions i had reading this?

🤗

I love you kays!

i am in love with your ideas and your writing.

i could have never thought this will take such a turn and it all looked so so real! i could imagine that whole scene working in front of me,

poor jeevika! and his mesage, argh viren!! i wish you update this so soon -(

and also,

virat , i love this devar ji!!

and the best thing was how you introduced the pregnancy of jeevika!

i hope it works out soon, thank you for the pm!

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ElmWizard5017

@ElmWizard5017

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

THUMBS UP !! 👍🏼

BRILLIANT UPDATE !!

what a story !! i must say 😊

nd the way u have potrayed everyone's feelings and ponit of views makes it all the way more Beautiful !! 😆

Poor Jeevika 😭

Arrgghhh !!! virennn !! couldn't believe the msg was sent by viren 😭

but i am sure that once he understands his mistake , he will be really sorry 😊

moreover he will be on cloud 9 after hearing the wonderful news !! 😉

VIRAT !! VIRAT !! VIRAT !! loved the devar ji !! ❤️

hope to read viren's point of view soon 😉

thanku for the pm nd such a long amazing update 😊

take ur time but still try to update soon ... 😉

kya karon aadat say majboor (greedy for more)😉

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Fari_15

@Fari_15

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Amazing update!!!

Loved it!!

The concept is soo different!

Superb!!

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

OMG...such a beautiful updatee...seriouslyy felt like i was reading a story book in which part 1 got over reallyy fast!!!!! :(

but stil..such a fantabulous updateee...loved itt..reallyy amazinggg...do continueee soon n pls PM me...thnkuuu

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mehwish123

@mehwish123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Ooo it waz amzing luved it updat soon

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Sameeha Anwar

@Sameeha.Tacker

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

It was just fabulous. Your writing skills are awesome man and thanks for the pm. plz update soon and pm me

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

love this stubborn jeevika n very happy that she is pregnant...

i actually wanted viren to tell jeevika that she killed their first child in the show, it would surely bring more n more intense scenes

update please!!!

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

First chapter was just brilliant!

Good news for Virika, Hope Viren knows... fingers crossed

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