SS: What Goes Around comes Back Around: BONUS!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello peeps 😊

So honestly I'm loving this new track and I've been reading a bunch of stories revolving this. Wanted to try my hand at it to. Here's an intro 😉 Tell me if i should continue (it will consist of a few parts only, hence its an SS or short story)

jeevika - "Virenji, listen to me once. Please, you know I would never go against your words"

viren - "Then why did you Jeevika. I didn't expect this from you. How could you do the one thing I asked you not to. Ever since I met you, there were two things that I had asked you for. And you ruined both of them. You killed my child, and you almost took away my badi ma away from me. I can't even stand the sight of you. Leave before I do anything stupid"

jeevika - "Virenji, you .. you just accused me of killing our child? We both agreed at that point of time that"

viren - "Jeevika I don't want to hear your explanation. It's better you leave from my sight"

Before Jeevika could even point back, Viren had left the bedroom. She was heartbroken at what her husband just said. Little did she know that Virat was standing outside their room and heard everything. He knew he had to talk to his brother regarding this. Jeevika just fell down on the ground, not knowing what to do or who to confide in. Was she really that bad?

chapter 1 - page 6
chapter 2 - page 14
chapter 3 - page 20
important note - page 26
bonus chapter - page 34
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start...even i am loving this track though feeling a bit sad for virika...and also loving to read so many ss,os based on it...plz can u pm wn u update it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is absolutely amazing! I would loved to see viren bringing back the talk of the child since we didn't see a lot of him and how he felt at that moment felt so sorry for jeevika hope virat does something plz continue soon and do pm me plz
Edited by Virika_kryanfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy i like it,
continue soon and pm babe, dont wanna miss out on any parts..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intersting..! Thnks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kays m a huge fan of ur stories..😊

and this one is damn interesting...!

plz dear do continue...!

thanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg you have to continue and I love the fact to brought up the abortion ! Please continue soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poor jeevika
ur story is different
so plz continue soon
i loved it
😊 👏 😊 👏 😊 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have loved all the stories you have written..😊
Good update...
Thanks for the PM...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww dis z fantabulous yr... luved it ..wow virat also heard .. i think he will be guilt abt dat abortion ..wow dis ff rocks ...super se uper... luved it..continue soon k..

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