SS - Hamesha Ke Baad Bhi - Part 2 page 9 (03/02) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
The update was superb, awesome, amazing!!!
Loved it!!!
Love ur style of writing!!
The concept of this SS is awesome!!!
Beautifully written!!!
Great job!!
Waiting 4 the next update!!
Continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Okay...After Many Thoughts, I WILL PUT ASIDE THE FACT THAT MANNU IS NO MORE .....Because I dunno yet What will it lead to How it will unfold
& then didi is not what we'd exactly call "ALIVE" ...but irony is that However I wish to, It won't be morally right to hope for her death as well ...coz she holds one more life inside ( Will it be Mannu 😲 , as hinted ) I dunno I mean Baby is already six month so it have got a soul & Our Cutiepies are still Bhatkaofying Ganga Ghat each more Stubborn than other
But I was so wrong altogether...all those telepathic talks were Indeed in their heart...BUTT with Manvi being no more !!
You took their relation To a Whole new level & I liked it...I mean its so pure so profound...& so heavenly , A relation beyond our thinking, Our imagination & not Needy of physical closeness or Communication ...That runs On Just Love...love & Love...Incredible love !!! Love that Makes human God :)
I was reminded of Saaya where John talks to that lady When Manan was talking to Purohit jee ...& Well someone had said
" Death Can't separate two souls as long as they love each other. The ones we love never truly leave us, they live in our heart & Show themselves most clearly in time of need "

I won't say it Isn't kinda ...creepy !! A kind of story that wakes people from sleep at night ...but with JeeMaan, It seems most normal thing on earth , as if its usual for people to talk being one dead & other almost in comma 😆
I used to watch lots of horror & action movies & played Really violent games...that effected me a lot & I just left them altogether. But see how much comfy I am with These two 😆 ⭐️



But Very very beautiful Writing...lot of thought is Required...& You are just going Awesome
Brilliant & binding story + Your Writing Skills + JeeMaan + Bafee ke likhe dialogues = ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Originally posted by: Neha.K.



"Beta jab hum kisi ko bohat pyar karte hain na tab usse door hona bohat mushkil ho jaata hai.. Jaise jaise humara pyar badhta jaata hai, humari aur saamne wale ke dil ki rassiyan majboot hoti jaati hain aur majboot hoke woh ek dusre ko iss tarah jakad leti hain ki uss janjaal se nikalna asambhav ho jata hai'
Aur Jeevika Maanvi ko toh poora Hrishikesh jaanta hai ki woh dono do hoke bhi ek hain'Unki jaan ek dusre mein basti hai' unka pyar pyar nahin hai'pyar toh hum bas insaan se kar sakte hain.. Jab pyar hadh paar kar jaaye toh woh Ibaadat ya Bandagi ki jagah le leta hai' aur woh ibadat ya badagi sirf Bhagwan se hi ho sakti hai' unn dono ke liye woh hi ek dusre ka bhagwan rahi hain'Ibaadat karti hain woh ek dusre ki...Unn dono ka rishta aisa hai ki unhe ek dusre ke baare mein jaan ne ke liye saath hone ki zaroorat nahin padti... unhe lafz instemal nahin karne padte...woh jitna ek saath hoke paas hoti hain usse zyada kareeb woh ek dusre se door hoke hoti hain.. Insaan mar ke bichad sakte hain par Aatma aur Parmatma ko koi juda nahin kar sakta Manan'Tum doctor ho, iss baat pe yakeen karna tumhare liye shayad mumkin nahin hoga.. Par vigyaan se upar bhi ek cheez hai aur woh Bhagwan hai.. Ab tak toh iss baat ko tum jaan hi gaye hoge na' Tum log insaan ke shareer ka ilaaj kar sakte ho.. Par sirf tab jab uss shareer ki aatma chahe

BANGGG ONNN

"Mujhe pata tha tu mujhe yahin milegi",



"AAP SIRF MAUT DEKH RAHI HAIN AUR MAIN APNI AGLI ZINDAGI "

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
full to bomb stylee story..my heart s poundinggg...amazinggg..i have never read a story like this..will read the next part and comment it in detail..brb... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesomeee yaaarr..yeh story pad kr..im getting freaked out for no reason...it reallyy touched my heart..amazinggg yaarr..deffoo..do u continue soon n plss PM me...thnkuu.i will b waitinggg...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Neha dear ...
its awsome update loved it...
carry on 👍🏼






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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
REALLY a great update dear... plz continue ASAP...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
wow awesome update
very emotional
thanks for pm me
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Wow it's amazing keep writing dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
wooow i can imagine them acting this, its fabulous LOOL
xxx
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Amii90

Update reminds of these lines:

Kiye jaa raha hoon sajde par sajde
har baar bas yahi khata kar raha hun
bas ek tere jeene ki khatir
main apne jeene ki dua kar raha hun.


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