The attack - OS (part 5-pg 15 18/2/13) - Page 7

Thanks for the PM!

this was the most different think i read on virika. job well done. please pm me when you update next. i am adding you as buddy, in case that helps in sending out pms.

Originally posted by: Dhoxi

aww it's really lovely :)

Thanks for the pm and how dare i could ignore this os :)

Glad you enjoyed it, and took the time to read it.

Originally posted by: vishwa94

just amazing!! loved it!!

loved hw u described viren's pain n helplessness!!

thanx for pm

Your welcome for the pm.
I'm hiked that you liked this update and could feel Viren helplessness at the given fictional situation.

Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan

you potrayed viren's emotions very well & finally viren found that stupid

Thank you you reading the os and this update. I'm glad you liked Viren's emotions in there. He knew who he was but this was there confrontation as he has come to Jeevika again.

Originally posted by: surbhi1994

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i liked it
continue soon
pm me plz
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Thank you for liking the story and thinking the concept is good.

Originally posted by: shine123

amazing update...

Viren's frustration for not being able to do anything

virat's caring attitude and the special room ...nicely written

then jeevika moving on and Viren and manvi with her ...

then Viren's anger seeing the attacker ...was so natural ...

Thnx 4 d pm...:)

Thanks Shaina for taking the time to read it and comment. Viren as the focal here but Virat was also good. I didn't want Viren to go to Jeevika really in that state but Virat to take Viren somewhere away from his wife. Just to get him sober rather than focus on him drunk.

Originally posted by: urmilsalve

firstly i would like to thank u for continuing this os...u have brilliantally potrayed viren's helplessness andhis anger...keep on updating it...thnx for pm

You don't have to thank me, thank my insanity. However, thanks for reading it and relating to the helplessness that Viren now feels.

Originally posted by: ..aastha..

Interesting. Awesome update.

Thx for the PM.

Thank you for reading and commenting. Your welcome for the pm.

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

wow superb update

loved it, glad that jeevs is getting back to normal

update soon n pm me if possible plz

Glad that you loved it. Thanks for reading it and commenting. I'll be sure to ok if I continue.
We will see where the next step leads us.