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brilliant...kudos to you...flashback scenes were heart wrenching...actually giving me goose bumps...thnx for pm dear
Originally posted by: romanticgurl070
so sad jeevs went so much of pain :(
but viren is always there to make her happy :)awesome update
Originally posted by: MADHU.BARUN
Thank you for such a brilliant update. It was so emotional and painful. The flash back was amazing. Love it to the core. Thanks a ton for the pm!
Those flash back was just awww. Loved it so much. And sorry coz i rarely reply on your post :(
Loved it so much.
Originally posted by: pinky.padda
superb so emotional absolutely loved it thankyou
Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan
brilliantly written...those flashback scene was awesome
Having the recollection of the night right at the end surprisingly works really well. If it had been made explicit what Jeevika went through at the start, I probably wouldn't have felt or understood the predicament you were trying to create for her as well as I have at the end.
Heaven forbid, no one goes through these circumstances, but in just a few words, you've made it so clear and so understated what had happened to her in the context of the story that it really makes you emphasize with Jeevika.Life will never be the same, and that last paragraph just show's the gravity of that. Even though Jeevika went through the physical ordeal, Viren was affected mentally just like her. This does happen to people out there, and no words could ever fully understand or explain the emotional and physical turmoil that people go through, but your story still is quite something."They were able to get through one of their darkest phrases, they saw each other at their worst but with each other's love and support they made it. They could conquer the world, together. "That just pretty much sums up the whole thing, right? It was honestly a gripping story, really making you think. A remarkable piece, wonderfully written; amazing!EDIT: The dust has settled seemed like the most fitting idiom, as now things would move forward. I'm glad that you could feel for all the characters in the story and that those darker shades work well. I would love to see darker tones, executed correctly in the actually show but alas,Rape is not something to be trivialised at all, and I always dislike when it is shown in that way. As you said it is all about trust and trusting again. Someone does a vicious act and takes away the trust you have in people, its that trust that as to be reformed.Stories excel when you can really connect to the characters emotionally, and surprisingly, or unsuprisingly, a darker edge is what makes that connection. There is something in the human nature which inexplicably feels a need to understand or comfort, and I think in regards to your plot basis, that certainly rings true.Couldn't have said it better myself. Once trust is broken, it's incredibly hard to build back up.
Now it is my turn to be speechless. As I can no longer write such a long comment. Sabeeha your words were beautiful and I am honestly happy that many have liked it, as I wasn't sure about it because of the issue at hand. I'm glad you thought that having this flashback to the beginning worked at the end of the story. It wasn't planned that way at all, nevertheless it worked that way. As you said, if this was first and we knew it then the latter secrecy would not have worked as well and turmoil would have been there might it might worked against it.
I'm glad you picked up on the understated as that was my aim. I didn't actually want to drawn attention to the act itself but the ramifications after that for all of them. As even though Jeevika suffered the physical and mental ordeal, she wasn't the only one affected by it. Her husband, sister, brother in law and family would be. I may not have gone into detail about how all of them might fit in but it would still impact their lives and change them entirely. It was something personal that has happened to her which is where you then feel that connect. As you rightly said surprising or unsurprisingly, it is often those darker emotions that draws us in and gives us a connection with a character. As you can connect more with pain that joy.
Originally posted by: Sweety1234556
Your writing style is superb!
I must say,the OS was amazing! It was very different!The emotions were brilliantly portrayed,be it jeevika or viren!Really liked it 😊
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