The attack - OS (part 5-pg 15 18/2/13)

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CoffeeCake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Interesting. Awesome update.

Thx for the PM.

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-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Sweety1234556
Amazing!!!
Ur writing is just fab!!

I could actually feel viren's helplessness,it was all so beatifuly expressed!!

Thank you sweety for reading it and liking the way it was written, especially for Viren as this was more about him.

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-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Virika11

It was outstanding
Your os are different from others
I could feel Viren's helplessness, and the you expressed it, it was fantastic
Keep the good work up
Thanks for the pm

Glad you liked the Os, I know my os's tend to be different compared to others which is why I don't always think they will be liked.

Thanks for commenting and liking this update.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Virika-luv
Awesome update.
Can feel how viren must hav feeling,so helpless
thanx 4 d pm

Your welcome for the pm and thank you for thinking this update was awesome. I'm glad Viren's helplessness came across well.

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-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Kryan4ever
WOW that is acctually amazing !
loved the last bit , hunt you down and kill you !
LOVE VIREN !!

Thank you. We have to see the possessive Viren as well and that is something we could imagine. He may feel helpless but will stand for his wife.

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-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nadianadyne
Wow! Thanks for continuing and for the pm!:)

Amazing update! Love the part where virat feltthat viren was picking up the fight to
feel the physical pain. Poor viren feel helpless. Love how u describe each situation. Could imagine it in my head.

Do continue:) woule love to read morw

Your welcome for the pm. Glad you liked it and how the situation has unfolded for Viren and Jeevika. Glad you liked Virat's insight into his brother as well.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Brilliant! Loved the update! Thanks for the PM!

Your welcome glad you enjoyed this update.

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Shicksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

wow superb update

loved it, glad that jeevs is getting back to normal

update soon n pm me if possible plz

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

superb awesome work viren that showed him

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Madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Sorry for the late replies..thanks a lot for continuing and also for the pm. Viren's frustration and virat's support was beautifully shown. Jeevika insecurity and last part where he threatened to kill him was mindblowing. .superb. do continue and pm me pl when you continue

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